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allzwell

@allzwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#771

i really really like Genreal Jha in this story.. I hope he doesn't turn into an Ekta Kapoor inspired villain later on... please don't have a negative character attributed to him..
i am actually a bit confused... he seems to be a decent guy, and yet he is hiding his Raizada identity from Khushi... is it only out of fear of losing her friendship, because of her animosity with Lord Arnav? If that's the case, he can surely write to keep Anjali in confidence?

hmm.. Arnav is melting slowly here,.. not so animated against Khushi as before.. absolutely lovvved their interaction. And glad Aakash is taking things with Payal the way they should be.

Great Update! :)
thanks

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allzwell

@allzwell

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#772

Also, a question here..
Did he pin her down purposefully to keep her smell lingering on his bedsheets,... ahem.. to get a higher dose of that calming effect it has on his nerves?
naaahhh... now that I think of it, that was done when he placed himself in the centre of the bed...
too bad the coffee spilled, he will have to get the sheets washed! ;)

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#773

fabulous! your style of writing pulls the strings of my heart... love their chemistry ...

arnav wants khushi... he isnt trying to deny it just doesnt want it to be plainly seen!

superb!

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darya20

@darya20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#774

just read the update it was superb

but i m confuse about genral sham 😕 is he positive or negative 😕

and finally lady la is friendly with khushi

and the scene between first loard and khushi was superb loved it 😉

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vrinda-95

@vrinda-95

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#775

Just read the update.Having come after a wait of a week ,it was a treat to read about almost all the characters.The story has moved forward.There is progress in the relationship ofAkash and Payal.Lavanya saying thankyou to Kushi?Maybe it equates the missing goat incident in the serial. The sparks are still flying between Arnav and Kushi.I have started the wait for the next update already!

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#776

Mean arnav lord as always trying to break khushi why the hell he isdoing that
:-)
Oh that bar visiting scene I guess is khushi saving la from nanis wrath
Of losing laxmi
Shyam here sems a little less evil though his ideas towards khushi is not good
Two timer
Akash and payal story is being different and buaji so good in defending khushi and protecting

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#777

im here... will reserve the post for now

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medharees

@medharees

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#778

Loved their encounter 👍🏼 it was an awesome update as usual...Loving how the story is progressing...waiting for next update

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#779

You know what, Its raining here... I'm in a perfect mood to comment on your update Linny...😈

You are an expert in solving questions which arise in our mind while reading...Its an enjoyable experience for me to doubt you first and then I'll get the answer...😉...It became my habit... I was thinking about swardfighting and teaching..How can he teach her without anyone knowing🤔... Then came the answer... " It was good thing that the stable was situated a little farther away from the castle though within the same grounds..."

I remind you even the case of 3 letters belong to above mentioned EE { enjoyable experience}😆

Did you just say ? "He was a wise and understanding man in his letters and Khushi could begin to trust him..."😲

I liked the way you depicted how Sundays are important to Khushi...

When you said Khushi moved towards the detested room,turning the door knob my heart started to dhak dhak...Even though I know he is not there...Then why..? Linny only you can make us feel this... You proved it with all your previous ARSHI Confrontations...

" The helpless extravagance of the rich when there are people spending nights sleeping on cold road edges..." I felt the same too at that moment... Whatever be the time ancient or modern some baic natures of human beings never change... Hats off to you Linny for showing some courage to write about a subject which has huge social relevance...👏

The colour you chose for blanket was just perfect..The Ocean Blue...

Effect of smell of Khushi on 1st Lord was amazing...😳

Just a piece of a sentence "to drag him over the war ground that was scattered with dead corpse of committed soldiers ..." show me the entire blood stained war...

Buaji's letter was the most precise one...👏

What's General Jha's mind upto ...? yup you can again count it to EE...😛

"I believe there is hope in dusk too..." I think That was a typical Khushi word...😊

I loved the way you used to get Khushi n Lady La closer to each other... The little adventure...

"Morning messes" gave me mysterious pleasure...Arshi confrontation was awesome as always...

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9424976

@9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#780

Yay! I'm so happy. Okay so Lavanya and Khushi are starting to become more acquainted with each other. Oh dear, I just want to shake Khushi and tell her to stop writing back to Shyam! I don't want her to get engaged to Shyam, this is going to lead to more trouble, and we don't need anymore of that. Heck, it happened in the show...and now I'm wondering how you will execute it ( Im sure you will execute this particular topic better!) Khushi likes his scent as much as he does hers...hmm it would have been so funny if Arnav caught her sniffing his blankets. I love that there is this sense of intimacy between these two that they still aren't aware of yet. And oops! The coffee spilled, now Arnav truly will have to get new sheets. Oh darn, he must have wanted her smell all over his bed. Awww...Akash and Payal <3. These two are so much it makes me want to puke! Nani's story...was she talking about herself? I'm really curious to know who the rose, bee, etc were representing!! Please tell us, pretty please? I can't wait until next week. Heck I really cannot wait. Im so addicted to this!!