RTMC FF - Pyar Ki MuRat - Page 18

Created

Last reply

Replies

213

Views

25.8k

Users

19

Likes

441

Frequent Posters

sweetsanyo thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
aaj ka ud kahan h???????????

jaldi dedo buddy.
lov u.
Nivi_princess thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Part4:

A servant knocks the door and thus his chain of thoughts ceases.

The servant ' Sir! The guests have come.

Mohan ' Is Moksh ready?

The servant ' Yes sir! Moksh sir has got ready.

Mohan ' ok.

He goes to the hall where the guests are waiting.

Mohan shakes hand with the guest.

Mohan ' Good evening Mr. Verma.

Mr. Hriday Verma ' Evening Mr. Roy.

Mohan looks at others accompanying him.

Mr. Verma ' She is my daughter, Miss. Mukti Verma (pointing towards Mukti). And he is Ayan Verma, Mukti's cousin.

Mohan ' hello.

Ayan and Mukti ' hello...

Moksh steps in and looks at Mukti standing along with the same boy (Ayan).

Mohan looks at Moksh and introduces him to all. Mukti looks worried when he looks at Moksh.

Mohan ' (pointing Moksh) He is my younger brother, Moksh. (Now addressing Moksh) And Moksh, this is Mr. Hriday Verma.

Moksh shakes hand with him.

Mohan ' Meet Miss. Mukti, his daughter.

Moksh gazes at her while Mukti looks at the ground.

Mohan ' And he is Ayan Verma. He is...

Moksh feels uncomfortable as Mohan introduces him.

Mohan (continues) ' He is Mukti's cousin.

Moksh is left surprised as he was going on another track. He feels guilty for what he had done with Mukti.

They all go for dinner.

After dinner, Mohan and Mr. Verma start discussing about their deal and contract whereas Ayan, Mukti and Moksh head to the garden.

In the garden:

Ayan to Moksh ' Nice home!

Moksh -Thanks!

Mukti is quietly walking.

Moksh to Ayan ' Amm... Hey! Do you want to see my Music room? I have many musical instruments... I love to play them.

Ayan ' Yeah!

Moksh asks a servant to take Ayan to the room. Ayan leaves.

Moksh and Mukti are silently walking in the garden.

Moksh ' Mukti, I want to say something...

Mukti ' Say...

Moksh stops and looks at Mukti and apologises:

"I can't take back those tears,

Neither can I make you smile,

But if we become friends,

I promise to make you smile,

And protect you from your every fear,

I know I have hurt you,

For that I am sorry too,

Please forgive me, let me be your friend,

I promise, I'll do the best I can..."

He had really hurt her but now he is apologising for that and she is ready to forgive him.

Mukti smiles and says: Ok. I forgive you.

They smile and shake hands.

This all is seen by Mohan and he is confident that there is something which relates Moksh and Mukti.

While leaving Moksh is constantly gazing at Mukti and she is feeling shy. Finally Verma Family leaves.

Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
Riyaa16 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear
so mukti n her father arrived at moksh's house

i loved the moksh lines,really too gud
finally,sb misunderstanding khatam ho gyi

now they r frnds n new inning of love will start soon

cont soon
thanks 4 pm
Priyart12 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
ye lo ji akhir mukti moksh ka thoda sa milan ho hi gya moksh k ghr 😳
mohan bhai ache h na shyad aage vo mukti n moksh k milan me unki madad kre 👍🏼
Chlo dosti to ho gai
i like ur poems nivi ji 👍🏼
Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago
sweetsanyo thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
bhot sundar ud tha...
chalo at last moksh ko pata tho chala ki ayan mukti ka cousin h...
n they r friends now...
yipeee...
lovely ud, lovely story.
n ma lovely friend...oye!!!...yeh tho lovely trio ho gaya.
he is constantly gazing her n she feeling shy...
cho chweet.

lovely ud.
love u.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
mddmayuri thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ud dear...
waiting for the nxt part...
ridzzi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...👏
so mukti n her family were mohan n moksh's guest...😛
n finally moksh get to know that ayan is only her cousin n nothing else...😊
n really liked the way he apologised...loved those line very much...🤗
n moksh is constantly gazing at mukti...n mohan saw all this...n he has doubt that their is something b/w them...too good...🤗
update soon...
luv u...😊
gauri_tvfanatic thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late commenting dear 😭...

all the updates were superb...i hope moksh will remember his past life soon 😍...

its good that his misunderstanding about ayan is cleared & now they have become friends 😊...


Priyart12 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
aaj ka nona ud kha gya
Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago
sweetsanyo thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago

mujhe bhi chahiye tha...

as a compensation...

double size ka ud karna padega...😉...

verna main aur priye revolt karenge...😈...
😡
haina priye!😳

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: LizzieBennet

6 months ago

Love-O-Rama's Pyar ka Trope-fest RESULTS!

Hello, hello writers, graphicers, readers and all IF ites! We are finally ready to announce the results of the much-awaited Pyar ka trope fest...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: FFEditors

7 months ago

Love-O-Rama #1: Pyar ka Trope-fest : Closed

You feel it in your fingers, you feel it in your toes Love is all around you, and so the feeling grows Yes, the day of feeling love, giving...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".