Swaron SS: it's about time - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: tanha_swaron

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Hey guys I know many of you want me to post longer updates but I don't think I can change that. When I started writing this SS, I had already divided it into definite parts and each part has its own unique ending and changing that would kill the essence of this SS. So it would be impossible for me to alter the length of each part.


its alright dear!
we understand..
continue the way you had initially thought of..!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
i loved part 3 a lot!
very well penned!
i am really happy that finally Sharon has let out her feelings to Swayam!
thnx fr d pm
update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Part 4

"Since when did you and I become us?"

Damn! She thought. I was hoping it wouldn't come and bite me in the ass! What am I going to do now?

"I…..what I….um…."

"Uh-huh!" he said grinning.

He is mocking me!

"Are u making fun of me?" she asked angrily.

"Do you think I am making fun of you?" he retorted cockily.

"Ugh! Stop answering my questions with questions!" she snapped.

"Only if you start answering mine!" he replied calmly.

"You are irritating!"

"And you are beautiful!"

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She looks beautiful even when she is angry. He thought. Especially when she is angry.

And he couldn't stop himself from saying-

"And you are beautiful!"

He got the satisfaction of seeing her mouth fall open in shock.

It took her a moment to regain her composure.

And when she did her cheeks turned crimson.

And all it took was that moment, for him to realize, how much that statement affected her.

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"And you are beautiful!"

She tried to hide the tremendous effect those words had on her.

What is wrong with me? She thought. Why am I reacting like this?

When he had said those words her heart had started fluttering like a humming bird and she had felt a shiver crawl up her spine. She was certain she had blushed and even more certain that he had seen her blushing.

In the midst of all this, she suddenly realized that she was still bodily pinned to the wall by him.

And that added more colour to her already crimsoned cheeks.

To hide her embarrassment, she donned the mask of anger.

"Let me go!" she shouted angrily.

She noticed that he didn't even flinch. It was as if he expected her to do this.

"Do you want me to let you go?" he asked calmly.

She was really angry now. Angry at him for mocking her and messing with her head. Angry at herself for feeling that way. I hate him. I hate the way he affects me! I hate the way he makes me feel all confused! I just hate him!

She lost it then. She lost control over her body. She lost control of her thoughts. She threw her senses out the window and waved goodbye to Rationality. She had no idea what she was doing anymore.

So when she did, what she did next, it surprised her as much as it surprised him.

"I hate you!" she said and without skipping a beat fused her mouth with his.

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I m a little disappointed with the number of comments. I hope you guys would do better this time.
Edited by tanha_swaron - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Once again very nicely written.
Loved reading it..and i like it even more when i read all the parts together.
Waiting for your next update. Thx for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
amazing i loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Heya Hiii :D please do continue PM me when u update the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
aaarrrgghhh stupid like button not working... but nice update... i hate u.. SwaRon ka kuch nai ho sakta...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Wow this is beautiful...do write soon and thanks for the PM...you are an awesome writer...love the way you express the thought...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Whoa .. this is REALLY REALLY good !!!

I havent read this good a SwaROn SS in a long time .. whats ur name ? 😳

Plz do update soon !>😳

I LOVE the Traumatized Sharon and the SO SO Smug Swyaam 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
woow really amazing update..the best part when sharon blush n i hate u.our predictable sharon.waiting for ur next update n thanks for pm.update it as fast as possible 😊

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