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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Another brilliant update. From what I've gathered, Arnav has scarificed his love for Khushi for something to do with his family. Nisha may have done the same thing as well. Somehow I believe Nisha's sacrifice had to do with some social-class issue. Khushi is now thinking that Arnav has moved on completely, while him on the other hand is praying that she comes back. I don't blame her for leaving him but what's the use when they're both miserable. Thanks for the PM and please continue. This is quite a gripping story. There is so much more I want to say but I will reserve some of it, your writing causes that😆. Loved it

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Your writing is really staying true to the title. Arnav and Nisha both want to be with some one else.

Edited by april2003 - 13 years ago

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Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

That was amazing!

Loved reading how you are weaving the past with the present, how their choices have an affect on themselves, as well as those around them.

I loved the added touches of Armaan and Ridhima in the story, as well as Shashi.

This chapter was mostly to introduce us to the pain of Nishi, however the last few sentences left an impact on me of the amount of pain Khushi is suffering through, but hiding behind the facade of happiness and cheeriness.

This line really stood out. Especially since the last episode was all about Khushi lying to her mother - a girl who could hardly lie about the tiniest of things, was lying about something as big as marriage.

His daughter had learnt to lie.

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appy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
Celebs I see as Sharman and Nisha

Sharman as I imagine him to be

Gaurav Khanna (He played a role in 'Kumkum' by the same name but thats where the similarity between the two characters end)

I dont have a celeb equivalent to Nisha...she is in my head but I cant sketch that good. :p

So you can imagine her as whatever she comes into your head but please not Nargis Fakhri (@Appy :p)! I cant stand her. :p

Okay, Baba! Got the message! Will never even think of her when i'm reading any post by you! :P :D

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Deeksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

Nisha and Sharman - the other part of the story. There is so much of pain here and a sort ruefulness. Nisha's recollection of her earlier engagement and the formality in her and Arnav's 'relationship' too shows that. Looking forward to know what that text is for.😊

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Harshitha Shankar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Okay, I'm heavily confused now!!
I think I'll have to read this from the start, once again!! 😕
You're writing style is awesome, bey...
Bas mera dhyan nahi lag raha.. Iss vacation ke vajay se...

Ek baar main waapas aajaoon, tab Ek baar phir padhoongi... Theek hai?
Bas ghussa mat hoyiye, meri maa!! *doing a bhaktipoorvak namashkar* 😳

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: appy_12
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Oh yea!! Oh yea.. I'm first, I'm first!! :D :D

So four hearts are broken here.. Their hearts and thoughts are always occupied by someone, while they are actually with someone..! It's sad..

And I've decided I like Nisha! She's intelligent, she fell in love, she's strong and shows signs of being lovable! So, I like her..

Sharman.. You know I imagined him as Sharman Joshi in his Life In A Metro Look.. And Nisha is Nargis Fakhri.. All in my head! :P :D

And at last, we have a look at khushi's life.. She is with her Bauji.. Good good.. The last few lines were beautiful..

The father-daughter bond is something else, and you captured it beautifully! :)

Continue soon, Rae! :)

Yep 4 broken hearts, each with a story which I hope you will like to read. :)

Glad you like Nisha! She is my OC so of course I am glad! ;) :D

And we have already talked about the celebs so no point discussing it further! :p

And yes...Babuji and Khushi bond is a very pure nice one so I thought of exploring it a bit. Glad you liked it! :)

Thank You for the comment, Appy! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: meera30
So much progress, Rae

We meet Nishi and Sharman (who i like too, by the way - seems like an easy going guy)

And even Armaan and Riddima get introduced.

Khushi is here and changed. But still pretending to be theek - Khushi style!

Loved the chapter

Thank You, Meera! :)

I love how everyone has started calling Nisha 'Nishi' just after one time I used it...seems like the happy Nisha attracts them more...or maybe I am going ahead of myself. :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: -Zara-
ok i'll tell you what i know and please tell me if i'm right for now, lol.
arnav and khushi have split.
arnav thinks khushi is dead/missing
arnav is getting married again soon and is now engaged to the nisha lady.
khushi ( who isnt dead or missing) sees arnav getting engaged and is dying inside.
or and sharman is nisha's past man.

i'm following right? or am i totally off.LOL

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I am not answering anything as of now (Muahahahaha! ;) :D). I will let the updates answer your questions. :)

Thank You for commenting and for all these predictions! Its nice to know my readers are involved in the story! :)