SwaRon SS - Falling For The Beast

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: tanha_swaron
I don't know what to say to you. You melted my heart with this part. It was so heart wrenching. It was so beautiful. So beautiful. Out of all your works, this one took the prize. You are in a league of your own. I am utterly convinced that you can make a career out of writing. Frankly, I feel my writing is inconsequential in front of yours. You use the perfect word for each emotion and it's such a pleasure to read your works. And even though this part is out of this world, I liked the way you ended things before. I don't know, I just liked that ending better than this though this part is more beautifully written. Your writing is beautiful. Marvelous. Amazing. Wonderful. Heart-tugging. Overwhelming. And if I wasn't so out of adjectives I would have continued.

P.S. I'm in love with your writing.

Honestly, I was expecting you to say that. Not the the utter crap about your writing being inconsequential in front of mine. The alternate end is my choice too. It just seems more realistic. The sotry began as one to bring these two togeher and as I moved on I realized I wanted Swayam to get back to his old life more than getting together with Sharon. Swayam's character's much more imoprtant to me, compared to the SwaRon pairing.

Thanks for those many amazing adjective, I hardly feel deserving for any though.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Awesome ending...loved it to da core!!❤️

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medha_m

@medha_m

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Firstly the story and both the end's were splendid really heart touching I liked the alternate more for the story, it was more in sync with the story for me. The original end was beautiful and surreal, it seemed like a story in itself.

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Altermate end...
Its beautiful... U described everything so briliantly...

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

You are an awesome writer yaar. I loved both the ends but the 2nd one made swaron all the more special. Thanks for such a beautiful OS on swaron

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

"Now let's go' they're waiting." She moved holding his hand trying to pull him but he didn't budge. She looked back at him and rolled her eyes as she saw him smile mischievously. "Yes I love you' now move!" She said trying to pull him.

"So you finally fell in love' that too with a beast." He said with a smile.

"No' I fell in love with my Swayam." She said smiling at him as she took him inside, where his world still waited for him'

best awesome great perfect i had a smile from one ear to the other. this is my most favorite ss by far