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Posted: 13 years ago
aww...

that was emotional...

very beautifully written...loved how you penned down the feelings..

amazing...

many thanks for the pm..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww, this was so.. Real somehow! I can see Arnav in the show doing the same once he finds out, not bing able to look her in the eyes, not being able to talk, but being broken. This man experiences emotions so deeply, I understand them!, that sometimes he's not able to comprehend them. And poor Khushi, on one side she wanted to be free on the other, she wanted to be free WITH him.. And at the end, you had me believing that they woul still be together. But I'm glad Arnav said what he felt, finally! Loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
what was that? girlI am in tears, truly this is a magical story,,,magical Arna and khuhsi,, n the turn of events you have given to their story in this OS ,,is so damn emotional!!!


it is very very very intense and beautiful,, I know this ownt be the end,, coz they are meant for each other,, its simply fantastic
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww, that was a really heartbreaking story, tears rolled down my eyes as I read it. They should never end up like this, I hope nothing of this sort happens in the show though it's very much close to reality.
Thanx for the update and PM. I'm speechless! (:
❤️ BARUN SOBTI
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Posted: 13 years ago
I was so sure that he wouldnt let her go. Whilst it wasnt a storybook ending, it was still beautiful...
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was so emotional..

U nearly made me cry..

Sad ending yr :(

Awesome OS ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome OS..
awww such a sad ending...
luved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
IT was awesome dear...i mean just too emotional and heart touching...simply amazing...👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
such a heart wrenching os!
i cud not stop myself crying
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Posted: 13 years ago
I hate you more than I hate broccoli and that's saying something. :s :/

You wrote something this beautiful only to part them in the end?! I demand a part 2 where Khushi knocks some sense into that thick skinned jerk who loves her so much!

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