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Originally posted by: mishti_17

Amazing update.. Khushi's pain of him giving her place to someone else is heartwrenching.. She remembering all those moments.. I was so lost in the update.. Great job.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: psarada

Read the last 2 chapters now. I am still taking slow on Sharman and Nishi love story but you have Khushi's pain down to T. I definitely would feel what Khushi is feeling now if the man I loved didn't for once put me first in his list of important persons. I so wish they show this on the show. I would really love to see Arnav fighting for Khushi in front of his family and defending her. Nice story. I just want to see both of them meet and just the dhamaakedaar confrontation. Update soon.

Originally posted by: multifaceted

Wow that was intense...liked the way you showed Arnav's good and bad points..gave an entirely different feeling...awesome job..thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: barunxoxo

the way you've described khushi's pain is just beautiful.it was so intense! you're an amazing writer! you've done an awesome job giving complete justice to her character! update it soon!:)

Originally posted by: dumas

shit khushi is a cutter ( a person who cuts their self to feel to know to try to feel something they hide their pain and cut themselves on their legs or anyplace that can be hidden or explained away) arnav screwed up and innocent girl i just want her to be happy screw asr just let her get someone to bring baby kkg loved the update very heartbreaking and emotional the pain she is going through was intense and perfectly describe loved it thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: meera30

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2" color="#000066">Shivers!</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2" color="#000066">What has become of Khushi! When you read what she is thinking, you can feel the pain slicing through her heart as if it is in your own.</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2" color="#000066">I am...I don't know...numb for now. Let me come back to this story</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2" color="#000066">It was brilliant by the way! Dark and yet it was totally what the story needed.</font>

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So I've read it 3 more times since the time you posted it. She wouldn't have gonethroug with it. Not even if the blood hand,t been drawn. Even if she is broken, she is Khushi. And that's a strong girl we are talking about. Even if she is not as overtly strong as Nisha.

And I cannot wait to find out a little more about Sharman. Doesn't feel like Nisha would have loved a lesser man. What happened there?

Originally posted by: nimra21

Great chapter. All four of them are suffering equally. You have written about the pain of each character extremely well. Kudos!

I will be irregular on IF for the next six weeks or so owing to exams so I might not not be able comment regularly. Feel from to remove me from the PM list. I'll add the PM account again once I am back. :)

Originally posted by: fatima2603

That was done and handled so well. I completely understood the emotions Khushi was feeling. Well done for handling the situation so well!

I can't believe Arnav was so cowardly...poor Khushi!

I'm intrigued by Nisha and Sharman's relationship...but can't help it but hate Nisha a little (she might be lovely for all I know but I'm a hopeless romantic!)