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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

part 3
nice part...
think his inspiration is at his home itself...
cont soon dear...

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Sia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

awesome

maaneet ki first meeting voh bhi aisa😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I have send u buddy request ...

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Tarina Rahmsn Totine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

First of all I hope u all remember me & U guys can all throw at all jutis,tomatos,sada hua anda etc.I knw should hav updated long ago but i was so caught up in studies for my entrance xm.But Nw
tht i am admitted in a university at an awsome subject CSE.But immediately aftr tht my mom got admitted in hospital 4 a operation tht's y i couldn't update.I m so
sorrryyy.But nw i m bck i want to continue all my writings.But i want all of ur support.So if i get sum liks & commnts in this update,thr'l b
a update daily frm my side.I promise.

😳PART 4😳

Maan comes out of his past with the wetness he felt under his feet coz of the water mug he had knocked out.He shakes his head getting out of the sweet memories which was
now his most essential part of his life." Ab yeh sab sochna band karna de Maan..concentrate on wht u should do nw...How u can snatch ur own lif 4m tht A**H***..."

The Nxt morning,Sun was shinning with it's full glory,spreading il's light on Handa Haveli.Geet comes out of the washroom wiping her hairs.Her mind is occupied with the thought
on what Maan is going to do."Na jane kya karne wale hai...woh..waise bhi inka demag sudha toh chalta nahi...humesha teda hi chalta hai...i hope jo bhi kare usme
Handas or Khuranas ka reputation kharab na ho..par woh jo bhi kare jaldi kare ...coz i can't evn thk of any future whr he is nt with me" But Geet's thking halted whn
two strong arms encircled her 4m back.She doesn't need to turn bck to knw who tht person is.She can recognize his touch evn if she is in death bead.Maan " kis k
bare me socha jaa raha hai..." Saying he paced a wet kiss on Geet shoulder..sucking the water drplets. Geet shudders a little with his touch. But controlling
her erotic heart beats she turns to face Maan saying "aapne hone wale pati k bare me soch rahi hu...u knw...Dev Signhania.." Maan tightens his hold around Geet saying
"bojot ho gaya Geet...nw it's enough...firse uska nam nahi lena...u jst belong to me..." Geet "kyun...uski nam ka ring mere hath me hai...shadi hone wali hai..
toh uska nam mere zuban se hi ayega nah..." Maan holds Geet possesively & brings her more close to him saying " u jst belong to me...jab tak main zinda hu...no one
i repeat no one can snatch u away 4m me".Geet was going to answer him but a knock on her door disturbed thm.Geet panicks looking at the door while Maan jst remains calm
looking at her face.Geet "Maan choro mujhe...koi hai darwaze pe..agar hume aise dekh lia toh shamat aa jayegi..." Maan "as if i care..aur agar dekh le toh accha hi
hai ...sab problems chutkki me solve.."Geet lookes at Maan in disbelieve saying "app pagal ho gaye ho kya...choro mujhe..." The knock on the door inceaesed as the time
passed...Geet "plss...Maan...choro nah.." Maan "Thik hai...i'l leave u on one condition..pehle bolo u belong to only ME.." Geet glares at Maan saying "kabhi nahi..."
Maan "thik hai..nahi choruga" The sound of the knocking on the door made Geet more nervous.Geet sighed knowing Maan & his stubberness.Geet 'Thik hai...bolti hu.."
Maan smirked & made a innocent face saying "bolo..bolo.." Geet "woh woh...main..main..." Maan pulls Geet chin up to look into her eyes saying "hmm..tum...age bolo
geet.." Geet gets lost in Maan's eyes forgetting all her gussa...all her tantrums...all her narazgi...saying "main sirf apki hu...sirf apki..." Maan smirked pecking
geet's lips & flew away from there through a balcony.Geet comes back to her senses hearing her mom,Rano's voice who is calling her 4m along time. Geet self thought "
jhalli kahiniki...humesha kho jate hai unki akho me...firse khona mat.."Geet opnes the doors to find her mom standing there with a smile.Geet "srry..maa..woh washroom
me thi tht's y darwaza khol me tim lag gaya.." Rano " It's oky..beta...jaldi niche chalo...Dev aya hai..." Geet jst nodes her head & starts getting ready to go
downstaires.

Geet & her whole family was sitting with Dev & his whole family.Geet is looking jst downwards & cursing her luck.Elders are busy in discussing
The marriage plans.Dev is busy admirring Geet & grinning at her foolishly. He is so in love with this girl evn before he was in school.
He is feeling blessed to hav her in his lif.Maan is busy
shooting draggers at Dev 4m the corner of the hall.Maan murmmers in a low voice"how dare he evn thk tht he can hav His Geet.."
Maan was busy with his cursing programme whn Dev's driver Brought the choclate cake which Dev brought 4 the whole family.Maaneet lookes at the cake & thn lookes at
each othr.Thy were again drifted to past where there first rothna manana held...

FLASHBACK

Maan was in his room after washing of the blck paint.He was so angry on tht girl.But becoz of his dadima he couldn't say anythg.he respected her a lot & he can't go
against her.So whn he asked him to calm down,he couldn't help it.He was here aftr such a long time & his Dadima took tht stranger's side.He was so much pissed of r8
now.He wanted to surprise Dadima & got a shocking surprise himself.He was wipping his hair vigorously to lose his anger.Dadima looked at Maan 4m far away.She knew he
was angry.She didn't knw whtactually happened but had an idea tht may b Geet was behind it.Becoz the way Maan was shooting daggers at Geet cleared it.
ut whtevr happened she was sure tht Geet didn't do it on purpose.She again looked at Maan who was nw taking his anger on a poor canvas fiiling it with a rage
in his mind.She sighed knwing his anger.No one can calm him down .But only if the reason behind of his anger apologizes,he can be handled.So,tht's y dadima was now
on her way towards Geet's room to knw the whole story behind the blck paint.

Geet was crying silently.She came to knw 4m Nakul tht the person who was drenced in blck was none othr than MAAN SINGH KHURANA,the youngest princ of this
palace & now was mentally cursing herself " kya zaarurat thi...tiffin k piche aise bhagne ki...iss ghar k ladle pe black paint gira dia,,
woh bhi pura ka pura..ek do drop nahi pura dibba daal diya..aur agar unone mujhe ghar se nikal dia toh...hey Babaji...main kya karungi kaha jayungi
" geet wiped her tears whn she saw Dadima cuming towards her. Dadima (DM) smiled & sat beside Geet.She affectionately touched Geet's head saying.."kya hua...mera
bacha..itna upset kyun hai...' Geet ouldn't control anymore.She badly needed sumone to share her pain.She had been brought up lik tht.Some one was always thr
to share her pain.First time in her lif she was alone & she did such a big mistake.She hugged DM cring " mane sach me jaan buj k woh nahi kia woh..woh..galti se ho gaya.."
DM smiled hugging Geet bck saying.." i knw beta app jan buj k kuch nahi karenge...but hua kya tha...yeh toh hume batayien.." Geet broke the hug & started telling dadima
all the story.DM jst laughed hearing it & said "toh yeh baat hai...yeh tiffin bhi nah bara shaitan ho gaya hai.." Geet looked down saying "kya woh maanji
bohot naraz hai..???" DM shook his head in yes saying "han woh toh hai...unka gussa bada jaldi charta hai...par ek idea hai...unke gusse ko kam karneka..ap woh
tarika azmana chati hai..."Geet noddded her head in affirmative.DM "thn follow me..."

Geet was now standing on the doorstep of Maan's roon with a black forest cake.DM helped Geet to make a cake which was according to her Maan's temper buster."How can a
cake make a person feel god..???" Gett had no idea but she trusted DM.So now she was gathering her courage to knock on the door.Geet suddenly saw tiffin roaming around
whn a plan stricked her to save her 4m Maan's warth.

Maan was busy in painting whn a sudden knock disturbed his attention.He ws already so pissed off ...now this.He opened the door in full force to let the person knw tht
he/she had pressed the wrong button,but he found none.Thn he saw tiffin standing thr with a basket hanging 4m his mouth.He frowned & took tiffin in his room.He opend the
basket only see his favourite cake & a note in thr.He opened the note to read it...

Dear Maanji,

u don't knw me,but i m the girl who made ur entrance in ur house tragic today.I m Geet handa.I m here to finish my studies in MBA through Delhi Universiy.ur daadima was kind enough to let me saty here coz she knws my family frm a very long time.I really
need to stay in ur house for 2 more yrs.I knw i did a mistake...but trust me it was not at all planned.Y would it b planned...r8..??...i don't evn knw u.SO y
would i do this purpously.I jst knocked out a paint bucket acidently.But plss forgive me... i m reay 4 any punishmnt,but plss don't send me back...let me stay here...
plss...

a girl who needs ur kindness,

geet.

Maan smiled reading the letter.May b she was innocent,may b it wasn't her fault,may b he acted a little too mch arrogant.thnking this he started eating the cake
& playing with tiffin.

precap

hmm abhi socha nahi...guys giv me suggessions...

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 12 years ago