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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

*phew* ab jaan aa gayi !!! d preview scared me but d real chapter turned out to be something else 😆...finally he said sorry !!! n imad, arre wah baby se bhi bonding ho gayi !!!

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Sia

@SiasCreations

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Another amazing chapter - absolutely wonderful. I love how you didn't drag it all out, and how you got straight to the point. Ahh, you made it perfect. Well written 😃

Edited by Mistiix3 - 13 years ago

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tinkerbel

@tinkerbel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

wow!really really loved it..specialy the pics u used r brilliant..

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doony

@doony

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

"get well soon so I can hit you"Nice😆

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Sara

@SaraV5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

I was reading an article in forum when I notice that you add the part9 I thought wow! certainly it will be great but sincerely I had a fear of reading because I did not want something bad happens to our perfct and lovely Arnav but now after reading I am really happy so thank you for giving me the satisfaction👏😛👍🏼

I love the end and I would, if the real end of the series is like that because I find the expression it more rich withe the beautiful expression and full of emotions that gives us another way to read with great love and passion and also Khushi as (Princess Darya) add all her love and her feelings and her belief in her relationship with Arnav

the end was realy perfect

**Arnav and Khushi together again but this time there's the true feeling and the love for each other this time there's only happiness and joy and their family around them so thi's soo perfect **

thank you for making us happy and gives us that wonderful feeling to follow your writing every time

PS: Just a little wishe I hope you do not stop here and I hope you have added Anthor as:

1 - remarried in front of their families and have a great party 🥳🥳

2-have a baby boy / girl or twins maybe 😳😍
3-catch up with the painful moments and replace them with romantic and sensual and erotic beautiful moment ❤️☺️
4 - travel and have adventures together etc. etc.

Edited by passion1 - 13 years ago

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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

god finally he confessed😃

arnav is dreaming of heaven'oh yes when in love you feel like you are in heaven😉

i loved it when khushi was swearing and arnav was like what the😆

the potrayal of emotions is awesome

please don't stop here,continue

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

The reunion was typical of Arnav and Khushi. Lots of shouting and swearing and guilt and smirking! Loved it!

And Imad taking care of the baby.. Interesting! :)

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

aww it was so touching especially imad's interaction with Anjali's daughter and ofcourse khushi's little outburst was just awsome...i felt really emotional while reading this...can't wait to read more Arhi scenes when they are not fighting with each other...

thanx for the pm:)

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sheks007

@sheks007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

very beautiful..can imagine barun and sanaya executing your script to the excellence and the best part for me is i read all parts in one go as i am newly addicted to ff and os and ss...

love u love u love u for this writing...thanks again...

now am off to read rest of your work...thank god i am off call tomorrow...its 3 am and i am gonna finish reading everything written by you today...

take care

Edited by sheks007 - 13 years ago