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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Short and sweet. Loved the contradiction in Arnav's words. Haha.

Please do add me to your PM list. :)

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

definatelyyy...need to continueee...its super exciting...and very well written :)

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rima

@rima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

nice. i esp liked the fact that htis was told through payal's persepctive whivh was refreshingly different

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Part 3 please! 😛. That was bloody awesome 😊

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PSharada

@PSharada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Too good. Looking forward to more like Arnav pacing before the delivery room and being nervous. Do pm me when you update.

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e_enigma

@e_enigma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

LOL contradicting his own words.

Ah, the Arnav we all hope to see one day!

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

loved it dear... loved payal's inner thoughts... we rarely get to know what she is thinking... amazing update...

/and you are asking whether you should update or not???? are you kidding me???? update soon dear

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

fantastic update dear.i loved it

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Great update! I love this concerned Arnav.. His last line to Akash was brilliant.. Drive slow, but get to the hospital fast.. Made me smile.. Thanks for the PM, and please update soonish.. :)

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Brilliant update ! Loved the characters and loved how true you stayed to their character analysis... adored the worried, concerned Arnav keeping in mind to reach the hospital as fast as possible but keeping in mind Khushi's feelings and fears.

Payal was cute.. her thoughts were conveyed nicely , as well as the labour pain Khushi was beginning to suffer.. not in a form of 'pain' but a happiness that soon would be dwelling on them.. :)

Yes Yes, I want part 3 ! :D
hoping you update and continuee ?! PM me when you udpate.

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