OS: The Last Kiss

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19sayana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Y sad ending...😭

Pls write continuation... She stops train by pulling emergency chain... N they meet pls pls..

Thanks for PM..

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Gals

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

gud1..
sad ending..bt written very well.
thanxx for d pm.

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

awesome...liked it very much
can u please post the previous links???
i am new here so ive missed them...

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deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

awesome os...

made me so emotional...

loved it

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Aneesa

@Chiraiyya...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Well im gonna be the opposite and say I want your hot OS's. I hate ambiguous endings. But I liked the story an for my own sake I am going to think that in the end Khushi learns to stand up on her own two feet and then comes back for Arnav

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

omg...it was sooo beautiful...thou sad ending...😭😭...thnx 4da pm dear

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mankhush

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

that was... got no words to say...wow i guess ... more much more

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Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

So touching! Very beautiful. This got me all emotional! Your one heck of a writer.

Fabulous OS, written awesomely.

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Varsha

@LucyLindaDew

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

You've made me cry!!!! Boo-hooo...

But, I have made my own Climax!!! Mine continues from here :

He stood on the platform, his hand lifted a bit, to wave her goodbye. He managed a faint smile at her, as he felt the life from him slowly sucking out to create a vacuum. A void that would remain empty for his lifetime.

As the train started moving, Khushi felt the distance between her and her life increase. She couldn't understand what was going on. Mixed emotions played through her mind. Then she asked herself, "Do I really need to leave? Does he really hate me? Do I hate him? NO. Would I be able to live without him? No. Would he be happy if I leave? " Her mind stopped thinking at that question. She still didn't understand what she was doing. In a reflex, she managed to jump out of the train and ran to him and hugged him, hugged her life.

Arnav first thought he was dreaming. He reciprocated the hug and pulled her back and saw her tear-stricken face. He cupped her face in his hands and was snapped back to reality when a lone tear fell on his hands. "Khushi! What did you do? I hurt you. I don't deserve you."

He said breaking down.

Khushi couldn't bear seeing him cry. "The thought of leaving you hurts me more, Arnavji. I have always loved you. I love you and will always love you. I don't know why, but I really can't be without you."she cried.

Arnav never felt more happy. He hugged her more tightly and said "I love you too, with all my heart."

So, how's this? I couldn't digest them getting seperated. It's not good . Sorry...But I had to make up my mind! May be the title has to be changed if this was the ending...Sorry if I irritated you...BTW YOU ARE AWESOME!!!! LOVE YOUR WRITING...PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE OFTEN!