ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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darya20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#991

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ooo my god this story is getting interesting day by day :D

cant wait to read the rest i m sooo excited

Edited by darya20 - 12 years ago

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#992

shyam 😡 wt the? wt curse? nd khushi got something to do wit it? 😕 poor khushi. gonna hav tough time in future i guess.. nd thx for update😊

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#993

Jha is cursed too or is he feeling cursed without being able to see hold and touch khushi or he just is disgusted to live with anjali sorrybut am really confused maybe the long tiring day has taken toll on me
I will try reading it tomorrow then maybe it wil make sense

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#994

unRes😉

I was firstly intrigued when you first introduced the horses to their respective masters, White Lightening as Shyam's and Dark Shadow as Arnav's. But later I was fascinated as how explained the presence of their horses in their lives.

We just cannot be biased on the color, white always does not mean pure and "fairy" while black is not always dark and evil!!

I am glad shadow is Lordy Lords horsey!!😃 😃

coming back to this update... 👏 👏 👏 well done!! really liked how u showed the relationship between General Shyam and his Lightening!! We absolutely cannot deny that every master has its own unique relationship with his animal, Horse in this story...

Here lightening has the same or equivalent relationship with General as Shadow has it with Lord Arnav. Both horses are equally loyal to their masters... It is just the situations to come will show how this loyalty will benefit the respective masters!!

Aquiline,

"You'll carry me to love too, Lightning'''. to the end of this wretched curse," I just loved this line... well said!! Its a lovely relationship to have... 👍🏼 😃 It does not matter how evil or saint u are, u absolutely love the animal whom u share a bond with and vice versa!! Trust from both side is present like here as well.. when masters ride them they both have to trust each other!!
Great update!!
looking forward to next!! 😃

P.S. I did love this surprise... 😉

Edited by khusiarnav - 12 years ago

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#995

🥳OMG🥳

a new update🥳

goiing to pick up sons from school & will read the update as soon as these boys behave .

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vrinda-95

@vrinda-95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#996

So it's Shadow Vs Lightning,,,Black Vs White! The General says he could not return to the castle before he comes out of the curse; so will he try to meet Kushi, soon? Will he try to marry her as in the show?

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Ammm

@Ammm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#997

OH MY DEAR LORD!!!!

I cant believe dat I hv read all 86 chptrs in one go...

wonderful

I dnt 9 where it was from all this time...

I found it today only & must say it earns a WOW!!!!

BRILLIANT writing

keep it up!!

*applause* 4 u

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dingle

@dingle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#998

Catching up?

Ive caught up so much Ive actually moved into the inn.

😃

Hallelujah! I guess I can fill the next few pages with my own unique observations over the last 9 updates I had missed.

For now... Im off to order some hot buttery scones and a nice drink. Its a tad chilly outside.

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

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Posted: 12 years ago

#999

Six more pages left for this thread to be over!!!

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dingle

@dingle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1000

...and heres me being delusional and wondering at the inappropriate-ness of General Jha sending emotional letters to a humble maiden and not his wife.

The mans in love! Or thinks he is... I wonder if he's beyond redemption as the babua in our show is? How far can the General go?

*ponders*