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AliaSharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

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loved it... 😃
cont. soon.

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Jeba Rahman

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Posted: 13 years ago

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its fantastic
waiting for maans entry
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Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome start

Hope both maan and geet run away and get married

please update soon and pm me

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sapna sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

sound interesting

awesome n amazing update

loved it

do continue soon

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Tarina Rahmsn Totine

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Posted: 13 years ago

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THANK U DOR UR COMMENTS ND WISHES GUYYSS LOVE U ALL...

😳Part 2😳

Stiil in FLASHBACK...

Next day ws hectic for the handa haveli evryone ws busy giving Geet all kind of advices...Nd she ws totally fed up with all this stuff.
This whole week was horrifying...bt she couldn't back down...She'l nt back down...

Aftr hours nd hours of advice...nd mom nd rajji's crying ...nd consolation...She ws finally in the train tht was going 2wards her dreams,...
She ws finally going 2 fulfill her dreams...She wa going 2 acheive wht no grl 4m her town couldn't...

Geet was beeming in happiness...She'l b able 2 stand on her own feet...She was alwayz a high ambicious girl...
She always thought tht she'l go a long way...Bt her family never understood her...nd she never evn xpected tht...
Thy were always high in rules nd regulations for girls...which she never liked...Geet ws bold in her choices nd activities...
Bt she never did anythg tht'l harnish her F*Ly's reputation...Bt she never supported sumthg tht ws wrong...

In their village girls got married whn thy were nt evn 18...Girls r
thought 2 b sum kind of burdon 2 their famly...Same happened with Geet...Her famly,mainly Daarji wanted Geet 2 get married at early as possible..
Bt geet stood up for herself...she didn't let that happen...She studied hard nd got star marks on every subjet
...nd nw she was here...whn Daaarji saw Geet's result evn he couldn't
say no...Specially whn Delhi university xcepted geet's application...no one had the guts 2 say no 2 Geet...
so no geet was on her way 2 fulfill her dream,...

Geet was always a very practical person 4m her mind...She never believed in fairytale...
It doesn't mean that She doesn't believe in love or marriage...it true she doesn't believe in arange marriage...
She jst Knew one thg tht Whnevr she marries someone tht'l be purely based on love... she really
believes tht she'l get her prince charming someday who'l love her without any restrictions...who'l accept her the way she is...
who'l let her liveher life the way she wants...

She won't marry someone coz her Daaji wants her 2 marry tht idiot...she wanted 2 be independent...
She never'l be dependent on anyone...nt evn on her husband...
She had no plans 4 marriage yet...1st she'l b educated enough 2 b on a comendable post in a bussiness company...
Then she'l thk about settling down wid theperson of her own choice...She'l make sure tht she's in a position 2 choose her life partner...

Geet was determined tht she's not going back in Hoshiyarpur evr...nt untill she has found her prince charming nd her dream job...
Becoz she knows if she again steps back in this village all her dreams of becoming self-indepensent nd getting married 2
her prince charming will go in drains...Thy'l surely emotionally blackmail her...
In her F*Ly she only cared abt her mother nd her sister...who really cares her...
who really understood her dreams...Nd she can never see tears in her mom's eyes...nd thy'l take advantage of tht...
Thn thy'l tie her down wid some tom dick & harry...Nd she'l nevr evr compromise with her dreams.Tht's y she was leaving hoshiyarpur 4 gud...

Geet was brought back 4m her thoughts wid the train's siren tht indicated her arrival in Delhi...

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Geet came out of the station wid 5 big suitcases alongside her...Evryone who was passing her her gave her a weired look...
like pure-khandhan-ko sath-leke-ayi-hai-kya...Geet gave thm a nervous smile nd cursed Rano under her breath...

Geet " yeh maa bhi nah...kaha tha itne saman maat do...bt koi meri baat sune tab nah..."

Geet looked everywhr 4 the person who was sent by SAVITRI DEVI 2 take her 2 KHURANA MANSION...She has been very kind 2 her 4m the beginning...
Geet didn't knw her personally bt had a gr8 respect 4 this lady...She had always heard the tales of friendship between her Daarji nd Savitri ji's husband
RANVIR SINGH KHURANA...It's said tht her Daarji nd ranvir were inseparable..Thy had their school together...Thy evn got married on the same day.

Bt Ranvir khurana had big dreams in his life...which were not possible in Hoshiyarpur...As a result he nd his wide came 2 Delhi
2 make their dreams come true...Soon thy started their business nd slowly slowly with much hardship thy became the number 1 construction farm
in Delhi...

Adtr sum years Ranvir khurana died becoz on cancer...Nd all the reaponsibilities came 2 Savitri khurana...Handas came 2 knw this situation nd wanted 2 help
Savitri ji bt she clearly refused...becoz she believed in morals...In the race of life Handas nd khuranas lost their touch...

Savitri khurana didn't back down 4m the challenges tht were thrown at her...She faced thm with a brave face...She took the charge of the company
in her hands nd made it evn bigger nd better...
She managed her son nd her company wid gr8 skills...Nd became an inspiration 4 many grls...
Bt again destiny played a cruel game with her...Her one nd only son nd her daughtr-in-law dies in a accidednt...
Savitri devi was again shatteres...
Her only hope ws dead...He whole family were lost in in the void of sorrow...Her eldest grandson was only 18 yrs tht time...
He didn't have the skill nd knowledge 2 run a company...Bt Savitri ji didn't let her family shatter this way...
She again took the hold of her famly nd her company nd maintained it's position...

Evn at the age of nearly 60 she didn't lost the battle with the destiny...She gave all the facilities 2 her grandsons...& made thm the person
who thy r today...It's been five yrs tht her 2 eldest grandsons took the hold of the company nd she is enjoying her ritired life...

Bt earlier this year...Sammer khurana cme 2 Hoshiyarpur 4 some buying one of Handa's land...In this way all of thm connected again...
Nd whn Savitri ji came 2 knw abt Geet's admission...she immediately reqested Handas 2 let live in THE KHURANA MANSION...

Daarji ws relucant at first...BT Savitri ji ws also adamnt in her decisions...She mase Daaarji agree with her nd Now Geet ws here...

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Geet saw a driver having a board of her name nd she called him...

Geet " arey oh driver bhaiya..."

The driver saw here nd there thn spotted a girl in a green salwar waving at him...He smiled at Geet bt his smile was wiped out seeing the luggage behind her...

Geet followed his eyes nd smiled nervously at the driver...

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Geet entered the KHURANA MANSION premisises...She ws spell-bounded seeing the huge mansion in front of her ...
She has only seen this kind of mansions in films...The car stopped nd the driver opened the door for her...
She got out of the car nd entered the mansion through it's already opened gates...Geet went inside the living room of
khurana mansion which was huge...the whole room gave a rich bt a homely feeling 2 geet...There was a huge
shandeliar hanging high 4m the celling giving a complete look 2 the room...There were some italian leather sofas...
giving a rich look...The walls were decorated with the colour of white nd golden...There were some xpensive vases
on the corners of the room...In total it was a classy nd coozy room...

Geet came close 2 the sofas nd saw an elderly lady reading sum book...She was clad in a off-white saree...nd
had a pearl neclace enchanting her neck...Evn in this age She was gorgeous... Geet instantly knew
tht she was SAVITRI KHURANA (SK/dadi) ...Geet was going 2 say sumthg whn she felt sumthg at her feet...
She looked down & saw cute puppy licking her feet...

Geet immediately bent down nd scooped him in her arms...

Geet " olle...sooo cute.."

Geet voice made Savitri look up 4m her book...She saw a girl in a green salvar playing with their dog...
She has a angelic cute face...She had a simplicity nd a possitive aura aroud her...thn she wondered who this grl might be...
Thn she remembered abt Handa's daughter Geet...nd stood up 2 welcum her...

SK " tum geet hona...????"

Geet totally 4got abt SK while playing with the puppy...

She stood up straight saying "yess maam..."

SK " maam.areh call me dadi...evryone calls me tht...mam sham bada ajeeb lagta hai "

Geet smiled at her gesture nd said. " ok Dadima...jaisa ap kahe..."

Dadi smiled at the sweet girl nd saw the puppy was still paying with Geet's toes..."

Dadi " areh...yeh tiffin ko toh apse pyaar ho gaya..."

Geet picked up tiffin nd affectionately stroked his hair... "iska nam tiffin hai...'

Dadi " hm...ap is k sath bas me kheliye ga...pehle jaiye nd fresh ho k ayiye...ap ka saman kaha..."

Dadi was cut off seeing 3 of the servanets bringning 3 huge lugagges...

Dadi looked at Geet unbeilievingly nd Geet smiled uncomfortably...

Geet " dadi woh yeh 3 mere suitcases hai...nd baki 2 me maa ne ap logo k liye achhar aur mithai bheje hai..."

Geet was nervous wht'l Savitri ji thk of her bt ws surprised seeing the sweet smile on her face...

Dadi "yeh rano bhi nah...bilkul nahi badli...pehli ki tarah hi pyari hai..."

Dadi thn called nakul nd told him to take out all the foods nd safely keep thm...She instructed
othr servants 2 take Geet's luggage nd she shwd Geet her room...

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Geet entered her room where she's going 2 stay 4 almost 2 years...She took a look around the room...
The room was fairely big...having a big single bed...clad with pillows ...in middle...a study table in the corner..
a huge almirah on the side...In 1 word it was perfect 4 a simple girl like Geet...

Geet went near the huge window nd opened it...a strong gust of wind entered her room...giving it a compliment...
Geet closed her eyes nd welcumed her new life...she came out of her thought with a knock on her door...

Geet opened the door nd found a servant who brought her luggage...geet gustered him 2 cum in...He placed all the luggage
there nd informed her tht Dadima is waiting for her 4 lunch...Geet noded nd he left her room...Geet quickly opened 1
of her bags ...took 1 of her salwar set putting her dupatta on the bed...nd wnt 2 the washroom...

Geet came out of the washroom bt couldn't find her dupatta...She searched here nd there...bt couldn't find it...
Thn she saw tiffin outside her door...looking at her mischiviously having 1 corner of her dupatta in his mouth...Geet looked at him seriously
nd tiffin ran 4m there...

Geet ran behind tiffin 2 take her dupatta back...She ran nd ran...nd reached the terrece...there was some paint
work going on there...there were sum paint cans here nd there...Geet ran behind tiffin carefully...nt knocking out any paint cans

Geet came near the corner of the terrace nd got hold of tiffin nd cuddled it cutely...unfortunately knocking 1 of the black paint
cans which was on the railing...Her eyes popped out seeing the paint dropping on a guy who was jst under the railing...
The guy was drenched in black paint nd Geet put her hands on her mouth in a shock...

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PRESENT

Geet came out of her thoughts witha slight movement of rajji who was sleeping peacefully...She sighed nd saw the ring
which was now on her ringfinger which had the name Dev...Thn she took the ring which was near her heart in a chain...which
had Maan's name in it...She closed her eyes praying Babaji 2 make everythg r8...

Precap...

Maan's pov nd sum present

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 12 years ago