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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-

Chandni di ke reserve karne se kuchh ni hota...comment toh mera hi 1st hai😛




Sanya-Riddhi : Kamaal ki kudiyaan!!👏 LOL koi doubt that kya😆
Riddhi is so confident jhooth bolne mei😆


I loved Sanya-Suhana's part...Sanya is seriously a true friend...i love how she always explains things to both Ayaan & Suhana😳 she's a child in her own way but mostly plays the amma to the group esp to Ayaan and Suhana


SuYaan ka PATCH UP😍
It was tooo cute...Suhana's dialogue:-"I let you go once, I won't let you go again," is ☺️
and the part where she explains him how she wants them to be in the place of Sanya-Rohit one day...Awwie😍


hahaha J.P saw them when they were about to kiss🤣
ThankGod iske aage kuchh ni hua...warna he wud have fainted😆 LOL sach mein!



PRECAP: haila🥱
I hope Suhana ke parents like Ayaan...aur fir chatt mangni[engagement]..patt byaah[wedding]😛😆

hehe wait n watch😊

Thank u Vipu🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Tani91

reserved😛

EDIT- chotu sa comment sorry cant write much its ok🤗

Riddhi rocks...I literally laughed for like 5 minutes staright at the small Riddhi-Dhruv banter about Airtel🤣 Hehe glad u liked that part

WOOOHO Goa trip is coming and of course SuYan making up😍 made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside

yup trip to Goa up next

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 24

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The following day Suhana's parents arrived back to her flat at 11 in the morning. Her father sat down with her.

"So Sunshine, what's up...what do you want to confess to us," He asked.

"How do you know I want to confess something?"

"Suhana it's so easy to read your face'come on tell me what's up,"

"I will'I'm just waiting for them to arrive'" Suhana gulped, she was getting nervous by the minute.

"For who to arrive?" Mrs Bajpai asked just as the doorbell rang and Suhana went to receive it. She came back accompanied by Ayaan, Sanya, Rohan, Dhruv and Riddhi.

"Mumma, Papa you guys already guessed I'm gonna confess something'and here it is' this is Ayesha'I mean Ayaan who I've been calling Ayesha all this time to you guys'who you met yesterday is Riddhi, Sanya's nanad'me and Ayaan '" Suhana said to her parents not finishing the sentence so Ayaan took it from there.

"What she's trying to say is we love each other and are in a relationship," Ayaan said confidently. Suhana's parents looked slightly stunned but recovered well to look at Suhana questioningly to elaborate.

"I'm sorry I lied to you'I just didn't know how you guys would react'I was scared you won't approve of our relationship or something, I cannot chose between you guys and him," Suhana said.

"You love each other? Suhana you love this boy enough to lie to us?" Mr. Bajpai asked.

"Papa I'm sorry, I just'I didn't think I'd have to tell you about Ayaan like this'but he refused to speak to me if I didn't tell you guys about us," Suhana said, tears were welling up in her eyes and Ayaan reflexively held her hand. Rohit had strictly advised him to avoid physical contact with Suhana, it wouldn't set the right impression according to him.

"Sir, I love Suhana and we are serious so I wouldn't want to lie to you, neither would I want her to go against you for me,"

"So what do you want from us?" Mr Bajpai asked still stern

"Just your approval,"

"Look Mr. Ayaan, app bade log hai, we don't match your status, we're ordinary middle-class people'things like courtship don't go down well in our society'people won't look at my daughter in the same way and I can't stand people thinking negatively of Suhana,"

"Just call me Ayaan," Ayaan said, "and I understand where you are coming from, I do see me and Suhana married one day, I wouldn't leave her because this is not a fling for us, we are serious'as for status and all that, frankly speaking I don't care about such things and my parents were my only family and they expired 3 years ago, from my side no one will care what social class any girl I'm with is'"

After more convincing from Ayaan, Suhana and their friends Mr Bajpai turned to his wife. She knew he was asking for her opinion.

"manne chokro pasand che, Suhana ne aana thi handsome and samajdar chokro nay mal le" (I like this boy, Suhana won't find a more handsome and sensible boy than him) Mrs Bajpai said smiling. Suhana smiled, she knew the battle was now won.

"Well if you two are so sure then who am I to object" Mr Bajpai said referring to Suhana and her mother. Suhana went up to her father and hugged him.

"Ayaan just remember'I don't want the courtship to last years, I'd rather you gave your relationship a name before people started pointing fingers," Mr Bajpai said.

"Yes I understand," Ayaan said, extremely pleased to have won Suhana's parents over,

They took Suhana's parent permission for the Goa trip as well. Later when everyone had left Suhana was lying with her head in her mother's lap and smiling.

"mumma apko sach mein Ayaan pasand hai?" Suhana asked

"haan'aur mujhe paata pehle se he tha ki tumhari Ayesha koi ladka hai," her mother said stroking Suhana's hair.

"kaise?" Suhana asked

"Phone pe tumne jab pehli baar Ayaa-esha bola tha usse paata chal gaya tha'par mujhe tujh pe bharosa tha aur aaj tunne usse toda nahin'Ayaan seems perfect for my little Sunshine,"

"He is perfect'the perfect gentleman, dedicated businessman, selfless human being, the bestest friend and a passionate love'.he turns into everything I need him to be before I ask for it'when I'm with him I feel safe'complete" Suhana said so happy to share this with her mum

"You love him,"

"More than I'll ever be able to tell him," Suhana replied

"in that case you won't have to tell him, he'll already know," her mother replied, "that's how it is in love,"

By the weekend Suhana's parents left for home in Ahemdabad.

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The following Wednesday Ayaan was in his cabin with Nisha when Rohan walked in.

"Boss what time we leaving on Friday?" Rohan asked.

"9pm'should reach Goa by 9am, as there are 7 of us; Rohit and I were wondering whether to just take his SUV and my Audi'Sanya and Suhana don't care how we get there as long as we get to Goa,"

"Women," Rohan rolled his eyes. Nisha was about to respond to this but her phone rang. It was her brother.

"hi bhai," Nisha said. Ayaan and Rohan noticed her look worried as conversation carried on, "nahin bhai aap Mumbai nahin aa sakte'I mean aa sakte hain but mein out of town jaa rahi hoon'you know office ke kaam se," Nisha lied as Ayaan and Rohan looked on.

"aww it's such a shame, mein Friday raat ko ja rahi hoon'Goa'humari nayi ad ka shoot wahan ho raha hai'apko yakeen nahin toh mere boss se baat kijiye" Nisha lied, "app tension mat lo, mein jald hi Banglore aaungi visit ke liye'yes..Ok'haan pepper spray saath mein hai, nahin mujhe body guard ki zaroorat nahin'ok'yes'ok bye," Nisha ended the conversation. Ayaan and Rohan gave her a questioning look.

"I needed an excuse to put him off'my brother can't see the way I live in Mumbai'I'll just go off somewhere on my own, Panchgini or something for the weekend he's in Mumbai'I just said Goa like that as you guys were talking about it and the name was on top of my head" Nisha explained. A small part of Rohan wished Nisha was actually coming to Goa.

"Nish, why don't you come Goa with us'I mean Sanya, Suhana and Riddhi will be there, and you have your pepper spray so you don't need to worry," Ayaan smiled

"me? How can I'I mean it's all your close friends'I don't even know them, I just know you guys, what will they all think?" Nisha said.

"Honestly they won't mind, they'd love the idea, Sanya would definitely want to meet you, please join us," Ayaan insisted. Nisha was still hesitant.

Rohan had an idea, "tumhe tumhare darling Virat Kohli ki kasaam," he smirked

"That's cheating," Nisha scowled

"Just say yes, believe me you'll never have had the amount of fun you'll have this weekend with us," Rohan said. Nisha finally agreed

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Friday evening after finishing work and whatever else all of them needed to do, they were packed and ready to leave. Ayaan picked up Suhana, then Rohan, then Nisha and joined Rohit, Sanya, Riddhi and Dhruv, who were both engaged in banter.

Rohan introduced Nisha to everyone and as expected they all gelled well and Sanya gave her the trademark Sanya hug.

The gang was on the road, windows rolled down blasting their current favourite tracks singing along.

"Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi

Ladkhadane lagi mushkurane lagi

Bewajah har jagah aane jaane lagi
Tu mujhe main tujhe
Jo bhi ho dil mein woh khul ke bataane lagi

Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi

Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi"

Sanya and Rohit noticed from car windows that Ayaan was singing, for the first time in a long while in front of them, they feared going Goa might bring back his bad memories but it looked like this is exactly what he needed, a chance to make new memories this time with Suhana.

Rohan and Nisha seemed to be having fun in the back seat trying to do a little dance step along with the song.

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Edited by shona. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
leaving chotu sa comment again since helping dad with something

SuYan's confrontation scene with parents although not a confrontation one...hehehe I loved it, could imagine Mr Bajpayee all stern and mean but then warming up to him...it would be fun to see some scenes like he tries to stop SuYaan from romancing or something like a comedy type scene🤣. and YAY Mumma saying Guju <3 also her convo with Suhana was too cute

Rohan-Nisha-Ayaan convo was cute and funny as well

Daaru Desi 🥳


VMs ka toh you know how I feel😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sona.. Nice going.. Mr.. bajpai agreeing on SUYaan's relationship is good..Nisha joining and her phone call with brother is superb... Goa trip going to be interesting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhi786

Sona.. Nice going.. Mr.. bajpai agreeing on SUYaan's relationship is good..Nisha joining and her phone call with brother is superb... Goa trip going to be interesting...



thank u Abhi
glad u liked

hopefully u'll like the Goa trip in next part


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Tani91

leaving chotu sa comment again since helping dad with something its ok

SuYan's confrontation scene with parents although not a confrontation one...hehehe I loved it, could imagine Mr Bajpayee all stern and mean but then warming up to him... i suck at writing dramatic and confrontation scenes lol
it would be fun to see some scenes like he tries to stop SuYaan from romancing or something like a comedy type scene🤣. hehe will defo try to include something of the sort and YAY Mumma saying Guju <3 also her convo with Suhana was too cute

Rohan-Nisha-Ayaan convo was cute and funny as well she's just mad n he likes that most abt her

Daaru Desi 🥳


VMs ka toh you know how I feel😛 yup n i love how u made the tie-scene avis...have them saved

Thank u Chandz!🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved this part Shona. The SuYaan scene with Suhana's parents was too good. Loved how Suhana's mum reacted and the little scene between mum-daughter was sweet. I'm loving Nisha, how she lied to her bro on the phone lol. Looking forward to the next part, in Goa :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u Siddhi
glad u liked this part n hope u like the next one also

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 25

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The gang arrived at Ayaan's villa by 9:30am.

"sorry guys this is my smallest villa so some of us are gonna have to share rooms...this villa was bought only for me and my partying not to stay here for long," Ayaan said mainly to Suhana,Nisha, Dhruv and Riddhi who hadn't been here before.


The villa was grand and luxurious as Suhana had come to expect from Ayaan. The gang decided on taking a nap before anything else as all of them were knackered.


Suhana was sharing rooms with Nisha as Sanya-Riddhi, Rohit-Dhruv and Rohan took up the other rooms. Ayaan went into his room, obviously the last time he was here he hadn't left the room this tidy, he had broken everything in sight out of grief at the news of his parents demise, OP(Om Prakash) his house helper must have cleaned everything up after her left.

He was exhausted from driving through the night so fell asleep instantly.

It was 12:30pm when water droplets falling slowly on his face woke Ayaan. He slowly opened his eyes so notice Suhana dressed in a beautiful pink summer dress smiling down at him

"Rise and shine" she chimed. And he blinked a couple of times to make sure she was actually there. She was, her hair was dripping wet as it had just been washed, she'd used it to wake him.

"No let's go back to sleep," Ayaan moaned in his sleep, he was still sleep deprived.

"Come on get up, freshen up and eat something," Suhana said trying to pull Ayaan up but instead he pulled her down and rolled over so he was on top.

"Ayaan what are you doing?" Suhana said,

"hmm you tell me," Ayaan said slowly kissing her forehead and was moving down to her lips when she put her fingers to his lips

"pyar karne ke liye pura din hai, pehle fresh ho jao," Suhana said.

"or what?" Ayaan challenged

"or," Suhana contemplated for a second and then began tickling him in the hope he would be ticklish which he was, instantly his hold on Suhana loosened as he tried to fight her off.

Ayaan finally got out of bed and went into the shower.

Half an hour later the 8 friends were having brunch and going through the day's activities; they were going to go to the beach after lunch, some shopping later and then party.

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"Bloody hell, I've been in India for over a week and I'm already a darker shade if tanned," Dhruv said applying sunscreen on his arms.

"You're applying the wrong cream, you need Fair and Handsome to regain your fairness," Riddhi said giggling.

"Pracharan ki mata khabhi toh kuch useful advice do," Dhruv said irritated by the heat.

Across the beach Rohit and Sanya were walking in along the beach, in the shallow waters, Rohan and Nisha were horse riding and joking around. Ayaan and Suhana was sitting together, she was resting her head against his shoulder.

"How hard is it to be back here?" Suhana asked

"not as hard as I expected," Ayaan said, "it's cool to be back, you know we'd come here like every month for a weekend and totally get wasted and forget that the rest of the world existed...when I wasn't responsible for a huge company, when I knew despite everything else my parents would clean up my mess, before I wanted to gain your parents' approval"

"You already won them over," Suhana replied as her phone rang, it was from the hospital. She was on the phone for almost an hour. Dhruv came over to Ayaan.

"Does it not bother you that she's not paying attention to you?"

"naah, for all we know she could be saving someone's life over the phone," Ayaan replied paused and then said, "come on,let's have a game of volleyball,"

"Volleyball?" Dhruv asked

"yup let's see if the Brits play volleyball as well as football," Ayaan joked

"you sure you'll be able to surf without a cricket bat," Dhruv mocked.

The gang got together to play, Dhruv,Rohit,Sanya and Suhana in one team, Ayaan, Nisha, Rohan and Riddhi in the other team.

"Good luck, and make sure you don't go light on me," Suhana said to Ayaan

"Even if I did I'd still beat you," Ayaan smirked

"We'll see about that," Suhana said, "wait, if I beat you then will you tell me what you've been trying since my parents left?" Suhana said, Ayaan looked surprised, "just coz you don't tell me Ayaan it doesn't mean I don't know, I read it in your face,"

"Yeah ok deal," Ayaan said, a part of him wanted to lose this volleyball match so he could finally ask Suhana what he wanted to for the last week, another part wanted more time to speculate her answer.

Suhana guessed what battle was waging in Ayaan's mind and wanted him to get it off his chest and also because she wanted to give him the answer he wanted to hear.

The volleyball match got underway. Though it was a close match it was eventually won by Dhruv's team.

"Oh crap," Ayaan said. Suhana approached.

"So?" Suhana asked

"Give me 24 hours? I wanna make it perfect," Ayaan said


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Edited by shona. - 13 years ago

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