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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Hey zara!
How r u knw? Hope ur fine.

The update was just awesome. Just so nice. Arnav is just so naughty flirting n tickling his also when she is talking to his sis at phn. But this is the small things that makes arnav special.

Hey the caves they went to were just so beautiful. Really they were so nice. But if talking in real even i'm scared of going ing such caves:-P. Arnav care for khushi n taking her out of the cave n the moments they shared were just so nice n heart touching.

Firstly when she fainted i thought there was some goodnews but that cant be so soon. Abhi to they r just married. Hey while on their honeymoon they had it so much that she actually fainted. Energy...;-) . The doctors words were really advicefull for arnav. Arnav give her some rest but v knw she is too beautiful u dnt hv to say it. The scene of dinner n their convo were really nice. Just loved the whole scene.

Get well soon n ya update soon. U knw v greedy ppl but just cant stop u write so nice.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Hey Zara this was a FAB update as always ... Too much of there activities are taking its toll on Khushi and Arnav is so sweet and caring towards her ... Really like to updates and can't wait to read the other chapter when you update ... THANKS ALOT FOR THE PMs... GET WELL SOON ZARA ...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Congratulations on the 4th Thread.🥳
Not surprising though as the story is excellent and you never cease to amaze me.
The story is still kicking ass and fresh.
Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Aww, poor Khushi, fainted from exaustion due to too much sex. Oh I wish.
Arnie boy has been riding her hard.
It was a fun read as always. I enjoyed it.
Although I miss Casablanca. I just love that guy.
Looking forward to your next update Zara.
Continue soon. Thanks Zara.😃
Edited by zafi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
heya zara..

fab update dear..

anjali khushi conversation was cute...

arnav disturbing khushi while she was on the fone aww..

lol he presumed khushi was pregnant?

loved the way he made her feel better with a kiss,,

the outside of the caves is really pretty...:)

khushi gave him a purple flower..aww soo cute..

khushi fainted..that made arnav really scared...

she was exhausted because of the honeymoon..ooo..

arnav fears losing her... aww.. was nice to see khushi reassuring him that shel never ever leave him..

many thanks for the pm..: ]

will look forward to the update on sunday...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: zafi

Congratulations on the 4th Thread.🥳
Not surprising though as the story is excellent and you never cease to amaze me.
The story is still kicking ass and fresh.
Superb update.👏⭐️
Aww, poor Khushi, fainted from exaustion due to too much sex. Oh I wish.
Arnie boy has been riding her hard.
It was a fun read as always. I enjoyed it.
Although I miss Casablanca. I just love that guy.
Looking forward to your next update Zara.
Continue soon. Thanks Zara.😃


woo so glad its still interesting as before. thank you. 😳
LOL yes arnav has been tiring khushi out abit😉
casanova? yep miss him but he might come back later.
thanks for the comment
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: arhi-fan

Hey zara!
How r u knw? Hope ur fine.

The update was just awesome. Just so nice. Arnav is just so naughty flirting n tickling his also when she is talking to his sis at phn. But this is the small things that makes arnav special.

Hey the caves they went to were just so beautiful. Really they were so nice. But if talking in real even i'm scared of going ing such caves:-P. Arnav care for khushi n taking her out of the cave n the moments they shared were just so nice n heart touching.

Firstly when she fainted i thought there was some goodnews but that cant be so soon. Abhi to they r just married. Hey while on their honeymoon they had it so much that she actually fainted. Energy...;-) . The doctors words were really advicefull for arnav. Arnav give her some rest but v knw she is too beautiful u dnt hv to say it. The scene of dinner n their convo were really nice. Just loved the whole scene.

Get well soon n ya update soon. U knw v greedy ppl but just cant stop u write so nice.


thanks so much for this comment.
awww so glad you found the cave part heartwarming. 😳
yep they need energy, LOL. arnav is gonna be quite protective over khushi for a couple of updates
thanks for enjoying my update
muahhh
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
hahaha amazing update loved aww poor khushi got tired due to AHEM!!!

but rabbit???? didn't get this
aww loved how he cared for her after cave fiasco and after she fainted
the thing i loved most was arnav's possessiveness and insecurity towards khushi

continue soon

get well soon
Edited by sandy1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: aakriti120

heya zara..

fab update dear..

anjali khushi conversation was cute... Your the first to say this.thank you!!!

arnav disturbing khushi while she was on the fone aww.. naughty arnav indeed.

lol he presumed khushi was pregnant? ummhmmm😆

loved the way he made her feel better with a kiss,, doesnt arnav kisses always make it better😉

the outside of the caves is really pretty...:) awww thank you. nature is beautiful

khushi gave him a purple flower..aww soo cute.. first to say this tooo. 😃 thank youuu

khushi fainted..that made arnav really scared... arnav protective mode.

she was exhausted because of the honeymoon..ooo.. *sigh* i hope my hubby does this LOLOLOL

arnav fears losing her... aww.. was nice to see khushi reassuring him that shel never ever leave him.. 😳

many thanks for the pm..: ] with comments like these, you are very welcome😃

will look forward to the update on sunday...


thanks you for the beautiful comment. really enjoyed it
gift for long comment
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
Awesome as usual...👏👏👏
I couldnt get what Khushi was talking abt to Di😕Loved Khushi's innocence when she said that how long does it take to make clothes...lol... so Khushi is tired...ab yeh toh hona hi tha😉The caves seemed so scary...and it was so natural of Khushi to get scared...Loved the flower part...it was so cuteKhushi not again...jab deko beemar ho jati ho...😆 i could sense Doctor's reaction to Arnav when he said that they had their honey moon recently...
Khushi fainted b'coz they didnot had jalebis🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
she fainted due to sexual activities! haha that was hilarious!
loved the update
P.S. I have finals next week, i should be studying *runs*

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