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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 12

Part 1:

Next day in early morning in Verma Palace:

Mukti has bathe and is ready for going to college. She gets up early in the morning so that she could not get late.

She is in the balcony which is attached to her room. She stands there, caressing her hair. Suddenly she sees a magazine lying on the floor. She picks it and starts reading. Her eyes suddenly stop at a piece of poetry and she recalls Moksh saying a poem when they met and he was apologising in a poetic manner too.

All of a sudden she starts having flashes of her past: A boy gives a copy to a girl and then leaves. The girl reads something in the copy and smiles. She starts singing...

Mukti also starts singing:

"I remember the day

When I met you,

I remember the day

When you were there

Standing in the sunshine,

I was too standing unknown

To the feeling that went through

Me...

And now that we are facing each other,

There is something I want to feel...

I want to be there,

With you,

I want to be there

When time passes by,

Looking at you...

When each..."

She stops singing as she feels as if someone must be there who is standing there, near her,

Mukti - Who is there?

And she turns around to see the person.

Mukti - Amm... Papa?

Mr. Verma – Good morning dear!

Mukti – Morning!

Mr Verma comes closer to her.

Mr. Verma – I didn't know that you sing. Really you have a melodious voice!

Mukti looks shy.

Mr. Verma - By the way, how do you come to know that I was standing behind you?

Mukti looks worried. She has no answer for it. Initially she thinks to tell the true reason but then says:

"Daughters can feel the presence of their fathers"

They hug.

At Roy Mansion:

Moksh is still sleeping. Mohan enters the room. He sits beside Moksh and looks at him and smiles.

Mohan – This boy is still sleeping!

He looks at a copy that Moksh is holding tightly and is smiling as if he is dreaming of heaven.

Mohan looks curious. And out of curiosity, he takes the copy from him and reads. Many poems have been written in it. First he doubts that Moksh has written the poems but then it's his handwriting and thus no doubt, he has written all of them. He reads one of them silently:

"I am lost in your eyes;

Shining like a moon in a dark night,

I am lost in your smile;

Seems as if I am standing in the moonlight,

I am totally lost, totally lost I am,

Lost in your beauty;

That hardly described can be,

I am lost in the feeling,

I am deep in love,

I love you so much that,

We were given life again by the almighty above,

Now I am sure, there may be a hurdle,

Between our path of love and affection,

And after hurdles, might be death,

But still life is further,

Because we are truly made for each other..."

As he completes reading, Moksh wakes up and sees the book in Mohan's hands. He quickly stands up and snatches it and places it in his wardrobe. He looks worried and Mohan looks puzzled.

Mohan – Err.. I didn't know that you are such a nice poet...

Moksh (talking to himself) – Even I didn't!

Mohan – Excuse me?

Moksh – Err... I am just trying to write a few.

Mohan – oh... Err... Come breakfast is ready.

Moksh nods.

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update sweetie...thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
nic ud
pr kya thoda bda nhi mil skta
jaise rashu deti h bda bda
ye lo ji ek ga rhi h n ek likh rha h
khi ye copy bhi wali to nhi 😛
Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nivi_princess ko humari baat pasand nahi aayi. well nivi you don't have to mind anything. i checked your vm its damn good. lekin we are like rtmc family. so ek dusre ka ff padh ke comment karna acha hai. but its up to you. you write well. your story is different but honestly i have not seen you commenting on my fav ff's so i asked you. tum acha likhti ho. writers to bohat down to earth hote hain. they don't mind anything. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏haye mere tho dono lovers...
moksh n mukti, kitne nadaan bache nikale......
kinne acche lagte h yeh, aise sweet sweet se...

kinne cute lagte h nah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

haye!, sooper best.👏

ud dekar tum hume chaidhati ho na nivi buddy...😡...

chotto chotto ud dekar...😡...

atleast ek tho bada sa do...once in five times...
inta tho chalta h buddy...

wat say???????😉

poems mujhe tumahri bhot pasand h,
so karnika n samar are superimposing moksh n mukti a/c dingly.🤔

lovely ud,
do cont soon.
lov u.😳
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
kavi aur uski prerna

nice part

yes i do hv the same complaint y dnt u reply to my pms n read my ffs :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing...👏
both were living their past life again...though a little bit...but still they were...😍
he is writing poems n she is singing...😛
but not able to understand that what it is...poor souls...😔
hope they soon realise that what it is...😍
n ur poetry lines...no doubt...always amazing...👏
update soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww...dat was a sweet ud !!!
both r getting flashes !!!
d poems rockd !!!
they r bcumng KaSam !!!
next ud loong dena...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part dear...😃
always love the poems in your every updates😳...
but the ud was too short...😕
plz plz one long update at least😛...
i didn't get pm this time😭...
plz agli baar pm karna zarur...😊
luv u...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

kavi aur uski prerna

nice part

yes i do hv the same complaint y dnt u reply to my pms n read my ffs :(


ab sab complain kar rahe h tho...

main bhi haq se aapni buddy se complain karobgi.😳

meri bhi same complain h.

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