Hey dear... Linny...😃
The prologue itself dragged me into the world of fantasies...I don't know whether you believe or not I did remember my brother's novel when I read your preface...He used to be into these type of mysterious/Gothic/apocalyptic subjects...So I'm familiar with these subjects..Honestly I didn't find any other person rather than my brother who are into these stuffs...So first of all I would like to appreciate you for selecting an amazing thread...👏
Your vivid imaginations amaze me dear😛...I can feel each and every corner of Arhasia...
I have to quote this one..." The shadow moved from where it stood and walked through fields that looked grey in he moonlight where it had been golden under the sun..." I liked this to the core...😳
The bond between the two sisters were portrayed beautifully...I felt a special relation between Khushi an her father too...😊
You have succeeded in bringing the symbolisms and parallelisms of Gothic tale to reflect the real Arshi story...I can feel it in every stage of FF...👏
" He slammed his book shut and glared at the feeble candle that had almost extinguished with the force of the book being closed" ..." The tiny strawberry Khushi had been inspecting dropped into the basin and water splashed onto her dress"... I liked your keen describing quality...These are just two of them where I felt it as I'm not able to quote all of them...👏
Linny you are a good story teller too⭐️... You have an amazing ability to hook the readers up to your plot...⭐️
I don't know whether I'm allowed to tell this But Being a sincere reader of your FF I would like to tell you that the only thing I felt less suitable while reading is some conversations in the earlier chapters... I know you have done your best in bringing a classic touch in dialogues... And its awesome as the story proceeds...👏
"Lordy lord " poem was fantabulous😃... I really don't know how to let you know how much I enjoyed it...
I just felt sooo sad when you introduced the Army man into Gupta family as a saviour...Deep in my heart I didn't want him to get any credits😡... May be it becoz I already knew facts about Shyam...Otherwise it was perfect... 😳
Loved your thoughts on two horses..That was brilliant😛...
The way in which you described the library to us was amazing...I was so excited while reading hose parts...Since I'm fond of books I was like ... I usually start my day reading a book.. I like to read read n read always...I like that special smell of books... It give an unknown happiness...N you just fueled my feelings by writing those paragraphs...
Arshi scene [ khushi cleans ASR's office room ] was awesome...You have written it very well..Great job...👏
" Snatching up the aprons before the rain touched them and then when she had all aprons saved but slightly wet suddenly the sun would smile down and she would reluctantly lay the aprons down again"... A smile appeared on my lip and I felt for her simultaneously... I loved the you present that scene...
I love rain😳... It makes me a crazy romantic nostalgic person... I love to get wet in rain.. I never used umbrella in my school and college days... My friends used to call me crazy but I didn't care ... I have a big collection of books on rain/rain related tales... So what I'm trying to say is I thought that I know everything about rain... Of course I do... But with your chapter : THROUGH THE RAIN you show me another face of rain.. I could feel each and every droplets of that ...I don't think that there is a need to say anything more.. It was just superb... I read it 9 times... Still I can read it twice with the same passion as before...👏⭐️
And then Hats Off To You Linny👏 for giving us such a mind blowing update " The Errand and its Errant Effects"... The FEAR , I met with while reading this update😲... You amazed me with your talent by showing us such a passionate / libidinous Arshi scene...😳.
" She sat unmoving in the dark starring at the moonlight at her open door afraid even to blink because she feared the moonlight would vanish if she blinked "... I liked this too...😉
I know I'm boring you with my lengthy comment😛... But I can't help it dear😉... Once again You are just Just Superb Linny Darling...🤗
Edited by arshy4ever - 12 years ago
Book Talk
Anupamaa
330