Swaron SS--Cupboards /Ch3updated Pg17/ - Page 7

Originally posted by: dips098

hey surbhi...i guess m the last person on earth to comment on this awesome OS...actually i read it when I was not a member of this forum ...so couldn't comment that time... today again I was doing tp here and read this...i m again having tears in my eyes after reading this awesome piece of work of urs... the intense SWARON ...i m missing them so much...this OS is just WOW.. .this is for u.....👏👍🏼🤗

Originally posted by: tejukor

Like it...????surbhi are u kidding i just loved it...wow nice os...and the way u expressed sharons feeling about that closed eye wala movement...it was awesomely pen down i just loved it...👏

waiting for next part...

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

ye kab kiya tune batya be nahi😭

Well yaar super cool, Awww swayam ne sab kuch phenk dala OMG he is really angry. Wow sur kya likka hai yaar. Really touching, sur hats off to you yaar.

Originally posted by: MagicalShantanu

Surbhi . . .🤗 my own SS . . . .😉 dont u know I just A-D-O-R-E ur writing . . . .👍🏼 Do I need to pen down my mesmerized state even here . . . .if so, then I'm up for it . . . . .

Yaar, u wrote it SPLENDIDLY . . . . the concept was just Brilliant . . . the flow of emotions of the real characters was seriously GREAT . . . I love how the calm & composed Swayam was forced to shed his usual avatar by the etched attitude of the Diva . . .

And the last line . . .. .one way to go . . . . STUNNING . . . .

Surbhi, I'm literally the last one to comment here . . . . but, I think u gonna overlook my mistake, right ? 😔 - Turin ( Shantanu Soul )