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Posted: 13 years ago
why did you kill?! please bring her back!
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SS : The Gunshot Part 5 (ending)


"Khushi" Arnav whispered...

"She...She's beautiful...she's perfect..." tears endlessly flowed from his eyes...

Anjali wept for her brother..."Chote...?"

He looked at his Di..."she's amazing...so tiny...so...so..." overcome with grief, he quickly passed her back to Anjali...

The second he let go of the baby girl, she started crying...

Anjali smiled..."it seems she wants to be with you..."

Arnav smiled through his tears, taking the baby back into his arms...

Baby Khushi settled instantly...

"Di...I..." his heart was suffocating with anguish..."Khushi...my Khushi...I...how am i going to..."

Anjali looked up at Arnav...his face overwrought with pain and sorrow..."Khushiji once told me that love is as powerful as life...hold onto the love you both had"

My Love. . . Her love. . .
My Life. . . Her life. . .

He heard Khushi's words... "don't be afraid to love...to feel it...to want it ..."

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak...he felt it...his heart started beating again...louder than before...almost painfully...he felt a surge of breath pump through him...

He looked down at Khushi sleeping in his arms...

He knew no one, NO ONE would ever replace his wife...but he also knew that nothing could ever destroy the strength of their love...

He looked at the family that now surrounded him...

Khushi's voice was still echoing in his mind..."Arnavji...you need...need to be Arnav Singh Raizada...the...the man who takes...takes care of his...his family... don't...don't turn your back on them...they...they have been your life...do for them what...what you want to do for me...promise ...promise me that you will always continue to put family first...that's what i love...love most about you... "

As much as he wanted his own life to end...he promised the woman who held his heart that he would take care of their family...

"I failed you when you were alive...I damn well won't fail you know...I will live out my promise to you my love until the day i die..."

...

1 year later...

Arnav finished at the office and went to visit Garima, Buaji and Babuji...

Babuji was recovering so much, that he was able to have conversations with family now...

Arnav had gone to visit the Guptas every day after work without fail...

Garima and Buaji welcomed him warmly everytime...

After a lengthy visit, he would return home anxious to see his niece...

As he walked through the doors he would see an exquisite, wide-eyed toddler bounce towards him...

He lifted her up in his arms and swung her around saying how much he'd missed her...

"I miss ooo too" She would always reply...

Anjali walked in, "Chote, you're home! Finally! Khushi has been talking about you all day...had found a new obsession...dancing!!!"

"Really!!! You have to show me!" Arnav said happily...

Khushi wiggled out of her uncles arms and ran to Anjali to whisper something...

"Chote...this is her favourite at the moment..."

As the music started...Arnav's eyes filled with tears...His little niece had her silky black hair done up in a ponytail...a gorgeous headband on her head...

He watched her in awe...smiling through his tears as he watched his niece dance crazily to "Ek Do Teen"...

Anjali saw her brother's heart breaking in front of her eyes...
She walked to stop the song, but Arnav stopped her..."no Di...Look how happy she is...leave it playing..."

His mind flashed back to his wife dancing...her smiling face...her beautiful wispy hair...her smooth movements...

When the song finished...Khushi bounded up to him...she was completely puffed...she saw Arnav's tears and said softly..."you didn't like??"

Arnav knelt down in front of Khushi..."Like it? It was beautiful...perfect...i LOVED it..."

"Both times..." he quietly added...

Khushi smiled brightly at Arnav..."I love woo!"

"I love you Khushi..."

As they hugged...he closed his eyes thinking of his wife..."I love you Khushi..."





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Posted: 13 years ago
😭aww... not happy that you ending it this way but I understand that we can't always have a happy ending...😭 because we live in reality not fantasy-land .

broke my heart... 💔but it was beautifully written... great job!!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful ending to a wonderful OS.. he has Khushi.. his niece...loved it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Alternate ending coming for all the people who are now ready to come and find me to attack me 😊




Edited by Desi- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my god...its too good
n u made me cry ...now i am not able to stop crying!!!!ho
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am not very fond of tragic ending bcoz reality bites. Lovely SS. Well written.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG u made me cry!! This is beautiful! :D
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the ending was beautiful but i felt heart wrenched😭
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SS : The Gunshot Part 5 (NOT the ending)




"Khushi" Arnav whispered...

"She...She's beautiful...she's perfect..." tears endlessly flowed from his eyes...

Anjali wept for her brother..."Chote...?"

He looked at his Di..."she's amazing...so tiny...so...so..." he quickly passed her back to Anjali...

The second he let go of the baby girl, she started crying...

Anjali smiled..."it seems she wants to be with you..."

Arnav smiled through his tears, taking the baby back into his arms...

She settled instantly...

"Di...I...Khushi...I...how am i going to..."

Anjali looked up at Arnav...his face overwrought with pain and sorrow..."pray...Khushiji once told me that love is as powerful as life...hold onto the love you both had"

My Love. . . Her love. . .
My Life. . . Her life. . .

He heard Khushi's words... "don't be afraid to love...to feel it...to want it ..."

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak...he felt it...his heart started beating again...louder than before...almost painfully...he felt a surge of breath pump through him...

That very second, Baby Khushi started to cry...He looked down at the precious baby...

He passed her back to Anjali, and the baby settled...

"that's strange...what's the batter baby..??? Shhh...are you trying to tell us something???"

Arnav felt electricity shoot through his veins...

His heart beat wildly...

His thoughts were practically screaming at him now...each phrase overlapping the other...

"love is as powerful as life..."
"don't be afraid to love...to feel it...to want it..."
"love is as powerful as life..."
"don't be afraid to love...to feel it...to want it..."
"love is as powerful as life..."
"don't be afraid to love...to feel it...to want it..."

He gripped his head hearing the words start to jumble together till he heard this...

"DON'T BE AFRAID...LOVE IS POWERFUL...LIFE IS POWERFUL...FEEL IT...WANT IT...LOVE GIVES LIFE..."

He bolted from the room...

He ran to the emergency ward...

"Where's my wife...!!!?? Mrs. Khushi Singh Raizada...Where is she????"

The lady searched the system...she looked sadly at the very distressed husband before her...

"Please go down to the end of the hall...there is a door to your left...she's being ...taken care of...in there...I'm sorry sir..."

Arnav didn't hear a word she said...he ran to the room he was told she was in...

His heart leaped and twisted seeing her again...white...lifeless...

"Sir...please, we are just finalizing her body...we removed the bullet...but there is nothing we can..."

"Leave me alone with her." Arnav commanded.

The doctors just left quietly, leaving Arnav with Khushi...

Arnav walked to her...

He took her hand...and placed it on his heart...

"Khushi...you feel this?...this is LOVE...this is LIFE..." he put his other hand on her heart..."feel it! Want it! I believe love is powerful enough to give life...I'm NOT ready to let you go...i'm not GOING to let you go!" His body shook with emotion...his heart continued to beat against her hand...

Arnav instinctively leaned in and pressed a firm kiss on her lips...

The second his lips touched hers he felt an electric current shoot through their joined lips...the force of the jolt was so extreme that his body flinched in pain...

But the pain was instantly forgotten...

Because what he felt next set fire to his soul...

He felt soft breath gently blowing on his cheeks...

His lips unlocked from hers...

He looked at her face in shock, fear, anticipation and hope...

Khushi's cheeks were turning pink...

It WAS her breath on his face...he felt her hand warming under his...

"K...Kh...Khushi?" his voice trembled...

"oh..oh my God..." his eyes were erupting with tears...

"OH MY GOD KHUSHI!!!!???" he was afraid that he was dreaming...his whole body shook...

He pressed his hand harder to her chest...and that's when he felt it...he could hear his own heart beating in his ears...and he could feel her heart beating in unison...

Stunned, terrified and elated, he quickly fumbled to press the emergency call button and soon doctors burst into the room...

They couldn't believe what they saw...they stood motionless...in complete amazement...The head surgeon hurried to check for a pulse...

"I...I don't...I don't understand...I...how..."

Arnav didn't take his eyes off Khushi...he just yelled, "WHAT!? You don't understand what!?"

"She has come back to life..."

Arnav heart exploded with complete euphoria..."she...she has...oh my God...oh my God..." his lips flew back onto hers in a quick gentle kiss...he looked up at the doctors..."Is she...Is she? Is she in pain!? Is she going to make it? Someone give me some answers!"

The doctors were still bewildered at the sudden turn of events...

"Quickly. We need to move her to intensive care..."

Doctors and nurses flooded the room...Arnav held firmly to Khushi's hand, not leaving her side for a second...

Once they attached a ventilator to her, and set up a heart monitor, they began their tests...

Arnav sat beside Khushi...

"Khushi...live sweetheart...my love for you is so strong ...hold on to it...take strength from me..."

The doctors approached Arnav...

"Mr. Raizada, we have no way to explain it, but your wife is very much alive...we are still unable to determine how she came back..."

Arnav, still holding her hand to his heart, knew exactly how she came back..."Love is as powerful as life..."

"we won't know how her mental state is until she wakes...but her brain activity is very promising...I don't know what you two have...but it's strong enough to defeat death...we will be back to check on her every 15 minutes..."

Arnav was now left alone with Khushi...

HIS khushi...




Edited by Desi- - 12 years ago

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