ArHi OS - Never Change IMP NOTE - Pg 19 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Loved it don't want Khushi to change if she did she wouldn't be the girl that he fell in love with. Great OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Awesome one...very good concept 👍🏼
really do not want khushi to change..she shd be what she is..coz thats what affected arnav & thats what made him fall in love with her..love it absolutely👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: -Zara-

this is so perfectly written!!!

i totally agree khushi shudnt change for others but for herself cuz thats what makes her khushi.
xxx


Thank You so much, Zara! :)

Glad you appreciate the sentiment.

Originally posted by: mjht4everr

thnks 4 the pm

loved it
do write more


Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: samiya.tas

"Writing this as answer to some completely ridiculous posts about Khushi needs to change to suit Arnav now that they are married. Well honestly, I think you need to change your shallow thoughts."

loved the line dear... loved your whole os... Khushi is perfect the way she is... amazing piece of work 👏


Thank You! :)

Glad you appreciate the sentiment. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Oh my god that was absolutely awesome. It was written so well that I could imagine them actually using this in the serial. The intensity, the passion, the sensitivity shown was just beautiful. This is exactly how I would imagine Arnav to tackle such a situation. The way he sat her down & calmly asked her "why" was so heartfelt. The connection they both share is just plutonic. Loved every bit of it. Plz continue & update. Plz PM when you next update :) x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: kitzdoll

loved it..read it before i got the pm thnx dear in advance for the pm n the story was really very sweet...


Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: laksh65

a beautiful OS, i wish it happens in the series.

I think better than CVs, you have understood the lead characters very well. Hope they read this and get inspired to make the serial more interesting.
Great job. Please continue with your writing.


Thank You! :)

Awww! That is sooo sweet and I am humbled you think so but I dont think it is true...they are just getting caught in the trp game, I am sure they will bounce back soon cos honestly if they didnt rock, we wouldnt get inspired to write on the show at all. :)

Originally posted by: gkoolans

this was awesome Rae!

love it...so much emotion and yes i also hope for such a reaction from ASR...and i think we shall get such a reaction from him once the MU is cleared and the guilt track is done with and KKG and ASR are one ...sigh...that is long looong wait


Thank You! :)

Same here! :D


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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: e_enigma

Awee I loved it!

As soon as I read the first line of the last para- the i love you words - I was reminded of Mohabbatein. The scene were the daughter tells the father this, " Koi pyaar kare, toh tumse kare, tum jaise ho waise kare, koi tumko badal ke pyaar kare, toh woh pyaar nahi sauda kare, aur sahiba pyaar mein sauda nahi hota."

Yes, I googled it. :P. I only remembered the beginning.

Anyway, loved the update!


They were inspired from those lines but the story is what I innately believe in. :)

Thank You! :)


Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: aakriti120

heya

interesting and unique plot...

loved the way you wrote it..

please pm me for your future works...


Thank You so much! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: mouramen

well done.👏👏

while reading i got transported to some dream world.


Awww! Really?!

Thank You so much! :)
Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Awesome read 👏👏👏 Loved the interaction between Arnav and Khushi 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Rae.. do I need to say it .. beautifully written as always.. thoroughly enjoyed reading it.. :)
Edited by ...Binny... - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
After reading this all I could say is 😍 Aaawwwaaa...❤️ 😍 .
Loved it , 🤗 Muaaahh... 🤗 to you for writing it so beautifully 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Nice OS!

It was cool and pleasant to see Arnav loving Kushia s the way she is..! And Kushi is real mature without any kiddish tactics!

The love making was passionate and sizzling!

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