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Amena

@SaNaYa_4EvEr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

loved it... ❤️ one thing I hate about os is that they end so fast...😆

but it was a beautiful os... I could def. see Khushi and Arnav confession to be like this...😍

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MinnieRose

@MinnieRose

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

That was adorable and beautifully written❤️

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

OMG rae u r just fantastic

now what is left u r a good siggy maker now a writer..

its just...😭...so emotional i had tears in my eyes

now i got the index of your work m gonna read them soon too

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Loved it!

The guy who never says sorry was full of it when she was leaving. Glad his love overpowered his ego!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awesome beautifully emotionally filled heart breaking and a perfectly done and then the cloud part and hope is given loved that was perfectly written and emotionally felt the hurt the betrayal the anger the love awesome thank you so much for the english translations and the pm

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

heart-breaking and heart-warming, at the same time... I've always wanted khushi to go away from arnav whether he realises the truth or not, but your version of the unfolding of events seemed so apt. I do commend you on your language and expression... sometimes the grammatical mistakes and incorrect spelling can put one off while reading a story, but loved your style!

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

amazing os loved it to the core pls pm me for ur future updates

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mandymeggy

@mandymeggy

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

that was so beautifully written, thank you for that wonderful read. the characterization was spot on, so was the dialogue, emotions...everything! as per the current track, I would love for khushi to leave arnav and start a life of her own, but this arnav just totally melted my heart :p why can't we see him like this all the time :(

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

This was a very very nice OS. I loved reading it.
I would like to see the ASR facade crumble at least once in front of Khushi. If there's one person who deserves to see the man underneath the mask its her and this fic portrayed that moment beautifully

Yuks

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Really enjoyed reading it.

I loved how you wove their history of key moments into their present.

Ex. the original 'sorry' scene.

When I have a visceral response to a scene I always feel that the writer must have felt something in their heart when they wrote it. In your OS, this was the moment when we saw what Khushi did with the sindoor. That moment was emblematic.

Well done.

Edited by Inked - 13 years ago