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I thoroughly enjoyed reading that!😊 Although I have read many of your work, I love the fact that it is still unpredictable, for instance your choice of words to describe how KKG had changed into KKGSR, I thought it'd be more bitter, cold, sarcastic along those lines but instead it was scared, defeated, tired, which is in a way more fitting to her character.👍🏼 Beautifully written, it has a really nice flow and I liked how you presented it from both their point of view. 👏 That sorry scene from the show was used very appropriately & the actual 'sorry' from Arnav itself was quite something too, I did indeed imagine everything going still!.. Another nice bit I remember is the description that "she could feel every word, every emotion, he was pouring out in his speech which might be incoherant to others but not her" ties in nicely with the show too~ LOVED the ending, I'm glad you ended it on a happy note! Keep up the great work!!🤗 🤗 🤗

PS: Btw, you HAVE to stop doing this to me, do you know you nearly gave me a mini-attack when I reached the end of Part 1 [I didn't even know it was in parts] ?!! because I don't scroll down beforehand, I had no idea of the length, I was like NOOO!! so, yeah.. bare that in mind next time for me?! 😳😛