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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow very nice please PM me when you update
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fab update.im loving it.😍



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wow

this is soo gud.
can't wait for the act of james and jenny :)
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LOL love the update i absolutely love their dialogues! and omg the precap is so exciting i cant wait!
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wow this was awesome can't wait for the next part!! 😃
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I loved the update! Please continue soon! Thanks for the PM!
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wow this is getting even more interesting...love to see how they do their play...hope they have chemistry like they had in the show in the teri meri sequence...cnt wait for the next part...continue sooon pliiiz n thnx 4da pm dear...
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loved it.plz continue sooon... plz pm me tooo!!!!👏
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dat was gr8..
so they r paired together for d play.. dis is gonna b fun..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Arnav: Sir i have been watching his female...and she is...

Khushi: Watching and Acting mein bohot farak hota hai Mr. Captain...

RS: So its final then...good we got our leads...and now i will select the supproting cast...

RS: Khushi come and take your script...i want you to study it was i think you need sometime to understand the charecter of jenny...and yes arnav rightly said its tough to play jenny...she has lots of emotions but i could see its you who will be able to play jenny the best...I can see it in your eyes...

Arnav (with what the f*** look) in her eyes? how can he talk to her like this? and khushi? how can she take it?

RS: So guys cys tomorrow.

Tanni: Oh god he is such a hottie...

Khushi: That he is Tan...you are get cut off by Arnav

Arnav: Drooling over professor?...no wonder Ms. Khushi Kumari Gupta...you are such a tease...

Khushi: Mind your tongue Arnav...i think you think quite low of me...which is disgusting...it shows your attitude towards others...

Arnav: Low of you...you dont even exist for me...pata nahi what RS has seen in you and made you my heroin...

Khushi: Excuse me...ME...Ur HEROIN?...Dream on...you are not even in my league...

Arnav: We will see that darling...and winked...and leaves

Khushi: dont call me darling she shouted...wait a minute did he wink? khushi looking at tanni and asking her...

Tanni: He did

Khushi: How dare he...Hello Mr.

Arnav turned...khushi went towards him...how dare you wink at me? and she slips on a banana peal...arnav grabs her...

Khushi's eyes still still closed anticipating a fall...

Arnav: she opened her eyes to find herself in his arms...and he winked again...Did i wink?

Khushi: You did wink..and how dare you touch me?

Arnav: Smirks and leaves her and she fell on the ground hurting her back.

Khushi: aaaooo.

Arnav: Serves you right madam. Now nag DONT CALL ME MADAM.

Annie and Tanni helps her to stand...she still in pain...

Khushi: Dekhlungi...(i will see you)

Arnav: Anytime and waves at her.

Khushi: Huffs and puffs

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Khushi reading her script

Its a tale about a young boy who wish to join millitary. he is an orphen. the only person in his life is jenny his childhood friend. They grew up together. they were best of friends and they could share anything and every thing...love was not a word they ever realised for each other...when he needed her she was there and vice-versa. They used to fight...patch up more than 25 times a day...He needed her and she needed him. that was there relationship. they have never been physical. they never needed it actually. he doesnot have many friend...she is his world. She had friends but only for time pass. she knew that james is her responsibility. The word LOVE was alien to then until when the day came when he was leaving for his journey for the world leaving his world behind...They finally realise their love for each other...

Khushi started wipping after reading the whole story...she thought how can that laad governer can write so intense and emotional story...this guy is mystry for me. I would love to love a guy like James but surely not Arnav Singh Raizada...and yes arnav no one can play Jenny better than me...i dont know about you though how will you manage to play your charecter. you are totally opposite of james.

She went throught the scrpit another time...she touched his handwritting...she had a beautiful feeling while she read the stroy again and again slowly getting deep in jenny's charecter.

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Next morning she woke up on her bed...she realised that she slept while reading as she was hugging the script...

She smiled looking at the script...what a lovely story she thought...hmm kuch to baat hai is laad governer mein...

Tanni: Hurry up khushi...we have to go to the rehersal hall soon.

Khushi: She hugs her...

Tanni: Kya baat hai badi jhappi mar rahe ho subha subha?

Khushi: I love this script yaar...

Tanni: And the script writter?

Khushi: Shut up tan

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Tanni: Shit man RS is looking so hot in blue...Khush do you think he has a gf?

Khushi: My my...chal jaake puchti hoon...

Tanni: R u mad? no ways

Khushi: RS

Tanni: I will kill you khushi

Khushi: RS can i ask you a personal question?

Arnav, Abhi, Lav, Annie and Tanni all had "O" on there mouth...who the hell she is? I mean personal question to RS?

Arnav: We never had balls to talk to RS like this.

Abhi: I think RS likes Khushi

Arnav: Shut up Abhi...no chance...look at her class...and RS is of different league.

Abhi: Utni bhi karab nahi hai Arnav...i am thinking of proposing her.

Arnav: Are you kidding me Abhi?

Abhi: Ya humdono ka "class" bhi ek hai

Arnav: Dont bug me abhi i know you like Annie since we were in class 9.

Abhi: Ya but i was thinking khushi is better you know (abhi is teasing arnav...he knows that khushi has some effect on aranv which arnav is trying to deny himself...abhi loves annie since they were in class 9. He has seen Arnav with lots of girls. but khushi was different...he liked khushi for arnav. he always thpught that she will be an appropriate girl for him and he want arnav to realise it)

Arnav: You cant like him abhi...please stop giving bull.

Abhi: Kyu tumhe pasand hai?

Arnav: Oh please, never, chhi

RS: Are we ready guys? Arnav? Khushi? Can we have you on the stage?

RS keeoing his right index finger on his cheeks...hmmm he breadth out...i think you guys will make a cute couple.

Arnav whispered: Cute! my foot

Khushi: I swear...i agree with you for the first time.

Arnav: I am talking about you KKG

Khushi: Oh really i thought you know yourself so well

Arnav: You pointing his finger at khushi

Khushi grabs the finger and spreads out her index finger to him...holding his hand.

RS: If you guys have finished your personal talk shall we proceed? Good...My views...you will be wearing formals and khushi will be wearing gowns...

Arnav: bursted out laughing...RS she doesnot were westerns you know.

Khushi: Shut up Arnav

RS: But she have to wear if she is doing the play...tomorrow they will come to take your measurements...

RS: Ok lets see your chemistry together...we will start with the scene where Jenny propose James

Khushi: RS no no please can we do some single shots first?

Arnav: Kyu daar gayi? Well kisko pata tha you will propose me in front of the whole college...

Khushi: Its in the drama.

Arnav: So what KKG will propose ASR he smirked...

Khushi: I your dreams...

Arnav: On stage sweety...ya ya i will not call you sweety.

RS: Lets start...are we ready?

The dialoge is

Jenny:James (coming close to him) please dont leave me.
James: Jenny i wish i could...but you know my dreams...
Jenny: Jenny's heart fallen apart...(grab his collar) so i was never a part of your dreams...What about those dreams which we saw together?
James: What dreams are you talking about? We have never promised anything to each other...we always wanted each other's support thats it.
Jenny: Thats it James? So if i die it will not matter to you that means?
James: Shut up Jenny how can you tell this?
Jenny: You are expecting me to do the same...(this point you are going to put glycerie in your eyes while we will have spot light on James)
Jenny: I cant see you die James...I cant
James will understand her unsaid words...he will hold her waist look into her eyes...
Jenny: I love you james. I really do...you are my world...my world of happiness, my world of sorrows...please dont leave me.

RS: thats it shall we start?

Arnav: Chaliye shuru kijiye aapka proposal...

Khushi: RS i really cant do this...please give me a single scene.

RS: Khushi you have to do it dear (arnav raised his eyebrows).

Arnav: RS isse nahi hoga i have told you.

Khushi came close to him and stood in front...

She closed her eyes and started narrating the dialoges...she said it in one go without pausing and without letting arnav to say his part.

Everyone bursted out in laugh...

Arnav: You will propose me closing your eyes?

Khushi: I am not proposing you...

Arnav: Ok Ok relax...lets give it a try second time.

Khushi said two lines with her eyes open and then she was supposed to grab her collar...her hands shivered...Arnav smirked...he grabed her hand and put them on his collar...she looked at him but he was looking else where. (she thought hey DM maaf kardena)


Stop calling your god for help and contunie...this is no sin. (Khushi was like "O" her mouth open...how did he know what she thought?)

Arnav: Is mein hi yeh haal hai jab kamar pe haat dalungi tab kya hoga tumhara?

Khushi: What! No! she shifted back. you cannot touch me.

Arnav: I am not touching you dear...i am touching Jenny...Remember you are jenny...i have no interest touching you...

RS: Whats happening yaar Khushi will you stop fussing?

Arnav: Dekhlo Khushi you will fail. Arnav Singh Raizada na kabhi hara hai na kabhi harega...to tum kis khet ki muli ho.

Khushi: RS can we take it from the top? Arnav raised his eyebrows...

Khushi:James (coming close to him) please dont leave me.
Arnav: Jenny i wish i could...but you know my dreams...
Jenny: Jenny's heart fallen apart...(grab his collar) so i was never a part of your dreams...What about those dreams which we saw together?
James: What dreams are you talking about? We have never promised anything to each other...we always wanted each other's support thats it.
Jenny: Thats it James? So if i die it will not matter to you that means?
James: Shut up Jenny how can you tell this?
Jenny: You are expecting me to do the same.
Jenny: I cant see you die James...I cant
Aranv: hold her waist look into her eyes

Khushi: Pushes him back...dont touch me.

Arnav: RS what is this...i cant do it with her...she is so fussy...she doesnot even understand the real thing and acting. RS how can i do those intimate scence with her if she acts so immature?

RS: Khushi are you interested in this play or not?

Khushi: Very confussed...RS i am...but

RS: But what khushi?

Khushi: RS i cant do it with Arnav.

RS: Funny...you cant do it with him, he cant do it with you? what nonsense guys...and arnav whats wrong with you? you have always made your partner comfortable with you while acting whats wrong today?

Arnav: RS she is crazy

Khushi: No i am not RS. you come here i will act with you and let him see.

Khushi does the whole scene with RS and aranv was watching it. she did it smoothly looking down all the time she didnt see in RS's eyes while doing the rehersal.

RS: Good but you need to look into my eyes when you propose.

Arnav's humor was gone...he didnt like at all when RS touched her waist. and when she said I love you thought she was looking down but still she said that.

RS: Ok Arnav lets practice with you. Make her comfy. She did it smoothly with me. So she can do that with you also.

Arnav thought I know why is she comfortable with you RS

Khushi: RS can be pack up today? I will rehearse and then do it...

RS: Thats fine...you are nice...dont worry...you will get the beat soon...its just a matter of chemistry between both of you which is missing right now.

Khushi: Is it not possible that you be james?

RS: smiled i would have loved to but arnav will be superb in it. trust me.

Arnav thought (oh now she wants him to be her partner...clever girl...first rishi and then RS? and how dare you say that you dont want to act with me? its my script, my charecters...if i want i can dump you...just wait and watch)

Precap: Rishi's intensions

Edited by Appy_Indy - 13 years ago

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