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Wow Lin! am blown away by not only ur writing skills bt ur story telling too.. dis vry chp tells of its creator's vry creative abilities n perception.. hats off to u.. 👏 i said earlier dat i ws luking fr sumthg n dats y i nvr commented on shyam or anjali for dat matter n i hv finally come across it,altho there's still sumthg i'll b waiting fr n for dat i'll hv to let ur story unfold a bit more ..
Shyam, Shyam, Shyam!! no matter hw disgusting ppl find hm,i cnt help bt understnd da man n feel sorry fr him too.. he's widely misunderstood by readers i believe [no offence to ne1,evry1z entitled to their own opinions n so am i ]..
Since da beginning of dis story, he has been revealed in bits n parts..v still dnt knw da real him,n frankly speaking,i feel evn he himself doesnt knw da real him!! they say, man's created by his circumstances..lyk lord arnav, shyam too vl b discovering himself.. his choices vl mk him eithr gud or bad..v cnt comment on dat yet... so far,i hv understood him to b a vry good man,he helped a simple village girl,saved hr life twice,while facing da danger directly.. he's brave,coz he fights fearlessly in da battle, marches ahead wthout thnkg abt da danger dat surrounds him..he's a General for sumthg,ryt?..he's compassionate coz he feels fr his men,his land n he values thm bcoz dats y he's here..his pride doesnt let him b dependant upon his brothr-in-law n wife.. esp,dat in ur previous chps lin [25 n 27] he ws offered to leave his current job coz lady anjali missed him alot..bt he ddnt,yes she ws ryt,fr him thgs lyk honor n dignity means more thn nethg else.. he probably luvd his Lady Queen alot n pampered hr too,luvd living his lyf wth hr,da peace n harmony, bt all dat changed wth khushi arriving on da scene! lyk lord Arnav,he too cn see into hr soul thru her eyes.. beautiful !! so he's not a shallow man..he's intelligent,intellectual n admirer of not only wt he cn ''See'' bt wt cn only b ''Felt'' too.. wtevr his curse is,it'll b a major factor in his character building, as well as his future decisions..lets wait n watch.. a curious point ws da fact dat he craves fr freedom! i wonder if its only because he cnt wait to meet da second face he saw upon closing his eyes? or if dats part of his nature? both cn play a powerful incentive for his future actions.. bt if its part of his nature thn,oh my!! it answrs all ur questions,he's probably tired of being tied to one place,person.. dnt knw,vl wait to see hw dat plays out..
Absolutely loving dis update n da General.. to b in love isnt a crime n isnt sumthg u cn control eithr..bt what choices u mk , mks u eithr good or bad.. he's cursed indeed..he's in love; a curse dat vl eithr bring out da beast in him n he'll b consumed by selfishness n wickedness or if he rises above all dat n proves himself of wt da world thnks of him for nw!! A better Person !!
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Shyam, Shyam, Shyam!! no matter hw disgusting ppl find hm,i cnt help bt understnd da man n feel sorry fr him too.. he's widely misunderstood by readers i believe [no offence to ne1,evry1z entitled to their own opinions n so am i ]..
Since da beginning of dis story, he has been revealed in bits n parts..v still dnt knw da real him,n frankly speaking,i feel evn he himself doesnt knw da real him!! they say, man's created by his circumstances..lyk lord arnav, shyam too vl b discovering himself.. his choices vl mk him eithr gud or bad..v cnt comment on dat yet... so far,i hv understood him to b a vry good man,he helped a simple village girl,saved hr life twice,while facing da danger directly.. he's brave,coz he fights fearlessly in da battle, marches ahead wthout thnkg abt da danger dat surrounds him..he's a General for sumthg,ryt?..he's compassionate coz he feels fr his men,his land n he values thm bcoz dats y he's here..his pride doesnt let him b dependant upon his brothr-in-law n wife.. esp,dat in ur previous chps lin [25 n 27] he ws offered to leave his current job coz lady anjali missed him alot..bt he ddnt,yes she ws ryt,fr him thgs lyk honor n dignity means more thn nethg else.. he probably luvd his Lady Queen alot n pampered hr too,luvd living his lyf wth hr,da peace n harmony, bt all dat changed wth khushi arriving on da scene! lyk lord Arnav,he too cn see into hr soul thru her eyes.. beautiful !! so he's not a shallow man..he's intelligent,intellectual n admirer of not only wt he cn ''See'' bt wt cn only b ''Felt'' too.. wtevr his curse is,it'll b a major factor in his character building, as well as his future decisions..lets wait n watch.. a curious point ws da fact dat he craves fr freedom! i wonder if its only because he cnt wait to meet da second face he saw upon closing his eyes? or if dats part of his nature? both cn play a powerful incentive for his future actions.. bt if its part of his nature thn,oh my!! it answrs all ur questions,he's probably tired of being tied to one place,person.. dnt knw,vl wait to see hw dat plays out..
Absolutely loving dis update n da General.. to b in love isnt a crime n isnt sumthg u cn control eithr..bt what choices u mk , mks u eithr good or bad.. he's cursed indeed..he's in love; a curse dat vl eithr bring out da beast in him n he'll b consumed by selfishness n wickedness or if he rises above all dat n proves himself of wt da world thnks of him for nw!! A better Person !!
P.S;
- loved da pics u made dear lin; reminded me of ur Chess analysis.. so dats hw its goin to b; two kings,two forces..evil n good colliding wth eachothr!
- loved hw u portrayed da General all dark figure sitting ovr a white horse.. it only explains wt i hv said earlier..
- loved dat he too hs a gud relation wth his horse lyk lord has.. ofcourse da mare trusts him.. she does coz she hs witnessed his greatness so far..
- loved ''"You'll carry me to love too, Lightning'''... ... to the end of this wretched curse,"
does he knw,dat no matter hw much powerful n bright da lightning is..it aftr all leads to nothg bt destruction !! n no matter hw thunderously it roars,its extremely Short lived ??
P.P.S; i cudnt help bt notice dat Shadow's a horse n Lightning's a mare..may b they'll get all lovey-dovey in da future n Lightning cn tell all da secrets of da General to him..n dat my help da lord..😆
- So much for a tiny - timid comment😕..
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