Swaron SS: it's about time - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
love it simply great
sharon said what she feels ...indirectly hi sahi ..
pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww...itzz awesum... deir love OMG m lovin it... u hav 2 cont plzz dnt stop here..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice plz pm me when u update it was amzing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
PM me when u update please this is soo awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woww!!! Just woww!!!!

Please giv a lil longer partss!!! And I lovee ur writingg!!!! Please PM when u updteee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Note:

Hey guys I know many of you want me to post longer updates but I don't think I can change that. When I started writing this SS, I had already divided it into definite parts and each part has its own unique ending and changing that would kill the essence of this SS. So it would be impossible for me to alter the length of each part.
Edited by tanha_swaron - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanha_swaron

Note:

Hey guys I know many of you want me to post longer updates but I don't think I can change that. When I started writing this SS, I had already divided it into definite parts and each part has its own unique ending and changing that would kill the essence of this SS. So it would be impossible for me to alter the length of each part.


No problem but do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
dont worry i dont mind the size as normally even when i update my updates are small and sometimes big but i like to end on a cliffhanger so i get what u mean
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3

He was stunned! Did she just say what I think she said? He had to admit it of all the things, he never expected her to say that. He didn't know what shocked him more- The fact that she referred to them as us or the fact that she considered those moments special. Or the fact that she even thought about them! He felt so confused! He suddenly felt the need to lie down. But he had to clear a few things before that. He couldn't decide which question to ask first. So he blurted out the first one that he could think of.

"Were those moments special for you?"

He saw her eyes go wide as she struggled to hide her emotions.

"What...I….no…I just…." She stammered.

She turned to leave.

No way! He thought. Not this time!

He grabbed her hand and pinned her against the wall. He couldn't just let her go this time, leaving his questions unanswered yet again. It would quite literally drive him crazy! He was tired of feeling frustrated!

"Leave me!" she said, carefully avoiding his eyes.

"Not before you answer my question!"

"Let me go!"

He pinned her hand against the wall, intertwining his fingers with hers and with his other hand he lifted her chin forcing her to look into his eyes.

"Answer me."

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"Answer me."

Something in his voice made her forget whatever lie she was thinking about telling him. The intensity of his gaze shattered all thought processes and played havoc on her mind and heart and before she could stop herself she whispered-

"Yes."

"What?!?" he said, shock reverberating in that single word.

"Yes" She said deciding to come clean this time. "Those moments were special to me! But clearly they weren't special to you!"

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It took him a minute to digest what she just said. His heart began racing. His insides had started dancing. He felt like laughing and crying at the same time.They do mean something to her.

And then his mind registered the next words she had spoken. And he couldn't help but give a short laugh. Seeing the confusion and hurt in her eyes he hastened to relieve her of her agony.

"Do you honestly think, for even a single moment, that I don't consider every single moment that has passed between us special?" She is crazy!

"Oh, yeah? Is that why you broadcasted it in front of your sister?"

"My...what?"

What on earth is she talking about? God, she really is crazy!

"Just stop pretending alright! She knows about us! She….she called me…called me Bhabhi!" she said, spitting out the last word.

And he couldn't help but smile.

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Seeing him smile like that made her blood boil. Before she could do or say anything he replied-

"I didn't tell her anything. I don't know what she told you but you have to know that I most certainly did not tell her anything about us!"

Looking into his eyes she knew that he was telling the truth.

"You didn't…?

"No."

She suddenly felt very stupid.

"By the way," he continued "since when did you and I become us?"

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Keep the comments coming guys. They are very encouraging.

Edited by tanha_swaron - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Very nicely written. I can only imagine if something like this is to happen in D3.

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