~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 83

Originally posted by: zaniax

emotional update but u descrie khushi's pov beautifully.

Arnav shud hav supported her, how can he let her go ?

eagerly waitin for d nxt part.

Originally posted by: anumber1

I'm making this a Res (even though I know you hate this) because just as I was about to comment, my friend sent me her thesis to edit. So once I finish with that, I'll update this comment. It might end up being tomorrow morning (or tomorrow night at the latest) though so please don't get mad. 😭

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Right, so done editing. OMG!!! A Sharman and Kushi-centric chpater!! So so glad you showed this. I was like, "When are we going to find out about the other 2?" And their pain is so intense! Kushi becoming a cutter fits because she always felt so deeply (when it came to happiness) so her feeling deeply while in pain can only lead to cutting herself to help her deal with her emotions. Great job there! And the happy memory that became a nightmare for Sharman, I really liked what you did there. When happy, people can never even realize that what they're experiencing can ever be a bad thing in the future. I felt so bad for him when he got up and was still looking around for her. 😭 Great job!

P.S. I knew I called you honeybunches at some point but now I can't remember. Lol, I'm glad you picked it up (truthfully, I picked it up from my older sister who likes to call my 2 younger siblings and me random cereal names. Fruit loops, honeybunches (of oats), frosties, etc. lol 😆)

Originally posted by: kitzdoll

wow it was awsuuum...loved it..poor khushi is goi g through soo much pain...it was mind blowing n thnx 4da pm dear...

Originally posted by: Shruti_P

OMG it was awesome Rae
The way I described khushi's emotions it was just brilliant
I can really feel the pain
Both Arnav n Khushi are suffering since separating but y do I feel that Khushi is suffering more
And that knife thingy was Khushi trying to kill herself ??
Wat would have happened if buaji haven't called her up
Somebody should keep an eye on her she is becoming self destructive
All in all a great update
Continue soon

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Well done Rae👏...I felt her turmoil...and her need and want for it all to END!!! His marriage is taking a toll on her that even she was not aware of!! A pa😭rt of me almost wanted her to go thru with it...hoping perhaps that its news would incite him to react...

Originally posted by: -Dee-

I read this chapter last evening but didn't trust myself enough to comment on it. Not that I trust myself now. But I wanted to get this one over with.

I am unable to single out emotions that I am feeling on behalf of Khushi and for myself - is it anger or just love or pain or anguish. She knows he loves her.. I know that. But I find it incredulous that he let her go just like that. Wonderful writing, Rae. Umm..Looking forward to reading more!

Originally posted by: aakriti120

heya rae

awesome update..

very well written...was really emotional..

i felt bad for sharman's state too..

and khushi..poor her..loved the way you described her life with arnav..

the knife part was very well described..

just left me wondering what khushi wouldve done had buaji not called her..

you were so true..i seriously wish i havent wished for khushi's part..it was really heartbreaking to read..

outstanding job..

many thanks for the pm..:)

continue soon..

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

Hey Rae 🤗

First of all I'm really sorry for commenting so late..I had an important exam so I was a bit busy.

Part 6:

Honestly..I was not interested in reading this chapter in the beginning coz of two stupid families forcing two people for marrying each other for their sake. Why isn't arnav saying anything to his family? And how can nani let Nisha stay at RM..she created such a big issue of Lavanya's stay then why a special treatment for Nisha? I hate Nani, Anjali, Shyam & Nisha's grandparents too. 😡

Frankly, I don't like Nisha too...she is so..ughh!! I don't know what to say. (I sound like a universal hater 😆 )

God why did she say yes..

I love the fact that each & every thing reminds arnav about khushi..Good!! He deserves this..😡 No but I can't hate him..😳

The small description of khushi made go awww...you write everything so beautifully.

I loved the flashback & arnav keep regretting..this is what you get when you trust your good for nothing sister blindly.

I think I should shut up now.

Part 7:

Nisha & sharman's story is cute. But why is Nisha so strange. I thought she became strange after her heartbreak but she seems to be full of attitude from the beginning of her life. Not that I'm complaining.

Finally!! A whole chapter on Khushi. She had to go through so much coz of that creep..& nani how could she? I know anjali was heartbroken & all that but khushi was nowhere at fault. *sigh*

I loved the way Khushi connected her past with the present.

"Before she remembered red was his favourite colour and her grip loosened, horrified at how intimately connected he was to her".

I loved these lines..Beautiful.

Damn..she acts all happy happy in front of her family. I felt so sad for her.

Continue soon.

P.S.-Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal

just read d last 2 chaps..
sorry for d late comment..
awesome updates..
loved it..
thanxx for d pm.

Originally posted by: Audiwalia

Its awesome ff... So when khushi nd came face to face again...