OS: After the Confession: Part 4 (NEW) -Page 25

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shidin0117

@shidin0117

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Lovely, nice to see Khushi as her usual self, talking to herself, writing in her notebook, Arnav teasing her, was totally engrossed that I was like where is the rest.

Pls PM me the next update.

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

beautiful😳

after reading this i felt

today was a fairytale

i wore a dress he wore a dark grey t shirt...

the perfect song for mrs. khuhsi kumari gupta singh raizada😳😳😳😳

lovely

thanks for the pm

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Loved how you portrayed Khushi's emotions! Please continue soon!

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Great OS 👍🏼 Beautifully written 👏 👏 👏 👏 Loved it . Thanks for the PM. Please keep on writing more OS's like these . ⭐️

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Beautifully written, Lovely.

For some reason, I can never resist a scene where Khushi is caring for Arnav--not huge actions but the small domestic type things like making him tea etc. etc.

My favourite bit was when he rubs his head and she simply takes over.

She asserts herself so beautifully when she wants to care for him. It's like her bashfulness drops and she is less self-conscious---her desire to care for him takes her out of herself.

Also, loved the teasing. Like "before I apply this balm, do you have any problems, sensitivities, allergy etc etc to this?" Cute. And his response, even cuter!

Again, a pleasure to read.

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

@melihoney

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

yaar i loved ur pm, waiting for an other pm soon dear. love u

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mishty_angel

@mishty_angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

wowww amazing script... how do u get gr8,awesome ideas yaar,
your script is much much better than cvs
thanks for pm

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Filmyshilmy

@dennisdmenace

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

very nicely written.

thanks for pm

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

luved it. continue soon. thx for the pm. i sent u buddy request do accept and pm whenever u update. luved it way arnav stared at khushi and arnav was taking advantage of that. i am eagerly waiting for ur update. continue soon..