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Posted: 12 years ago
sur...dont eat footage...post the ready chapter now!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow I can't believe I'm reading this OS NOW..so late! It was amazing and a delightful read.Please do continue. I'd like to know what happens next😊Thanks for PMing me about it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Thank you Khushi for re-opening it 😃

And well yeah, guys i am continuing this OS.
As i wrote it an year ago this OS is old so i want my every SwaRon fan to read and comment if he/she wants me to continue this like seriously.
I would simply dedicate this to my dearest friend Marium, um well forced i would say! 😆
Btw a chapter is ready, so enlighten me with your opinions, please
😳

update next chpter😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome..
totally loved it..
plz plz update soon ..
n pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey awesome people, how's everybody? hope awesome!
Okay now first of all thank you so much to all those lovely people who took time, liked and even commented on the recent Note. I am so glad and overwhelmned by the response.
If you still hadn't read it, go read.
And yea have a look here also First Page

Tada! Here's the next chapter and the new start of this SS.


Chapter 2


Night--2am.
In Sharon's room

Sharon was sitting on the floor in a hopeless manner, staring at the empty cupboards, with moist eyes.
All her pictures were scattered on the floor. She picked one in which she was laughing whole heartedly, another one in which she was posing like a diva and the next one in which she was teasing with her thumb on her nose and rest of the fingers free in the air.
She felt pathetic seeing those photographs so she damned them on the floor and stood up facing the mirror. She could see a girl in white spaghetti and black mini shorts, all drained in tears, her hair were open and dispersed, her eyes were all red fighting back from the tears she had stored in.
"This is...me..." she kept her right hand on the mirror in disbelief.
She again saw those pictures lying on the floor.
"When did he clicked them...I don't remember a thing...Just when did all these things happened?? How could I not notice!" she grabbed her hair in disgust and sat on the bed with a jolt.
Not just the pictures, she observed many facets of her inner self which even she was unaware of.
"Who am I? Am I the one present in these pictures or the one whom everybody knows? Who exactly am I??"
She went running in her shower place pulled the lever down of the shower and here she was wet in few seconds as heavy drops of cold water entered her head. She sat and rested her head on the bathtub as now she could not differentiate between her sobs and the shower-sobs.
She closed her eyes to dissect things.


There she was locked in the abandoned corridor with swayam.
"Tum aur mai hum nahi ho saktey Sharon?"
"Acha, agar aisa hai toh kyun tumhare bina kuch kahe tumhari aankhein mujhse baatein karti hai?"
"Kyun tumhare hothon ki muskurahat tumhare dil ki udaasi mujhse chupa nahi sakti?"
"Kyun tumhara hath mujhe chuney se pehle kaapta hai?"
"Kyun mere paas aane par tumhari saansein tez ho rahi hai, Sharon?"


In a split second her eyes flung open...she was breathless by then.
"What the hell is happening?" she shrieked and ran outside in her dining place not oblivious of someone else's presence.
Kaka""Sharon beta are you okay??" concern showing in his voice.
Sharon was out of her mind so she shouted""Oh please leave me alone kaka!!" with her hands reaching mid air in frustration.
Kaka turned around to leave.
Sharon""Kaka..."
Kaka softly twisted.
Sharon""Sorry kaka..."
Kaka smiled and rested his hand on her forehead.
Sharon closed her eyes and all she could manage was a weak smile.
Kaka left in seconds from there.

She became all sad and went back to her room only to find it in a mess, tired from all the events she just went and checked her phone. No missed calls, no texts, nothing.
"He didn't even care to know...about me..." her eyes were brimming with tears now...again, she was deeply hurt, but why? Even she didn't know about this well.
She sat on her bed with a pillow and tried to reconcile the broken pieces of past.
Why do I care about all of this? He has hurt me today by saying spiteful words.
"Agar main chaahun na toh ek minute mei tumhe apna bana sakta hoon, I can just have you. Agar main chahun toh!"

How he could say this! I don't believe out of everyone Swayam? Swayam can say such things? But he has done it.
A lone tear escaped her eye, she felt she has lost everything, but didn't know what exactly has been lost.
Her head was paining on obvious grounds.
She sighed and laid on there on the bed.
Her mind had declared Swayam the criminal but her heart was bestowing a light from a deep shell within and was constantly smiling being an evidence for HIM in every way. That light became wide and paralyzed her senses.

Rose day party.
"Am I hurting you?"

Before Footloose Elims.
"Hum abhi kitne paas hi kyun na ho par hamare beech ek word, DUR hamesha rahega"

Before Charity event.
"
Agar jaane waale ko koi farak nahi padta toh main bhi ensure karunga ki mujhe bhi farak na pade"

Dance event.
"Because of you and your damn ego!"


"Stop!!"
She was sweating, her breath became faster, her heart was beating at an irregular pace, gasping for air she ran in another room and locked it but there she froze at the sight she saw. Swayam was standing in white half shirt and blue jeans, angry and all staggered.
Sharon""Sway...swayamm...tum yaha...kya..." she was clueless as to what was happening.
But Swayam was not speaking.
Sharon again tried""Mere room mei...kya kar rahe ho tum iss..waqt...swayam?"

Then a fake smile appeared on his face and he spoke those words --

"Facts ko dekhne ka apna apna nazariya hota hai. Tumhe laga ki tum yahan mere saath band ho. Aur mujhe laga ki vakt aa gaya hai, vakt aa gaya hai ki mujhe tumhe is bandhan se aazaad kar dena chahiye."


Sharon looked down at her and again up to him , but it was too late for her to realize that she was alone, all alone.


-END-


Guys i had to show sharon's pov so i dedicated an whole of update to her, don't worry you will get to read what you want, soon ;)
Small update? What? I am not getting you please write your opinion here 😳
My next update will depend on your likes and comments so get on work mates.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Its awsum amazing zabardast
I luved it alooot se bhi zyada
In luv with ur ss
It will be pleasure if u convert it into ff plzzz plzzz plzzz
But am little confuse what was swayam doing in that room ?? Was sharon dreaming ??
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me
And next tym i want big update plzzz
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was simply amazing
im so glad that you have decided to continue this OS
and make it a SS

ur meri khushi toh tumhne pehle hi dekh li hogi 😆😆

the chapter was fabulous
sharon's POV was wow !!1
it was a pleasure reading it

waiting for the next update
please jaldi haan

thanks for the PM
PM me soon
i'm waiting
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

unres...


wao finally u updated


very nic update

loved d whole pov of sharon

her confusion state plzzz update soon


update soon
Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update ! 😊
I loved how you penned down Sharon's POV ! 😊
Its good that you are continuing this story...
Continue soon...
Thnx for the PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully penned down Sharon pov
Love it to the core
Please continue asap n do pm me coz I didn't received pm for this update

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