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shreya24.sharma

@shreya24.sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

neva thought swayam without dance..
Sharon cravng 2 meet swayam..
U made my eyes watery..
<3<3

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shreya24.sharma

@shreya24.sharma

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

dis is actualy y i luv 2 b on india form nd read da posts nd ol..
Dese r A-M-A-Z-I-N-G..
People actualy hv gr8 thought process nd dis is da best place 2 showcase it..
M lackng in wrds 2 xplain wat actual impact da SS had on me..
Hats off..!!
Bt wat abt da furthur story?
Did she actualy went 2 swayam?
Did she get him back 2 her nd frndz..?

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Sakina

@-Sakina-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Nice part Pree.

Specially the part where she sees his battered face and his crutch-all of which is nothing compared to the mental agony he's going through.

would love to know HOW it all happened,and how she gets him back.

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Gargi

@gargicool

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Very well written...Keep writing more...eagerly waiting for the next update..!!

P.S - I luv reading your Updates!!

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Awesome update. Loved it. I've always liked ShaRey friendship.

But i didn't get the PM

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon
Awesome update. Loved it. I've always liked ShaRey friendship.

But i didn't get the PM

Sorry for not PMing... I think I missed quite a few. I'll try that it doesn't happen again.

In case anyone of you haven't got the PM too. Add me in your buddy list.

Luv,
Pree

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -Sakina-
Nice part Pree.

Specially the part where she sees his battered face and his crutch-all of which is nothing compared to the mental agony he's going through.

would love to know HOW it all happened,and how she gets him back.

Sorry to disappoint Saku, but I've not shown them discussing HOW it happens because it's something they share unsaid. I didn't want them delving into the painful past, but just work on the present.

But if oyu still want it, and I still have the time... I'm surely add the scene somehow. However I find the SS complete without it.

Hope you get what i mean.

Luv,
Pree

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: tanha_swaron
Dude! You rocked it today! You know I actually felt like I was right there, watching it in person. It felt uncannily real. This time you made us go through Sharon's pain and indirectly through Swayam's pain. It was just too real. It's like you have personally experienced that kind of pain, if you don't mind me saying that. The friendship between Sharon and Rey was beautifully defined. Hats off to you!

Honestly., I've not gone thorugh anything like this in my life. By Lord's grace I have an amazing life and it's plain, simple and non-exciting...

But it's seriously it's a big complement to the writer when the reader and a fellow writer says they felt they were there and that it seemed so real that there was a fair chance the writer has experienced it. Your comment awed me... as always. Thanks a lot. I always look forward to you reading my work. 😊

Luv,
Pree

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: shreya24.sharma
dis is actualy y i luv 2 b on india form nd read da posts nd ol..
Dese r A-M-A-Z-I-N-G..
People actualy hv gr8 thought process nd dis is da best place 2 showcase it..
M lackng in wrds 2 xplain wat actual impact da SS had on me..
Hats off..!!
Bt wat abt da furthur story?
Did she actualy went 2 swayam?
Did she get him back 2 her nd frndz..?

Thank you. Since this is a SS, and quite a short one. It's gonna be over in 2-3 posts. You'll know soon enough.

Luv,
Pree

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ABBY92
I can totally relate the Swayam and Sharon in your SS to the ones in D3...I liked the way you showed Sharon hesitant to approach Swayam the first time she sees him...it made it more real and the ShaRey part was really heart touching !!! Can't wait for you to update the next chapter !!!

Thanks a lot. I was really apprehensive about not touching the SwaRon mark here. This is one of the few that I wrote in a single go (staying up overnight) after a major writer's block has crept up in my life since a... well let's not talk about that.

and I was little more concerned about how people will really take it since to me it's complete and I do not wish to add or substract anything. So i hoped people will be attached to it like I am.

Luv,
Pree

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