Originally posted by: MukTi_is_Meera
Surbhi sahb kamaal kar ditta!!!! Kya likha hai boss hats off!!!! You write sooo well, aaj tak likha kyu nahi tune?
If you do continue, definitely PM me... I am sooo proud of you dude!!!
and as I keep saying, YOU ROCK!!!
Loved how you captured Swaron so well...passion yet softness... nice!
And the last line...Sharon wanting a new cupboard... gives way to the fact that Sharon will treasure those things now...[that's what I feel]...but I could be wrong.
And LOOOVED the strong, tough and attitude wala Swammy... so want to see him like that instead of the teddy bear [aww :)] he is...at least for a while.
Loved it Sur!!! Update karegi toh PM karna mat bhooliyo!