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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Of course my dear we want Part 3 ur updates are so adorable that I m always hook 2 it.

This was also a very nice update & I like the POV of Payal 4 her sis.

Pls do continue & PM me.

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Aww This update belonged to payal. Her feelings for khushi are very heart touching.
Plz continue soon

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

awesome awesome!!! cant wait to read more!!!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

awesome loved it that can't wait to read more is she going into labour thanks for the pm

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Neha

@melovemayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

"Akash, I want to reach the hospital fast!"

And then a second later,

"Dheere chalao! Khushi ko tez chalti gaari pasand nahin hai! So drive gently and reach the hospital fast!" (Drive slowly! Khushi doesnt like fast cars! Drive gently and reach the hospital fast!)

Typical Arnav!!! I loved these lines so much!!

Pls continue soon n Thanks for the PM :)

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Awww that was adorable! Hahahah a concerned, flustered Arnav is so cute! :D

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Josupra

@Josupra

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

I love your work. Please continue soon

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

tht was GR8 & .i loved how u wrote everythin frm Payal's POV.😊

plz continue soon. will be waitin for d nxt part :)

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

giggles *
i loveD the arnav here ;)
and u penned down payals feelings beauTifulLy !
awesome part dEar!
please coNtinue! and thanks for the pm :)

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Binita

@...Binny...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Rae...🤗

OMG Arnav is just too cute.. hurry no slow down.. how adorable is this man he is far more fanatical then the women giving birth.. Loved it continue soon..!!!

I almost forgot I adored how you portrayed it from Payals perspective..beautifully written dear..!

Edited by ...Binny... - 13 years ago

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