SwaRon SS - Falling For The Beast | Completed - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasie

Awesome update pree... Sharon feeling like a coward n trying to muster up her strength...swayam's pain... Brilliantly described... I guess ur SS is the only way m gonna survive... Cuz the episodes r bcuming worthless anyway... N remember ur promise we want a happy ending...



You're surely getting a happy ending... My own way. 😉

I've already written it out. No worries.


Luv,

Pree.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow this is beautiful...i read both the parts together...you write too well...even tragedies are a treat to read in ur words...do continue soon and pls PM me...thanks...
-Sree
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is the third part. And believe me it's gonna wrap up soon. I guess I really stuck to the word when I said it was a SS. 😆

He was sitting on the bench in a faraway corner of the park, listening to music, lost somewhere, when she called him. She was sure he couldn't hear when she saw the phone in his hands, the earphone connected. She took a deep breath and put a hand on his shoulder.

He was startled when someone touched his shoulder. He wondered if there was something wrong. Taking out the ear plugs he turned and saw her. Standing there with her hands clasped nervously, looking down on the ground.

"Sharon…?" He asked shakily as he got up from the bench supported on his crutch.

"Hi Swayam." She said with a smile.

"What are you doing here…" he said moving a little away from her, bending his head down, pulling hard at his hood at hide his face.

"I… I came to meet you." She said taking a step towards him.

"Who… who told you I was here?"

"I took the address of your new place from Taani."

"You shouldn't be here Sharon." He said walking away.

"We miss you Swayam." Sharon said trying desperately to make him stay and at least talk to her.

"That won't make me come back Sharon. Go. At least you go to them. And don't come after me again." He said and walked away from there. Sharon fell down on the bench where Swayam had sat a few minutes ago, closing her eyes and taking a deep breath. Tomorrow was going to be another day, she was not giving up.



I know the part is short. But this was an independant part and the next scene could not be added with it. There are just two more parts left to go. Longer than this I promise.

Luv,
Pree

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
amaizng it was great plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
wow...that was beautiful..you write awesomely well...i really loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Well pree u know wat m ready with a kolapuri knife... This is like cheating... Itna chottu update... :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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DUDE !! Comeon !! I ve been waiting to see how this conversation of theirs went and u just cut it off just like that 😒

I LOVED the way u showed Swayam's reactions to Sharon's sudden appearance ... his defense mechanism ... and broken spirit ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it bt it was vry short update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it bt it was vry short update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaRon911

DUDE !! Comeon !! I ve been waiting to see how this conversation of theirs went and u just cut it off just like that 😒


I LOVED the way u showed Swayam's reactions to Sharon's sudden appearance ... his defense mechanism ... and broken spirit ..



Originally posted by: manasie

Well pree u know wat m ready with a kolapuri knife... This is like cheating... Itna chottu update... :(



Sowwie... Holds ears. The next update has nice enough conversation. Don't worry.

But if i post it now, the SS ends tomorrow...

Tell me what you want.

Luv,
Pree.

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