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Frances

@Punkin22

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Hi Lovely, thanks for pm. In so many ways Khushi is stilll a child/woman. Your post brought that out beautifully. I love your wording, how you draw exceptional pictures of your characters. I felt I was wataching a VM. Very nice. I cannot wait to see Khushi embrace her love for ASR. You must write about that.

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shwetachauhan

@shwetachauhan

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Ah.. What a lovely update!!! Now this is something I really wanna see.. Khushi getting all affected by her proximity to Arnav and Arnav knowing it too!! I so want Khushi to realize her feelings and show them once in a while.. BTW, did Arnav hear what all Khushi was saying when he was asleep.. or was he completely oblivious to her touch??

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saya2012

@saya2012

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Lovely, it s great work ask cvs to put them in a episode.

thanks for you superb job.

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Update was too good

Arnav is touched to see khushi's concern and care for him. He loves teasing his wife.

please continue soon

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neha

@arshiipkkndluv

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

lovely update and thnkx for pm

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smashitup

@smashitup

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

That was LOVELY1 😊 ... short, sweet but so drew me in straight away, lovely descriptives of scene and emotions x

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SS83

@SS83

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Thank you for the PM! Nicely written.. waiting for the rest! :)

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swathi m

@lovelystar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

aww..!! that was soo sweet.. mischievous arnav,.. 😆wow..:) loved this side of his character.. awesome dear.. keep on updating..

thanks for PM..!! 👏

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Rose_7

@Rose_7

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Brilliant! loved it to the core! thx for the pm

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arnavluva

@arnavluva

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Really good, enjoyed it so much. Just wish Khushi would'nt surpress her feelings any more. If only she would go with what her heart is telling her maybe then we might have a few fireworks of passion going off. Loved the update plz continue soon & PM when done :) x