~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 82

Wow ... I just. I have no words for how amazingly breathtaking this fic and all your others have been. Up until now, I've been a very silent reader, but after I read this last chapter (with the recommended instrumental) and it just left me completely and utterly speechless. Every single emotion has been written so well all throughout that believe me, mere rongte khare ho gaye the. Yup. THAT good.

Please update soon!! 😃

Originally posted by: mistyrains

That was one hell of a chapter. Easily the best till now.

Firstly, the songs, both by Coldplay and MPJ had the perfect lyrics for this chapter.

When I was reading the initial parts about Sharman/ Nisha, in Goa, I could literally imagine it all happening in front of me. You are beautifully.

And the next whole part about Khushi. I had this really weird feeling all through my head. Something that will happen when things start happening on the show.

It was heart wrenching and I absolutely love the way you have built up the contrast between all the reasons why he had made her the way she was today and the reasons why she had so hopelessly fallen in love with Arnav.

All what hit me in this chapter how Arnav didn't stop her. I mean I'm sure he had his limitations. I'm just really eager to know why.

And she wanted to harm her self, but she stopped on seeing the red. It is truly beautiful how you used the color red, its significance in A/K 's relationship.

Brilliant stuff Rae. Hats off to you :)

Originally posted by: -Chinnu-

First of all I love the whole Sharman flashback you had! The relationship they had was clearly shown and then when Nisha left his room packing her suitcase ready to leave had me in wonders that after what did happen between them that made Nisha this cold woman who was just getting married because her grandparents wanted it

He didn't stop her when she stepped out of his life but he didn't stop the tears running down from his eyes either as they looked at each other that one last time.

Oh boy, Why didn't he stop her is the question in my eyes! He had the chance to make it all better, to stop her and ask for her forgiveness but he didn't take it. He let it go. Oh why did he do that. Maybe he thought he was not worthy of her love or the misunderstanding that had taken place didn't even get sorted out? Whatever it is you have described Khushi's part fabulously.

Before she remembered red was his favourite colour and her grip loosened, horrified at how intimately connected he was to her.

Even being not with her, he's still with her physically. Khushi has to go and put this act on and I can only imagine how painful and tiring it must be to hide your feelings all the time. The fact that Khushi has caused blood to come out has me worried. She is seriously damaged and she is not going to forgive Arnav soon and I am glad for that because he seriously needs to repent big time for Khushi! Lovely Update as usual.

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update...

very beautifully written..

felt really bad for arnav...my heart went out for khushi..

plzz continue soon

Originally posted by: Inked

That was stunning. Disturbing as you warn--but stunning!

I especially like how you weave the past with the present. That's difficult to do seamlessly, but you have a skill for it. I think it's because you use visual cues to link past and present.

Like the red and the blood and the bit about favourite colour.

Well done.

Originally posted by: Serendipity1018

Such an interesting story! I'm so intrigued to see where you will take this! Lovely writing!

Originally posted by: LondonChick

that was awesome

Originally posted by: sweetlove4barun

amazing chapter...

sorry for the short comment

exams!!!!😭

thnx for the pm😊

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

very beautifully written!

there was an eerie calm in the way u described Khushi's pain!

it was truly a brilliant piece of writing!

continue soon :)

Originally posted by: -Mayuri-

That was amazing! Loved how you described Khushi's pain! Great update!