ArHi OS - Never Change IMP NOTE - Pg 19 - Page 9

Originally posted by: priyah_reddy

Awesome read 👏👏👏 Loved the interaction between Arnav and Khushi 😊

Originally posted by: --Siva--

Nice OS!

It was cool and pleasant to see Arnav loving Kushia s the way she is..! And Kushi is real mature without any kiddish tactics!

The love making was passionate and sizzling!

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Oh Rae...I don't how I missed this PM in my Inbox...but this is a tremendous OS...by far, i think the best one you have written, and certainly one of the best ones on the forum...loved it. I agree...that it is essentially the KHUSHIness that Arnav has fallen in love with, her quirks, her laugh, her innocence, her saaf dil, her need to make other happy no matter the cost to her. With that comes the pom poms, and the poor English diction, the dressing sense and comfort...and Arnav loves all of it the complete package, and he would not want her to change for anyone...including himself!!! He is in himself so confident, and secure in himself and his love for her, that he has no need to have his wife change for him...and he could care less what others think...let then go to hell!!

Thanks for capturing the essential qualities of Khushi, and certainly that of Arnav as well.

--Nags😉

Originally posted by: arnavdeewani

ummm...lovely !

Originally posted by: queenyuks

Awww... this OS was absolutely beautiful. I would love to see a scene like this in the current track
Where one day Arnav goes too far with his aukaad, cheap, and low-class speech, actually hurting Khushi and she tries to wear jeans, or maybe a more revealing suit/sari blouse which makes her uncomfortable and Arnav realizes the impact of his words

I doubt it will ever happen, which is why we have fanfiction, and this one was perfect!

Yuks

Finally...After so many scraps from you and after my hands have finally gotten over commenting so many other parts of yours Im finally coming to this one...
Coz seriously this is one of my favs of yours...
I mean in the beginning when Arnav was angry I was like whats happened to Rae why is she so confused on the beginning and then uske baad when I got the hang of the story I was like Ohhh Rae and dumb impossible !! And I so loved the way you expressed Arnav's woes and the way he expresses himself by being all angry ...And that too just because he thought she was doing this because of him, and that whole pressure makes him feel guilty...Poor Arnie baby man
And Khushi .She's sooo damn sweet !! I mean who would try and change themselves just coz she thinks she should match up to his level and ends up getting shouted...though all of this shouting is just because they love each other !!
I just loved the whole convo between the two of them, the way they make their stances clear and every word said by them brimming full of love...And I loved the way you captured those intimate moments between them
And coming to "the" part *ahem ahem* what ?? DOnt look at me like that !! Im feeling hot hot and really hot...And i need a special cooler to keep myself coool...Hayeee these two have made me go mad ...
I sooo loved this OS Rae🤗

PS: Im sorry for not commenting earlier !! And I hope you are not anymore gussa with me...Please *innocent face* Please

Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-

Finally...After so many scraps from you and after my hands have finally gotten over commenting so many other parts of yours Im finally coming to this one...
Coz seriously this is one of my favs of yours...
I mean in the beginning when Arnav was angry I was like whats happened to Rae why is she so confused on the beginning and then uske baad when I got the hang of the story I was like Ohhh Rae and dumb impossible !! And I so loved the way you expressed Arnav's woes and the way he expresses himself by being all angry ...And that too just because he thought she was doing this because of him, and that whole pressure makes him feel guilty...Poor Arnie baby man
And Khushi .She's sooo damn sweet !! I mean who would try and change themselves just coz she thinks she should match up to his level and ends up getting shouted...though all of this shouting is just because they love each other !!
I just loved the whole convo between the two of them, the way they make their stances clear and every word said by them brimming full of love...And I loved the way you captured those intimate moments between them
And coming to "the" part *ahem ahem* what ?? DOnt look at me like that !! Im feeling hot hot and really hot...And i need a special cooler to keep myself coool...Hayeee these two have made me go mad ...
I sooo loved this OS Rae🤗

PS: Im sorry for not commenting earlier !! And I hope you are not anymore gussa with me...Please *innocent face* Please

I was going through your index, when I came across this.

awesome... thanks for the english translation.. 😉