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Priyart12 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeah double size ud chahiye
m with u rashu 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

yeah double size ud chahiye
m with u rashu 😉


kyun hum jitne loyal fans h, usse sirf thoda sa kam hi loyal revolutionaries bhi h...😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
chalo moksh ki misunderstand dur ho gyi n mukti also forgived him
gud upd
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 5:

Moksh and Mohan get back to their rooms.

Moksh as he enters his room he tries to perform ball room dance alone, imagining Mukti with him. He hums a romantic tune along with it.

Mohan looks at him and is confused. He steps in the room.

Mohan ' Moksh?

Moksh realises what he is doing when Mohan interrupts. He ceases dancing and humming.

Mohan ' What happened? Earlier you were crying and now... you are perfectly fine or say cheerful.

Moksh looks worried as he has no answer to the question and he too is unable to understand the pleasure he is feeling. Moksh remains silent.

Mohan ' ok... so... amm... Good night.

Moksh ' Good night!

As Mohan leaves, Moksh lies on the bed and thinks about Mukti.

Moksh (thinking) ' Oh God! Why am I thinking about her! She is a very nice girl but is a little bit shy. Ok... ok... Moksh, just stop thinking about her! (Then seriously) Why do I feel so much connected to her? Why does it seem that we are not separate but she is the most important part of my life? Why do I feel that I know her deeply, her happiness, her fears, her smile and her tears...

He keeps a copy with him and he sleeps as he goes deep in the thoughts.

Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
kya mst ud h ji
moksh dance karing akele akele 😆
akela kha h mukti h na sath me 😳
or ye mohan bhai hr bar pakad lete h 😆

BUT ye kya nivi dear itna chota ud vo bhi hmari fav ff ka 😡
this is not fair 😭
ye to half ka bhi half ho gya
chlo next time bda wala dena
Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😳that ws amzing jii...😳...
but nivi buddy, dis one i will say, coz iiseke liya maine pehle se hi high approach di thi ...🤢...
double size ud dena tha...

tumne uska ulta kar diya, ud ban gya half size ka...😡...

kyun???????????

ud ws too good.😉
moksh dancing alone imagining mukti wid him...
thats so cute...😳
bt mohan ne pakad liya...oops!.
he is slowly slowly feeling for mukti...
mukti is running in his senses..😍...

chalo but next time plz thoda bada ud dena...😳...

coz we all rtmc fans ud ke mamale main thoda, oops!.😕..dheer saara greedy h...😆
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
Amor. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
are shuru hote hi finish ho gya
thats not fair

nice part
moksh thinking abt mukti
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Posted: 13 years ago
itna chota ud !!
ye to nainsafi hai !!!
but it was sweet n cute !!
Moksh ball dance kar raha tha...imagng Mukti...
i hope ye scene reality mein bhi jaldi aa jaye !!!
next ud jaldi dena... n plzz isse bada dena...
luv u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
HAILA...😲...update tha...😕...ye tho shuru hote hi khatan ho gaya...😆
but really it's a good one...👏
moksh is dancing...imagining mukti...what a beautiful scene it will be...when it will going to be reality...😍
poor mohan gets confused that is his bro is alright or he has gone...😆
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
ye kya itna sa update😳
lovely part..moksh dancing was cute...and i like mohan
and moksh...cont soon but longer part this time.

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