SwaRon SS - Falling For The Beast | Completed - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
I completely forget that I reserved this place...So sorry, and yeah,I commented about the update in my other post !!!
Edited by ABBY92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Short one but interesting one...looking forward to the lamba wala updates...Swayam ka dard badaa hai ya Sharon ka pataa nahi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Awesome update, waiting to read more from you..
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Oye isme to SwaRon conversation start hone se pehle hi khatam ho gaya show ki tarah. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Although it was a short update, there was a lot of depth to it...Finally, Sharon approached him and the way he tried to hide his face from her and told her to go back...Heartbreaking but I'm glad that Sharon is not giving up so easily !!! Can't wait for the next update !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Huh? Seriously thats it ?! Such a small update? C'mmon Pree, you gotta be kidding me. : (
Oh well, since its an SS..
But it was really nice you knw. But why was the conversation a "cut short" one?!
N thanx 4 d PM

Edited by Srishti_SwaRon - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Superb part,but too small...❤️ plz update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Sheherzade



Sorry to disappoint Saku, but I've not shown them discussing HOW it happens because it's something they share unsaid. I didn't want them delving into the painful past, but just work on the present.

But if oyu still want it, and I still have the time... I'm surely add the scene somehow. However I find the SS complete without it.

Hope you get what i mean.

Luv,
Pree

You're thewriter,Pree.And the writer's the captain of the ship.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Itna CHOTA update maine ZINDAGI mein nahi dekha.
But it was really nice,nonetheless.Chalo,Sharon's mission begings.Next update isse bada kariyo.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A/N: Guys I know the last update was too small and there was hardly any conversation, but as Rafi rightly pointed out, it was Swayam's defense mechanism. He knew if he stayed with her any longer he might end up giving in. He doesn't want that. And that was just the first conversation.

He looked out of the window. It was early for him to go to the park. Two hours early. But maybe if he changed his schedule, it would throw her off his track. Every day when he would get out of the house, he'd see her sitting there on the bench across the road. He never acknowledged her but he knew she was going to be there every day when he'd come out. She would follow him everywhere – sit on the adjacent bench to him in the park trying to strike a conversation, to the grocery store… everywhere he went she was there.

He walked out of his building pulling the hood lower when he suddenly saw her sitting there on the bench already. She seemed to have dozed off sitting there. He could've easily gone from there without her knowing, but he couldn't.

He stared at her sitting in front of her, the serene beauty. He wanted to touch her face, caress her cheeks. As he held up a hand he saw his scarred hand against her flawless skin. He touched his own face reminding himself of the difference that was between them. He composed himself and lightly tapped her shoulder waking her up.

She woke up with a start and saw him standing in front of her. He tried bending his head to make his face invisible, but she could see the stitches on his jaw line.

"What are you doing here?" He asked her looking away when he saw her looking at his face.

"I thought you would've guessed by now. Since I've been following you everywhere. I think it's called stalking, dumb-head." She said cheekily crossing her arms.

"I mean so early morning…" He tried not to look at his face.

"Well I realized that sometime sooner you'll try changing your schedule, maybe go out a little early, to get me off your track. So I began coming here three hours in advance since a few days. And I guess I wasn't wrong." Sharon said proudly as she yawned.

He was dumbstruck. He never thought she observed him so much, or she even considered what might be going on in his mind.

"Go home Sharon. Stop doing this." He said turning back.

"Make me." She said getting up.

"If I were you… I'd let it go." He said walking away.

"You're wrong." Sharon called out. He stopped in his tracks. "If you were me, you'd not be coming here early to catch me. You'd be spending your days and nights on this bench trying to get me back."

"Not anymore Sharon… not anymore." Swayam said walking away from there, but he couldn't shake her off his tail as she followed him.

"You know Nil and Simmi went out on a date a few days back. Seems like sense struck that idiot." Sharon said following him on the way to the park, walking a few paces behind him on the pavement.

"Stop following me Sharon." Swayam said trying to fasten his pace, but he couldn't.

"Nil ended up crying after the date when the boys bombarded him at his place. He said he missed you." Sharon knew Swayam would stop hearing that, and he did. "They want you back Swayam…" She said touching his elbow lightly.

"You think they want me back!" Swayam burst up. "You think they'd want this back!" He said letting his hood fall, glaring in her face. She winced looking at him. She held up a hand but Swayam moved a step back. "They would not want a beast to return in place of their friend Sharon. No would want someone who looking like this as their friend. No one does…" Swayam said walking away from there, leaving Sharon standing there, tears rolling down her cheeks, her hand still held up clutching air.



Hope this conversation satisfied all the kolhapuris and jootis and jhaadoos you had prepared for me.

Luv,
Pree

P.S. I divided the rest into two parts, so this will end day after tomorrow instead of tomorrow.

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