~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 80

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Ah. You have hit the nail on the head with the comparison between Arnav and Sharman. Good job! :D

And Thank You! :)

Glad you liked this chapter and if you did feel the way you have described reading this then thank you because that was the intention.

And I love this song! One of my very likable sad songs.

Originally posted by: Gargee

Okay. That's it.

Next time I am sitting down to read this story- I'm getting a whole box of tissues with me! Gosh! What a deep and dark chapter Rae! 👏

It was so Brilliant- I cried half for the plight of Khushi and half for the sheer brilliance of the story telling!!😆

You've put me in a morbid mood now... My hands are itching to write something equally sad... *Sigh*

Well... Off to write it down... and I blame you for this!! But Oh Well... Writing a story like that comes with its own by-products eh? Eh? *Wiggles eyebrows*😆

Anyways- Love you for this!🤗 Keep Writing Hon- and Keep Updating Fast... Thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: PixieFlame

Wow!

You write very well, I get absorbed into your story!

Keep updating :)

Originally posted by: curledup

I cried a heart wrenching cry, my hand was over my mouth the whole time. Itvwas as if I was waiting for her to cut herself I cant take it this is way too much pain for both of them! especially khushi...how could he just stand there? this was so gut wrenching! the way all the emtions weee written was amazing like I have told yoy many times before but I am going to tell you again the structure of all the chapters is amazing

Everything is a m a z i n g everything was captured so stunningly, Arnavs fault is his own he should have stood there like a man and now he is suffering for his own mistake, that was almost a subtle reminder but exelantly put! The way you dealt with this mature concept was s t u n n i n g! this is my favourite chapter by far

wait so sharman was also a coward?

Can't wait for the next chapter :D

-Aashifa

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

That was some fabulous stuff you wrote, Rae! 👏

Nani was the villain, then! 😡

Poor, poor Khushi! 😭

And Arnav was rendered weak by the situation. . .

😭

Thanks for the pm. . . . 😃

Originally posted by: Firebolt

That was definitely your best chapter yet (I figure there are more to come...)

The bit about Khushi's anguish definitely moved me...The pain... her helplessness...it was very much palpable... Kudos to your writing skills...

And as for Arnav.. he should have gone after her but i do understand where he's coming from... he's completely convinced that the only way she'll be happy is away from him...

Great Chapter!

Cheers

-Shri-

Originally posted by: Ri_luvs_ArShi

That was such a great and depressing part.

Khushi's feelings were well described.At first when I began to read the chapter I thought Khushi is living in Goa but then I read Sharman and was a bit relieved that it was his flashback😆

I am sure that Arnav didn't stop her because he thought that she deserves someone better.

Looking forward for their meeting...but I think for that I will have to wait for a long time😊

Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl

My heart broke for Arnav when I read the last chapter but Khushi's thoughts had me shivering.

Wow! This is one of the best that I have read so far.

I could see her relieving the painful past again and again.

And the bit about the knife...ooohhh a little scary but I know Khushi is not one to take the coward's way.

Sorry for the late comments, been terribly busy.

Hope I am forgiven

Originally posted by: kritz11

Oh so it was Nani all the while who couldn't stand Khushi in her house!
I assumed it would be Anjali...and really sad that Arnav wouldn't do anything to save their love,but why?
I really loved how you have contrasted between the shaitan and rajkumar when Khushi was pondering about her lost love. It was very touching👍🏼 and her current frame of mind is understandable...

Originally posted by: archielicious

hey.
once again brillant part.
thoug sharman and khushi's feelings were sad bit..
but i got more closer to the story.

continue soon.

tc