SS : Wooing Khushi : Thread 2: Part 14 on Page 47

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mali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

this is a beautiful story. It is very well written. It touched my heart.

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

loved the update that was so cute loved how he got the the roses and let her sleep on his shoulder and carried her in to the cottage so cute loved the update thanks for the pm

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Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Congratulations on the new thread..

Why aren't you happy with this part? You should be... I loved the mellow, laid-back tone to it.. And the descriptiveness was a plus.. You've set the stage very nicely..

Loved the update! :)

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subiscs

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

aww!!! guess am happy wih this!!! good update ya!!!😊

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applesauce.

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Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Congrats on New Thread.
And I luvd the update..beautiful description.

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devsum

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Wow ! What a honeymoon suite! and u stopped just when the story was getting interesting. Please update soon.

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Onlooker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Congrats on the new thread..

A big teaser update...was spell bound by their bedroom and washroom..

Arnav's gift *ahem*..made me blush like beetroot!!

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Yours is probably the most popular story I have seen in recent times. Don't be so hard on yourself. I found the writing very sensual. Talking about the part were Arnav touches Khushi. Can't wait for the real scene! Magical!