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Priyart12 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnk god ki aryan mukti ka bhai h
agr kuch or hota to mere hatho gya hota 😆 🤢
ek or suspance
ab kon pda h mukti k piche 😡
m or moksh use chodenge nhi 🤢
mukti k papa to ache insan lgte h hope ki vo in dono k beech na aaye
koi ni nivi dear chota ud bhi chlega
hm to bga bhi lenge
Freethinker thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updates dear...enjoyed all of them...
sweetsanyo thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
aaj ka chota sa, mota sa, cute sa, sweet sa ud kahan h??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 3:

At Roy Mansion at 7:00 pm:

It is Moksh's room, filled with pin drop silence and Moksh lost in his thoughts. Room's door is slightly open. Mohan is passing by and looks at Moksh from the opening. He looks at Moksh lost in the thoughts so he decides to talk to him. He is about to enter the room when Moksh says softly with tears in his eyes:

"Once upon a time; you were mine,

Once upon a time; I was yours,

Now I see you far apart,

And this I can't endure,

It feels as if somebody has torn apart my body from my soul,

It feels as if there are no more heartbeats in my heart,

You have to be mine, because I am only yours,

We can't be separated by any force,

Because I am lips; you are smile,

I am leaf; you are dew,

Because... I... I love you, I love you..."

Mohan stands there amazed and Moksh wipes his tears.

Mohan enters which Moksh notices and quickly stops weeping.

Mohan (smiling) ' Hey Moksh...

Moksh smiles back.

Mohan ' Ok. Let me come to the point directly. Were you crying?

Moksh ' No.

Mohan ' ok, if you don't want to tell, it's fine. Come on, get ready. Some guests are coming tonight, remember?

Moksh nods and Mohan takes leave.

In Mohan's Room:

Mohan is looking at his and Moksh's photograph and is thinking about their childhood ' how he managed to build up a big industrial empire, how he managed Moksh continue his studies... And suddenly he remembers something; something which he could never forget. He thinks:

It was the first day when Moksh saw a nightmare. He was sleeping but suddenly started sweating and his face was purely expressing what he is dreaming. I didn't know what was happening to him. I called the doctor. But before the arrival of the doctor, Moksh got out the dream suddenly, shouting," We will be together one day". He was crying and immensely sweating. I consoled him and he told me that he saw a girl, badly injured, and he felt as if his head and hands are bleeding too. After that he used to have nightmares. But I thought that they are just nightmares but today, don't know why, I felt that they are more than that. Moksh is sad and I hope he is not heavy-hearted.

A servant knocks the door and thus his chain of thoughts ceases.

Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
Priyart12 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh to moksh ko bachpan se hi dreams aate h hmmm 😲
mukti ko bhi ate honge ???
Mohan bhai ache wale bhai h 😊
Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 moksh getting nightmares since childhood
hope he remembers everything soon

nice part
sweetsanyo thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
😳okay,
lo aa gaya mera chota sa mota sa, sweet sa, cute sa ud...😳...

loved the way moksh expressed himself, his longing for karnika as samar.
i still miss karnika n moksh...😭...

mohan is a caring big bro, i like him a lot.👏

yes yes moksh, jaldi se ready ho jao, afterall mukti aa rahi h...
uske liye tho ready hona hi padega, ready ho yah na ho, vaise bhi tum tho hamesha mukti ko acche lagoge...

hope they talk this evening for sure.😍
moksh getting such nightmares since childhood...😲...

ma poor moksh, ab tho sirf karnika hi moksh ki yeh baichaini door kar sakti h...😳...

kya karnika ko koi aise sapne yah hallucinations nhi aate...

nivi buddy, plzz plzz do try VOH MILE THE rtmc ff...
once u read it, u will love it like hell...

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
oh poor moksh...he is crying...😭...oh his poem remind me of samar...😊

"Once upon a time; you were mine,

Once upon a time; I was yours,

Now I see you far apart,

And this I can't endure,

It feels as if somebody has torn apart my body from my soul,

It feels as if there are no more heartbeats in my heart,

You have to be mine, because I am only yours,

We can't be separated by any force,

Because I am lips; you are smile,

I am leaf; you are dew,

Because... I... I love you, I love you..."😍


really loved these lines...amazing...👍🏼
n he is getting nightmares since childhood...😲...n what about mukti...???????...😕
update soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear👏

very nice loved it😛
his poems...lovely...masttt😃😃😃

he thought about her...and cried for her😭😭😭...mujhe bhi rone aa gya 😭😭😭😭

his brother is very caring😊...n feel that something wrong with him😕

hope everything will be fine soon😕

update soon😊
thanks for pm😊
luv u😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey lovely part dear...so Moksh is having nightmares
since his childhood...what about karnika?

Waiting for next part..cont soon.

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