Swaron SS--Cupboards /Ch3updated Pg17/

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Amazing,awesome,wonderful.i am speechless.the emotions,dialogues everything was jst perfect.do write more.Heart touching os 👍🏼

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

vry perfectly written...juss apt...speechless...i loved the part where u showed how sharon allowed swayam to come closerto her...she didnt knew the reason but she allowed him to get close and the reason being she is helpless and she completely trusted him deeply... to the extent that even she wud allow swayam to cross his lines...juss beautiful yaar...i guess this wud turn out to be the real reason in the show ...plzz write more...

Edited by luvSwaron4ever - 13 years ago

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

You have written beautifully but it kind of feel incomplete. Please continue it and make it SS rather than an OS.

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

ohh god so beautiful...loved it felt tears in ma eyes yaar.. amazing..

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

BEAUTIFUL OS ...Surbhi and just the thought of swayam giving up on Sharon makes me cry though she deserves the same but still..thnx fr the PM and please update soon 😊

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-Ripal-

@-Ripal-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awww dis was soo sweet lovely amazing os awsum loved it ❤️

keep writing more

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Amazing ❤️

I really want to see an angry and agressive Swayam now.

Its high time Sharon gets her legs back on earth.

Anyways, back to your OS, superb 👍🏼

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rachita_1994

@rachita_1994

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wow!!! No confession but so simply put forth!!!

Please make this an SS!!!! It will work wonders!!!

I loved it coz its the most different ones from the one I have read so far!!!!! Its superb!!!!! Pleasee Add me to ur PM list and whenever u write anything about SwaRon(U better write coz ur great), please Pm me!!!!!

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346815

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

WHOAAA /// So Sharon took the stuff from Swayam ... and planned to keeep in a cupboard of her own ? Well its time Sharon learnt to Value things worth keeping. 😊

Niceee OS ... a slightly diff take on the promo .. me likey 😳