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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
part 2
awesome...
Geet and her luggages...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: valli22

congrats for ur ff
interesting start..
golmaal acha hai..
i guess they are going 2 do golmaal n
geet will marry maan not devv
so golmaal..better choice
...




thank u so mch
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: dona86

congrats on the new ff

interesting start
name ...GOLMAAL😆😆

thanksss
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: AliaSharma

loved it... 😃
cont. soon.

thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
hey dear...!!!!!
i jst read ur all wrks all r nyc...!!!!
plz add me in ur pmlist...
dis stry is awesum...it's name is goolmaal...
dere must b sum goolmaal in dis ss...
egarly waiting for nxt part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26



😃PART 3😳




Maan was trying hard 2 get think of some plan to get rid of that Dev.Huh...He hated that piece of shit.How Dare he think that a guy like him...especially a
hopeless,irresponsible,pathetic guy like him can marry Geet...his Geet.Maan clenched his fists tightly as he remebered Geet's engagement with that son
of a bitch.Maan jst wanted 2 beat him to death for even thinking about his Geet...



Maan " calm down maan...ab josh se nahi hosh se kam karneka waqt hai...U really need to do somethings quickly ..warna..." He can't even think what'll
happen if he can't break this marriage."no maan think possitive waise bhi negative soch soch u ruined life to this extense k aaj u have to fight
for your love jo hamesha se tera hi tha.." He sighed & started pacing one corner to the other corner of his room."soch maan...soch...think...dude think
..." While walking Maan knocked a glass out of the side table.He looked at the glass which was now at floor spreading water on the floor.He was taken back to
the memory where he meet his life his angel for the first time...


FLASHBACK



1 year back...


An Audi was making it's ways among the beautiful weather of Swizerland.It was cutting the air with with a great speed & with it's own accord making everyone
believe that whoever was driving this car have his own ways of life.He doesn't care a bit what people think of his actions & what may be the consequences
of his deeds.He does things coz he likes them to do.He lives his life the way he likes.


A guy In his early tweenties having a stylish spec on his eys said in a typical british accent " maan what the hell r u doing...? Maan plss yr slow down..
dekh abhi tak meri sadi bhi nahi hui shadi kya sagai bhi nahi hui...plss yr samja kar..." Maan just smiled at Adi's antics.He was indeed a master piece made
by GOD.But whatever he says,whatever he does he'l always remain Maan's best friend & no one can change that.Adi looked at Maan who was smilling like
some kind of comedy show is going on."Maan pss slow down dude.Ur flight is 2 hours away.We can reach there on time even if u drive sanely..." Maan smiled
pulling out his goggles saying "i knw but guess what i can't wait to meet my family ..." Saying this Maan drove the car in a higher speed giving Adi
another heart-attack.


Finally Maan was on the plane which was heading Delhy where his family resides.Ahhh...Maan has waited a lot to go back to his family.He came here 6
months back to get some inspiration for his next exhibition for painting.He tried a lot to get a theme which will touch peoples' heart as well as his.But...
...u know u can't have something when the Gods don't want u to have that.So after spending 6 whole monthes in this paradise,meeting with different people,
seeing some of the most amazing places...he still couldn't find anythg inspiring.Tht's the reason he was going back home to give his family a surprise.


Maan's thoughts were haulted when the airhostress asked if he would like to have somethg with a extra smile on her face.Maan gave her his million bucks smile
refusing her offer & looked around to see all the female attraction overing over him.He chuckled shaking his head knowing his effect on girls.He was a
reknowned artist & belongs from one of the richest family of the world & was amazingly good looking,so he is used to these kind of attention.And swearing to
God he loved it...


Maan was standing in front of the huge wooden doors of his house.Ohhh,,he missed home.After the hectic hours of flight he was finally home.But before he
could ring the doorbell he was drenched with black paint.He couldn't understand his position at first but when the reality sunk in he was furious.He
immediately looked up only to find a girl who was on the terrece of his home & was looking at him with a horrifying expression.Maan looked at with
murderous eyes & enterend the mansion...


Nakul came running to hear the doors being opened.He was shocked to see a guy who was drenched in black paint entering the mansion."arey ap ho kon aur
ap aise..." His words died in his mouth when Maan wiped his face with his hand."arey Maan sir ap... yeh kya hua..." Dadima came down & saw Maan in that
state & was surprised beyond her imagination.Controling her laughter she managed to say "Maan...beta ap kab aye aur yrh sab...??" Maan threw his bag away
shouting "yeh sab uss ladki ki waja se hua..." Dadima Narrowed her eyes saying "ladki...???"


Geet came down running holding tiffin closer to her & saw the damage which was caused by her & tiffin.She knew on whom she dropped the paint,who doesn't
know him.She also Knew her doom was coming close to her.Maan looked at the girl who was now standing on the stairs & immediately recognized her.
"she...she is the one...who the hell is she ...???...aur yeh humare ghar me kya kar rahi hai...???" Dadima looked at Geet
who was now on the verge of crying & again looked at Maan who was on the verge of exploding.She sighed not knowing what to do


Precap



mafi mafi time & some present moments
Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
after a long time u updated
maneet meet was awesome
geet drenched him in paint
n she was literally shaking seeing his anger
nice part👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awesome update..
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
awesome dear n thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Lovely part...
loved their first meeting,..

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