ArHi SS ~Unbelievable~ REMOVED. - Page 13

Beautiful written expression of a sister feelings. Loved it.

Wohohoo !!
Finally Im free to comment Rae...And Im so happy Im able to comment...
And this update...One thing was just sure...You really like Payal and you don't want her to be sided away when it comes to taking care of Khushi and her love for Khushi which they seem to miss a lot on the show.And im glad you do that, cause of there was a person liek payal she would probably be as much concerned as you showed.
And then Aaksh...They also miss out on him,.I guess after his relationship with Payal even he dotes on Khushi as in considering her his little sis which also goes missing and somehow I felt you touched that part...
And Arnav !! Awwiee...the so deeply in love and concerned hubby...Seriously the way you decribed his helplessness seeing her in pain was amazing, I could just imagine this whole OS being shot you know and it made total sense...And the way he soothes Khushi I guess Arnav and Khushi's love is beyond words to describe..Just like whatyou write is beyond words to describe I need to look up for a dictionary containing words to describe it...
And the last line...Jaldi chalao...Naahi dheere Khushi ko tez gaadi se dar lagta hai was so Arnav types man,,,,Even I felt like laughing out here...poor Aaksh must seriously be big time confused as to how one can drive slow and reach the hospital fast..😆
Loved the update as usual Rae 🤗And I want a part 3 to it tooo

Wow

Hahaha! Poor Akash! Loved Payal's POV. Her motherly affection, her jealousy and her reasoning why there couldnt be anyone better than Arnav for Khushi. And most of the situations were before their wedding! So well thought out. :)

Definitely want a Part 3!!!!! :D

cute part dear
thnak for d pm

Awww. . . .
I love your Arnav like anything, bey!!

The part where Payal realized Arnav welcoming Khushi's pain was amazing, and what was still more fabulously portrayed was when Payal couldn't help, but feel jealous!!

Arnav being all contradictory!! Happens to the strongest of men, while their wives are in labor pain!!!

Poor Akash!! Driver seat pe phas gaya hai!! :D :D

Thanks for the update, the PM, and the scrap too :D

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you cannot possibly end it there!! I was waiting and waiting for them to talk... to know those sweet comments he was whispering in her ears!!

Awesome update Rae 👏