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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Oh Rae...I don't how I missed this PM in my Inbox...but this is a tremendous OS...by far, i think the best one you have written, and certainly one of the best ones on the forum...loved it. I agree...that it is essentially the KHUSHIness that Arnav has fallen in love with, her quirks, her laugh, her innocence, her saaf dil, her need to make other happy no matter the cost to her. With that comes the pom poms, and the poor English diction, the dressing sense and comfort...and Arnav loves all of it the complete package, and he would not want her to change for anyone...including himself!!! He is in himself so confident, and secure in himself and his love for her, that he has no need to have his wife change for him...and he could care less what others think...let then go to hell!!

Thanks for capturing the essential qualities of Khushi, and certainly that of Arnav as well.

--Nags😉

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: mandy15
superb:)

Originally posted by: KriaReyansh
Awesome! Written beautifully !!!!

Originally posted by: LondonChick
That was really good

Originally posted by: rubinahansa
mindblowing dear

THANK YOU so much! :)

Originally posted by: ndevi
Tat was really a nice & hot OS . I m glad Arnav told her that she is perfect in her way.

Thank You! :)

I am glad you liked it and thought that I struck the balance. :)

Originally posted by: Shruti_P
wow rae
i think i am now stalking your work
without PM i got hold of this OS
and its just fabulous loved it totally

Hahahahahahaha!

Thank You! :)

I am glad you like my work. :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: charlotte74
Very romantic!!! Arnav loves Khushi because of what she is ... beautiful, funny, helpful, mischievous, crazy, ... the list is pretty long. She should not change that for anything.

Thank You so much! And you got the list right and the sentiment too. :)

Originally posted by: -bansi-
This was awesome and a passionate one...☺️

Loved it a lot..!!

;) :D

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl
Wondeful piece of writing Angel.

This topic is very close to my heart as I feel that Arnav has fallen in love with a simple girl. He has been drawn to her by her beauty, generosity, simplicity and innocence and his Khushi should not ever change. If he wanted a super sophisticated woman, he should have been happy with Lavanya.

Kudos.

Exactly. You are spot on to what I feel.

I dont want to take anything away from Lavanya cos she turned out to be super sweet but to be honest, Arnav loves Khushi, he fell for while she was full on Chamkeeli so why would he appreciate her changing now?

Thank You so much for liking my work and for sharing your views! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Maddy1270
wow. just wow! loved the maturity and love shown by both... your words are so apt that I can almost see the whole scene before my eyes [which might be one of the reasons I so enjoy the passionate scenes you write 😉]!

though I know it will never come true, I hope we'll see something on these lines [a conversation that reveals their maturity and understanding] in the actual show

Hahahahahahahaha! Naughty naughty! ;) :D

Thank You so much! Same here...I want them to address this issue on the show too. :)

Originally posted by: saduf
beautiful OS

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND
wow...beautifully written...totally agree with you...

THANK YOU! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: inspiringstars
A very good OS..loved it, love the song, "just the way you are"..
Beautifully written OS

Thank You so much! :)

I love that song too. Listen to the Boyce Avenue version if you have time...its, for me, even more beautiful than the original. :)

Originally posted by: Chandnii2
Wowww I really loved this!! Especially the part when he said: aur agar badalna hai toh apne liye badalna kissi aur ke liye nahin...awww soo sweet!😳

Thank You! :)

That was my fav line to write too! Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: multifaceted
amazing...fabulous...i was so hoping to read an OS like this with khushi's insecurity and such..loved it..thanks for the PM

Thank You so much! :)

I am glad you enjoyed it.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
Khushi isn't uneducated! She knows english very well!
Remember when Arnav dictated her one letter and she had to type it up!

He was so confident that a girl like her can't do anything! well, she can!
I'm actually inspired of that girl that she sacrifices herself and her needs for her family.

A really good OS! I loved his reaction! He should be more than mad at himself for what he's doing to her.

Thank You so much!

And even if she didnt know English at all and did not have problems with just the pronunciation, no one has the RIGHT to judge her and if they claim to love her then want to change her which is what I have tried to portray via this OS and Arnav's character in it.

And about him being more mad at himself...I tried giving that voice but really he was just kidding around and just voicing his desires but he never meant it in the way Khushi took it...

Glad you enjoyed it.

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Awiee how cute! Amazing OS!

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: rukuswasthika
loved it dear

Originally posted by: newmoon2011
awesome!

Originally posted by: virman_4_ever
loved it awesome update...

Originally posted by: LIKEDMG
Gr8...😳

Originally posted by: sneaky-aj
oh!! i love that song !!
and pretty perfect os if khushi decided to change!

Originally posted by: srilu_123
wow

awesome

THANK YOU so much! :)

I am so glad you all enjoyed it.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: dumas
loved it that was beautiful and your right you fell in love with that person so why do you want them to change loved the os very cute romantic intense and hot loved it thanks for the pm

Exactly! :)

Glad you appreciate and share the sentiment!

Thank You for liking my work and commenting and for that wonderful pic! :) <3

Originally posted by: Poonam786
Loved it! Very sweet... Love the song too, although I listen to the Glee version more than the original.. :D

Thanks for the PM.. :)

Thank You! :)

Listen to Boyce Avenue's version when you have time, its AMAZING!

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