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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#451

This is sooo damn interesting!!!

im eager to noe wat xactly happened between Arnav & Khushi..n why is he gettin married?

i guess will hav to keep wondering till u update 😛.eagerly waiting & thanx for d pm :)

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#452

I couldn't log on to IF for two days and when I do I receive two updates for this fic, I open it eagerly and I find out my whole recognition of the characters is wrong!!😕😆 That girl was not Riddhima too!! Though baffled initially, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and ya Nisha and Sharman get a👍🏼 Lots of progress to keep my mind churning😆

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#453

I always said to myself I will find an author who will make me so apart of their work and will make me feel so I cant even describe that feeling but I think no wait I am certain Rae I just found her!

its you :D

the way you write everything the beauty the pain the anguiish! I feel like I am a part of thos story more than the characters I feel like I am literally a part of it a and wathcing them destroy themselves I feel their pain and their wmptions I feel what they feel and see them create havoc I can lieterally picture everything in my head and beliwve me when I say this I have never found such an author who has madee feel like this.. You are unbelievably gifted dont trifle with it! I cannot name what it is about your writing but its something Rae I can see it picture it and feel it! :D

Coming to the chapters I must say and I have aaid thia before that the way you structure it all is. such an added element and makes everything stand out! its stunning! Now I dont know if anyone else noticed but I did that subtle comparison you done with nisha and khushi was so well put and then that hot flashback to the cold present, it was a sibtle but well put difference! Aah NIsha I want to hate her and not like her but somehow I feel like she is a culprt to something and everyone is doing an Arnav- meanong they are seeing what they want to see and not what she is showing them,make sense?

Im happy Arnav did not give up and he actually went looking for her, wait is she actually getting married or is he thinking she is? and Arnav for flip sake stop wallowing in self pity man the heck up! Phew I needed to rant that out!

the last paragraph from this chapter was...I was bowled over! way bowled over I cant even, I dont know it was really really good << that word does not do justice to this chapter but thats all I can think of!

*sigh* Is Emotion Ko Kya NAam Do!

Bte this was written off my phone forgive my mistakes!

-Aashifa

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

Four hearts broken :(
i realLy loveD the way u added the flashback in between, it kinda gave the feel like tv and i could totalLy imagine them!
so sharman and nishi were engageD, i realLy am curious to find ouT, what happend between them!
and the lil flashbk brought tears in my eyes! *yes yes i tend to be too much emotional*
and khusi is so like her, even though her heart is breaking she still wants to see every one happy!!
and u introduceD armaan and riddhima, i cant wait to read their part ;) *they are definately one of the four couples :P*
and that guy perfectly fits to be sharmaan! i imagIne sharman to be jolly kind :D
that was beautifully written Rae! every emotion brilliantely penned!
loved it ! thanks for the pm :)

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#455

Nice to see all your characters in place.

It gives a good framework for the story.

I like that you brought back that beautiful relationship between Khushi and Shashi--especially his concern for her and that she has now begun to hide the truth from him.

Suggests how broken she is.

Looking forward to more.

Edited by Inked - 13 years ago

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#456

So Arnav Khushi Nisha and Sharman... Arnav and Khushi love each other and Nisha and Sharman seem to have been in love but Arnav and Nishha are getting married... Did i get everything till now? So much drama.. And i absolutely LOVE drama!

So till this point is the story same as the show ? Like the contract marriage etc?

Aw you buddied me.. very sweet of you hon.. 😊

-edit-

I knew that 😆

Edited by Firebolt - 13 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#457

Hey Rae 🤗

I am loving this FF..I am really sorry for not commenting on part 2, 3 & 4. I was quite busy so I wasn't able to comment but now I'll comment for all the three parts. So here you go-

Part:2

Yay!! we got to know about arnav khushi..I was so excited..they loved each other..OMG!! I am so happy..but they are divorced..WT*

The chotu sa flashback was really intense...but I loved how arnav touched his cheek to remember her touch. 😍

Aww...I so want them together.

For a moment I thought that arnav has changed when he didn't shout at aman but...my hopes went down the drain. 😆

He still loves her..then why did he agree to marry some other girl?

I loved part 2..It gave us an idea about their past.

Part:3

OMG..its time for the engagement already!!😲

This girl seems to have a bad past too..who is she btw??

So she has an attitude of her own..nice.

OMG..I swear I thought about teri meri as soon as she wore a green saree..Sweet happy days *sigh*

Ummm...she doesn't gel well with anjali..I guess.

So both of them are not interested in each other..that's great!!

Arnav is only thinking about Khushi..he has no idea what is going around him..Wake up dude!!

Nisha Francia Oberoi..Who is she?? I was imagining riddhima as his fiance from the beginning. Can you post a picture of this nisha girl,if you have someone in mind..it would be great if you can.

Part:4

Sharman?? So she loved him & he ditched her. Sad. They got engaged too😲 So is this her second wedding too?

They both (Arnav & nisha) sound like a boring & heartbroken couple.

Yay!! Dr.kirti & riddhima are there..I am so happy.😆

Babuji & khushi convo was intense,he knows she is lying..poor soul..she must have suffered a lot.

I think I should stop my bak bak now.

Please continue soon. I'm loving it.

P.S.- I loved all the songs you have used especially I'm here without you..I love that song.

P.P.S.-This is the longest comment in my commenting history. 😆

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#458

Rae
I hope you're not too angry with me for not commenting for the last few parts, so I hope I can still hug you🤗 And Im seriously very very very sorry Rae for not commenting earlier !!
And as for the FF where it was in the beginning and very it is now, well I simplylove it Rae !!
The way you introduce characters is so damn amazing it has my heart going dhak dhak dhak even after 10-15 mins of reading your updates and that whats takes me so much time to post my comment !! So what you see now will be a combined comment for all Ive missed and all well even if I've written, im writing again in a flow ok... So please bear with me !1
Well first of all I guess Im damn happy for the way you paved way for Khushi;s entry into the chapter just at the end of it with her eyes !!Oh man those are eyes to die for ...And so I was kind of right...I guessed it cant be Khushi so unwilling to Arnav so immune to him anyway, but then I had my doubts...But I guess thats ok...
And I love Ms.Oberoi the colder female version of ASR !! And I guess its gonna be the clash amongst equals when these two are together I mean till they are together which I practically guess is gonna be for some time in your FF !! And Sharman , so he loves Ms.Oberoi ... and she got out of the relationship cause she thought he was weak...wonder what the exact story behind it is though !!
And why exactly are all MS.Oberoi's friends so cold too her ??Some damn secret Im getting curious to learn about...and we also have Armaan-Ridhima in this...wowwiiieee *does a little happy dance*
So this FF has just mixed up so many emotions of such starkly contrasting characters...And the way the true lovers are, each so different from the other... their closeness perished them as much as them as much as their distances are doing right now !!I wonder what exactly must be going on in Khushi's mind... and btw thinking about it, Does Arnav know where Khushi is or are there certain missing links between these two ??
But you know the best part about A/K is they dont need people to tell them...they are like magnets so unlike each other and thats probably why they are so attracted to each other...And you just bring that part out so amazingly Rae...I love you.And this kind of wriitng suits you more I guess, the sadly happy ones just look even more beautified ... The other works are good too but if some reader wants to tryreading your things for the first time, they've got to read the sadly-happy ones of yours !! (just my personal suggestion , no offence 🤔)
Amazing FF its turning up Rae !!
Love you
❤️

PS: btw just wanna say sorry again for not commenting soon, and ya ofcourse For you a thousand times over !! Any no of scraps and comments just to see you happy🤗 ( wickedly for more updates for me😆 )

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#459

And there's the fourth character!
Well I really don't know what to expect at the moment because there are still too many unanswered questions but I know u r building towards it! Hence I sit back and wait patiently till then !!
But the chapter was penned beautifully and we finally got a glimpse of Nisha's past!
Continue soon!

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#460

I'm still trying to get all my thoughts together after that wonderful update.

"I hate myself for falling in love with you - someone so weak, so defeated, such an imbecile. Trust me when I say I will find someone twice the man you are. Now get out."

These words are so strong, piercing, I can't begin to imagine how Arnav must have felt hearing them and how Khushi managed to say them at all. But you have done perfect justice in describing both of their thoughts.

Also, Armaan's sauce-prank and Dr. Kirti, Riddhima, 'nostalgia', brings back so many memories.

Shashi scrutinizing Khushi's face, I felt really, I don't know, a bit sad?

Also, Sharman is hot as hell. Eager to know more about him. And I hate Nargis Fakhri too :P

Brilliant update as usual. Following which, update soon 😊

And great song choices, 😃