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Micha1005

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Great Update!! Not to bold.really. Could eben be much bolder ;))))

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Shreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

woah that was an intense chapter about desire...

bad gangsta guys can be wild animal in terms of raw passion haan..:P

anywyas be double likey this kickboxing and bad arnav...muahahahah

and poor arnav felt very bad for him!..but finally khushi was sensible enough to not go with the flow ..loved the way she demanded answers regarding their relationship and past from him!

now i just wish and hope that arnav himself tells the real truth to her..rather than getting to know from some one else...which will completely shatter her!...

i dont mind reading love-making scenes...but very very intense one sends me goosebumps...:P...so i would appreciate if it will be in limit..;)

i loved this chapter!...and plss update soon!...and also PM me the next part..:)

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shree99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

u r too cute for words..
I am an adult.. I think u did well staying within boundaries, most 12 yr olds know about these stuff and hopefully shoould be able to differentiate fact from fictin right?

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Kishmish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Loved the hot update ... 😉

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mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

i just read the last two chapters and both were amazing specially the 23rd chapter. it actually made me blush ☺️. OMG Arnav always fell harder whenever Khushi wears RED 😉. It was pretty romantic and sad at the end 😭. for the next chapter i would say write it as you like or as you want. keep up the good work👏👏👏

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kushipugly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Kushi you blew me off!! 👏👏👏👏 thats the reason i always have loved kushi as she has strong values & tradition & is not controlled by her emotions but knows how to control her emotions. LOVE YOU KUSHI!

kusshi has the right to know about arnav ,she loves him dearly & will take him no matter what past or present he has, i m sure of it!

Kushi, just no sex before marriage, you are strong enough to deal anything which comes ahead of you.

WE ARE WITH YOU DARLING, LOVE YOU❤️

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KKG_ASR

@KKG_ASR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

good i liked it.. liked the way you unwrap arnavs emotions...

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Vrushali Naik

@barunlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Oh cum on u r writing a Love story...though m nt very much of a mature content fan...but Love between dem cnt be expressed in one line...der are various ways of expressing their love making u knw...u can obviously use some better phrases which can make all the readers hrts beat along wid ARNAV N KHUSHI!!!!

Loved d way he saw her tear and understood plus asked her d reason b4 flowing away along with his feelings...Its ws so pure!!!!...Beautiful Update!!!! ya n i hope she gets to knw d full truth b4 she gets really intimate with him!!!!