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SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

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They're dark and twisted, but however they are, they're one! Loved it! Wow Arnav did lose it this time no? Kid.., no khushinapping! Hahaha and realization struck khushi fast! I really thought she would bolt though, run from the darkness, bur she basically accepted what she already knew! Theyre meant to be together! Always adore your work!

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Gals

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

awesome Os dear..
dark n lovely..
loved it..
thanxx for d pm.

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S.B.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

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aakriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

heya

awesome..

very unique concept..

loved reading it..

many thanks for the pm..:)

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Cetronia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Wow... That was such wonderful intense OS...I love this dark passionate Arnav who is not afraid to show his real feelings... Ok that being said you have left me hanging for more...please do continue...it was just awesome...can you please PM me,I really appreciate it...

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kajal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

i too thought its shyam...but superb ending

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anodaksgfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

haffieee i totally loved it!!!!

last para---so true and so beautifully written!!

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Banginbengali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Okay hands down by far the most raw...ever changin...amazin piece of your work hands down!! 👏 👏N Eviffie you live in Europe...your so lucky!! Aint it beautiful there!!!??!! 😛 Aggg here its hot as ever lol anyway back to your OS!😆!

Khushi screamin her lungs out...he can hear but still wont leave her because shes engaged...the way he said she cant leave even I got scared 😕...n the kiss...sounded so painful yet so sweet!! 😕 Her bangles breakin...causin her so much pain! 😡 The way you wrote how she was so close to her freedom n then he took her away!! 👏Him wrappin her dupatta n drivin her away!!😲

The most beautiful part...n the way you shifted the emotions was just beautifully done Eviffie!! Super brilliant!! 👏Seein Khushi in that state he just couldnt do that to her...n Khushi realizin she loves this beast...her beast...n the way he let her go...told her to go n turned away from her...I was 😭...n Khushi holdin his wrist n tellin him to fix her up 😳...ufff these two make me wanna hug em!! 😃N the last few lines "Her warmth, his coldness. Her light, his darkness, she his weakness is she. Her strength is he!!"⭐️

Seriously SUPERFANTABULOUS!! You made me go through a roller coaster ride of emotions Eviffie!! I was like this 😡 with Arnav n towards the end 😭 😳 😃!! Seriously a job well done Eviffie!!👏 👏

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Simran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

OMG...that was amazing Haffie:)...totally amazing:)...omg can u please please continue this...if not can you make another DARKER os ...*sigh*...what can I do...imma addicted to ur darkness...omg dark Arnav is effin legit HOT!!!!...

First I thought it was Shyam...and I was like "OH HELL NOOo!...keep your dirty claws off the swan..." but when I realized it was Arnav ...I was like..."Oh ok ...do whatever you like:D"...hahhaha haffie ma gurl...love u:D

-Simran- ( your woman and Esha's cinnamon)