ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 102

As war rages,

Drops of blood poured everywhere,

A rider on a white horse charges

For his enemies won't dare,

Cries, hues and madness in the air

A deafening sound echoes in the atmosphere,

He closes his eyes and swears,

For he is full of ire,

If only she would care

It would calm his inner fears...

Originally posted by: kushipugly

wow what a fab update👏i don't want to judge jeneral shaym jha with the show's shaym jha.A man who fights with all his strenght & with loyality to protect the lands he lives in is a hero.

as he has found kushi, something has stirred inhim. the way he writes his heart out to kushi , his letter are almost expressionless for anjali.

as i said, i will not judge general with shows shaym, all i can understand is this jha is not lusting for kushi but he knows kushi has awaken something in him & that he wants to find out as soon as possible.

& i loved the relationship of jha & lightining. horses are very loyal animals & lighting ignoring shaym's statement by eating away the grass indicates that lighting knows shaym is heading for trouble & as a loyal animal is trying to change the converstaion or his mind i guess.

Originally posted by: shass

Wow Lin! am blown away by not only ur writing skills bt ur story telling too.. dis vry chp tells of its creator's vry creative abilities n perception.. hats off to u.. 👏 i said earlier dat i ws luking fr sumthg n dats y i nvr commented on shyam or anjali for dat matter n i hv finally come across it,altho there's still sumthg i'll b waiting fr n for dat i'll hv to let ur story unfold a bit more ..
Shyam, Shyam, Shyam!! no matter hw disgusting ppl find hm,i cnt help bt understnd da man n feel sorry fr him too.. he's widely misunderstood by readers i believe [no offence to ne1,evry1z entitled to their own opinions n so am i ]..
Since da beginning of dis story, he has been revealed in bits n parts..v still dnt knw da real him,n frankly speaking,i feel evn he himself doesnt knw da real him!! they say, man's created by his circumstances..lyk lord arnav, shyam too vl b discovering himself.. his choices vl mk him eithr gud or bad..v cnt comment on dat yet... so far,i hv understood him to b a vry good man,he helped a simple village girl,saved hr life twice,while facing da danger directly.. he's brave,coz he fights fearlessly in da battle, marches ahead wthout thnkg abt da danger dat surrounds him..he's a General for sumthg,ryt?..he's compassionate coz he feels fr his men,his land n he values thm bcoz dats y he's here..his pride doesnt let him b dependant upon his brothr-in-law n wife.. esp,dat in ur previous chps lin [25 n 27] he ws offered to leave his current job coz lady anjali missed him alot..bt he ddnt,yes she ws ryt,fr him thgs lyk honor n dignity means more thn nethg else.. he probably luvd his Lady Queen alot n pampered hr too,luvd living his lyf wth hr,da peace n harmony, bt all dat changed wth khushi arriving on da scene! lyk lord Arnav,he too cn see into hr soul thru her eyes.. beautiful !! so he's not a shallow man..he's intelligent,intellectual n admirer of not only wt he cn ''See'' bt wt cn only b ''Felt'' too.. wtevr his curse is,it'll b a major factor in his character building, as well as his future decisions..lets wait n watch.. a curious point ws da fact dat he craves fr freedom! i wonder if its only because he cnt wait to meet da second face he saw upon closing his eyes? or if dats part of his nature? both cn play a powerful incentive for his future actions.. bt if its part of his nature thn,oh my!! it answrs all ur questions,he's probably tired of being tied to one place,person.. dnt knw,vl wait to see hw dat plays out..
Absolutely loving dis update n da General.. to b in love isnt a crime n isnt sumthg u cn control eithr..bt what choices u mk , mks u eithr good or bad.. he's cursed indeed..he's in love; a curse dat vl eithr bring out da beast in him n he'll b consumed by selfishness n wickedness or if he rises above all dat n proves himself of wt da world thnks of him for nw!! A better Person !!

P.S;

• loved da pics u made dear lin; reminded me of ur Chess analysis.. so dats hw its goin to b; two kings,two forces..evil n good colliding wth eachothr!
  
• loved hw u portrayed da General all dark figure sitting ovr a white horse.. it only explains wt i hv said earlier..
  
• loved dat he too hs a gud relation wth his horse lyk lord has.. ofcourse da mare trusts him.. she does coz she hs witness his greatness so far..
• loved ''"You'll carry me to love too, Lightning'''... ... to the end of this wretched curse,"

does he knw,dat no matter hw much powerful n bright da lightning is..it aftr all leads to nothg bt destruction !! n no matter hw thunderously it roars,its extremely Short lived ??

P.P.S; i cudnt help bt notice dat Shadow's a horse n Lightning's a mare..may b they'll get all lovey-dovey in da future n Lightning cn tell all da secrets of da General to him..n dat my help da lord..😆

• So much for a tiny - timid comment😕..
  

I know many of you like (some even having a crush!) on Arnav's Shadow. But the loyalty of the black horse to his Master and the Master's bond with his horse is the very same that the white horse and her accursed Master shares''Hope you will understand this. To all those who do, here is a picture I made for you to understand the characters better through their horses:

Why am I hurrying? Simply coz it's time we begin the second thread and as soon as you reach this ship to dock at the 149^th page, you can wait for a pigeon to inform you of the unveiling of the second ship to voyage your through this tale that is dear to our hearts! *dancing happily* Excited to begin the new threa

Originally posted by: kushipugly

you are one of the best analyst & decoder of this ff .

now let me decode what aquiline meant about yr tiny timid comment😉 yr comments are genious but its the font size of yr comment which is VERY timid😆 i guess yr nature is timid & thats why you use a very tiny font so that other may not notice yr perfect analysis😊

you know, when i read the update & saw the horses , i immediatly paired both hores up lightining is a brave horse with beauty & just like kushi just eats away the grass to clear its mind for the upcoming battle😆

Originally posted by: kushipugly

I know many of you like (some even having a crush!) on Arnav's Shadow. But the loyalty of the black horse to his Master and the Master's bond with his horse is the very same that the white horse and her accursed Master shares''Hope you will understand this. To all those who do, here is a picture I made for you to understand the characters better through their horses:

Why am I hurrying? Simply coz it's time we begin the second thread and as soon as you reach this ship to dock at the 149^th page, you can wait for a pigeon to inform you of the unveiling of the second ship to voyage your through this tale that is dear to our hearts! *dancing happily* Excited to begin the new threa

Originally posted by: Ammm

OH MY DEAR LORD!!!!

I cant believe dat I hv read all 86 chptrs in one go...

wonderful

I dnt 9 where it was from all this time...

I found it today only & must say it earns a WOW!!!!

BRILLIANT writing

keep it up!!

*applause* 4 u