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@fatprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Oh my God ! Dat was beautiful . . . 😭 Goes so perfectly wid da actual personalities of da characters, like u kno if such situation arise dis might exactly be how da 2 of dem react. Hope this gets to da script writers coz i wanna see dis 4 real. Da part where ASR is cryin in front of his SUV was playin in my mind. Too good !👏👏👏

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

That was... I am trying to think of something to say... Well wow... Brilliant really. You captured their emotions extremely well...like spot on hon... I can actually see something like this happening on the show... And the way you went back and forth between A&K was very well done.. I loved it!!! The Arhi magic was full on...

Cheers

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Zania

@zaniax

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

WOW!!! Tht was FAB!!!. Choo sweet, cute and Really touching . Loveddd everythin abt it specially those dialouges...they were very thoughtful . How I Wish we cud see somethin like this in d show..it wud be a such beautiful scene. 😍 Brilliant piece of writing!!! 👏👏

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

oh i juz lovd it.

u've shown arnav nd khushi's feelings perfectly!!

i juz lovd arnav. this tym he's nt d khadoos LG!! he feels guilty nd wants khushi to punish him.

nd khushi was so sweet as she doesnt want her arnavji to lower his heads infrnt of anyone! she didnt punish him but said dat next tym plz give chances. so lovely 👏

i lovd d concept of ur story.

superb lovd it.

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Rae it was fab. So very well written and i was stunned by the emotions. Fab yaar. Khushi taking a decision was wow. She needs to do that. And thanks for the pm.

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Binita

@...Binny...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Rae.. Just Loved it to bits.. too adorable..:)

I was about to comment when I saw the second part.. Love you for finishing... since I will be gone for the next few weeks.. 🤗

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

brilliantly written. greatly described. loved every word. displayed the picture perfectly and surprisingly it didnt disappoint me as i truely felt that arnav should suffer big time for what he did, but the way you wrote this has shown me that if THIS happened i would also have forgiven arnav too.

thank you

xxx

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

That was mindblowing... totally loved it... :)

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livy

@livy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

that was really good. well done. thanks.

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Wow, Rae...
I've told you before, and I'll tell you again... You're an amazing writer. Especially when it comes to angst...
But thank god you gave a hyappy ending for this... phew..
Or else I'd be scolding you properly for making me cry to sleep... :'(

Loved it, babe... :) :)
Thanks for the pm... <3 <3 <3