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Posted: 11 years ago
surbhi mata tum itni amazing ho yaar. .
Dis story is just so touching i can feel it i can see all dis happening. .
Fabulous work. .
Yaar ab baas karo inka confession kara na. .
Very beautifully written yaar. .
I simply love dis ss. .
Jitna bolu utna kaam hai. .
I just loved d corridor sequence. .
N each n every part were u described their pain n their thoughts superb ly penned. .
Dis was amazing. .
Update soon. .

Ps: pm me ur other works ll love to read them. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
the chapter was great and good... but it lillte weird in the end...
make up their patch up... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Written brilliantly, could visualise and feel the pain, the kaka thing, lovely bonding in all.
Reyam and shar-simmi, frndship bond, perfect,,
Bracelet and clutches, wow...
So swaronish, just leave it...totally unexpected, twist, loved the SS, r u planning to continue it?
SanskritiS thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update 😊
Swayam asked Sharon to forget everything
Beautifully penned
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.
loved it alot..
my swayam,feeling really bad for him..
he is hurt so much ..
so hope soon sharon realise she love him n everything go good with them..
plz update soon ..
n thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Surr..I forgot I was reading a story in the middle...it felt as if m watching the scenes happening...someone interupted me while reading and thats when I came out of my trance and took a few seconds to realise I was reading!! :p

Superbly written! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey surbhii
I hv jst read all three parts 1n2was awsm bt yar wtz dat i was thinking k wo sath me honge n cut si figh hogi n patch up bt i kn k itz urs bt i don't like seprsn so plz if u can dono ko mila do ..
Waiting for next update
keep writing
Thanx for pm

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