Dis story is just so touching i can feel it i can see all dis happening. .
Fabulous work. .
Yaar ab baas karo inka confession kara na. .
Very beautifully written yaar. .
I simply love dis ss. .
Jitna bolu utna kaam hai. .
I just loved d corridor sequence. .
N each n every part were u described their pain n their thoughts superb ly penned. .
Dis was amazing. .
Update soon. .
Ps: pm me ur other works ll love to read them. .